Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
I'm into chatting with my friends because I think it is a good way to strange our friendships and also makes me feel relaxed and happy.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually chat with my friends about my everyday life, such as homework assignments, classes, and even university professors. We usually share some interesting stories and fun gossip.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with only one person because I'm an introvert and I like relatively quiet and peaceful environments. So I usually choose to chat with one friends and I think this can deeper chatting.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to use social media because I think it's more convenient and more efficient and faster because we are not limited by time or space. We can communicate with each other anywhere and any.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Of course, to be honest, I sometimes swear argue with my friends, especially on schools. School team works. Umm. If we have very different opinions and we can persuade each other, we end up argue.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 句子表达总体可懂,但存在词汇错误("strange" 应为 strengthen)和结构问题。回答略长且重复,可用一句主题句加一到两句具体补充,并注意语法和词汇选择。练习时注意使用正确动词和简洁表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps strengthen our relationships. For example, talking about our day relaxes me and often makes me laugh, which lifts my mood.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 74.0Gợi ý: 内容具体,使用了例子,但存在重复词("usually" 两次)和轻微语法问题。可以用连接词使句子更连贯,并避免重复表达。提高词汇多样性会更好。
Ví dụ: I usually talk about everyday things, such as homework, classes and sometimes our professors. We also exchange funny stories and anecdotes, which helps us bond.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答有明确观点,但存在语法和用词错误("one friends", "deeper chatting"),句子有点冗长。建议用一句主题句说明偏好,接着用具体原因和例子,注意主谓一致和形容词/副词形式。
Ví dụ: I prefer talking one-on-one because I'm an introvert and find one-to-one conversations calmer and more meaningful. For example, I can discuss personal topics more deeply without background noise.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 观点明确且有理由,但表达重复("more convenient and more efficient and faster")且句尾不完整("any")。建议精简理由,使用连接词,并补充具体情境或例子。
Ví dụ: I prefer communicating via social media because it's convenient and instant, allowing me to message friends across time zones. For instance, I can quickly share photos or ask a question without scheduling a meeting.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且有多处语法错误和词序问题("swear argue", "on schools", "team works", "we end up argue")。需要整理思路:先给简短直接的主题句,再说明原因并举例。避免填充词和不准确用词,注意时态和动词形式。
Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes my friends and I argue, especially during school group projects when we disagree on how to handle tasks. However, we usually calm down and discuss solutions until we reach a compromise.
× I'm into chatting with my friends because I think it is a good way to strange our friendships and also makes me feel relaxed and happy.
✓ I'm into chatting with my friends because I think it is a good way to strengthen our friendships and it also makes me feel relaxed and happy.
原句中使用了錯誤的單詞 "strange",應為動詞 "strengthen"(加強、鞏固)。此外句子中連接部分缺少主語/結構一致,改為 "and it also makes..." 更通順。改正建議:注意詞彙選擇(strange 與 strengthen 意義不同),並保持連接詞兩邊的句子結構一致。
× So I usually choose to chat with one friends and I think this can deeper chatting.
✓ So I usually choose to chat with one friend and I think this can make chatting deeper.
原句中 "one friends" 是單複數不一致,應為單數 "one friend"。另外 "can deeper chatting" 語序和詞類錯誤,應使用動詞短語如 "make chatting deeper" 或形容詞 "deeper conversations"。改正建議:注意數與名詞一致,以及動詞/形容詞在句中正確位置。
× I prefer to use social media because I think it's more convenient and more efficient and faster because we are not limited by time or space.
✓ I prefer to use social media because I think it's more convenient and more efficient and faster since we are not limited by time or space.
原句中時態本身可接受,但連接詞重複使用 "because" 造成冗長且語感不佳,建議用一個連接詞(如 "since")使句子更自然。此外可簡化為 "more convenient, efficient, and faster"。改正建議:避免重複使用表示原因的連接詞,保持時態一致並使語句更簡潔。
× We can communicate with each other anywhere and any.
✓ We can communicate with each other anywhere and anytime.
原句最後使用了不完整的短語 "any",應為副詞短語 "anytime"(任何時候)。這是副詞使用位置與形式錯誤。改正建議:檢查固定搭配(anywhere and anytime),確保副詞完整且位置恰當。
× Of course, to be honest, I sometimes swear argue with my friends, especially on schools.
✓ Of course, to be honest, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially at school.
原句中出現多餘單詞 "swear" 與動詞 "argue" 重複且語義混亂,且介詞和名詞短語搭配錯誤(應為 "at school" 而非 "on schools")。本項屬於情態/動詞使用和介詞錯誤的混合,按列表優先為情態/動詞使用問題進行修正。改正建議:刪除多餘詞語,直接使用動詞 "argue",並使用正確介詞 "at" 搭配單數不可數語境。
× If we have very different opinions and we can persuade each other, we end up argue.
✓ If we have very different opinions and cannot persuade each other, we end up arguing.
原句中動詞形式錯誤,短語應為 "end up doing",後接動名詞 "arguing";此外語意上若無法說服對方才會爭論,需把能否說服條件改為 "cannot persuade"。改正建議:記住固定搭配 "end up + -ing",並根據語境正確使用助動詞和否定形式。