Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, then give two concise reasons with linking words. Use correct verb forms and vocabulary (e.g., 'talking with my friends is therapeutic', 'I enjoy listening to others', 'it helps me reflect on my experiences'). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Talking with my friends is quite therapeutic because it helps me relax and process my thoughts. I also enjoy listening to them, which teaches me new perspectives and helps me reflect on my own experiences.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with clear topics and correct grammar. Use linking words to list typical subjects and give a specific example. Avoid unclear words (e.g., 'Hobbit' seems wrong) and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: We usually talk about our social lives, work, and hobbies. For example, last week we discussed a new photography hobby one friend has started and how it affects her free time.

Gợi ý: Good clear opinion and reason. Improve by tightening language and adding a linking phrase. Replace awkward phrasing like 'through their eyes' with 'by looking at their expressions'. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer talking with one friend because quality is more important than quantity. By speaking face-to-face I can read their expressions and better understand their feelings.

Gợi ý: Make the contrast clear and correct grammar. Use linking words (because, whereas) and a brief example of misunderstanding online. Keep sentences short and accurate.

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see facial expressions and tone of voice. Whereas messages can be misunderstood—for example, jokes often come across as rude in text.

Gợi ý: Good idea but improve fluency and grammar. Start with a direct answer, then give a specific example and use linking words (however, but, so) to show resolution. Avoid repetition like 'clear clearly out'.

Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes we disagree, usually about plans or opinions. However, we resolve it by talking openly, which lets us express our feelings and clear up any misunderstanding.

× I love it because chatting with my friend is like therapeutic experience.

✓ I love it because chatting with my friends is like a therapeutic experience.

The noun 'friend' should be plural 'friends' when speaking generally; 'therapeutic experience' needs the article 'a' before singular countable noun. Use plural for general activities and include the indefinite article for a singular countable noun.

× I love to caring people through their speeching.

✓ I love caring for people through their speech.

After 'love' either use the gerund 'caring' or the infinitive 'to care'. 'Caring for' is the correct collocation; 'speeching' is not a word — use 'speech' or 'what they say'. Also include preposition 'for' after 'caring' when indicating concern for people.

× Also can't teach me how to reflect my experiences in my life.

✓ Also, it helps me learn how to reflect on my life experiences.

The original is missing a subject and has incorrect verb forms. Add a subject ('it' referring to chatting) and correct verbs: 'helps me learn' and the phrasal verb 'reflect on' plus 'life experiences' for natural word order.

× We likes to know our social life and how does the work going and how are their newly Hobbit?

✓ We like to talk about our social lives, how work is going, and any new hobbies they have.

Use 'like' (not 'likes') with plural subject 'we'. Use 'talk about' rather than 'know' for typical phrasing. The clause 'how does the work going' is ungrammatical; correct form 'how work is going'. 'Their newly Hobbit' is incorrect vocabulary and structure; likely intended 'new hobby' and should be 'any new hobbies they have'.

× We like to know each every single detail in each.

✓ We like to know every single detail about each other's lives.

The phrase 'each every single' is redundant and ungrammatical. Use 'every single detail' and the preposition 'about' plus the reciprocal 'each other's' to indicate mutual knowing.

× I would like to talk with only one friend because quality is more important than quantity and I like to talk with a friend through their eyes and I can really sense their feelings through their expression.

✓ I would like to talk with just one friend because quality is more important than quantity, and I like to see things through a friend's eyes so I can really sense their feelings through their expressions.

Use 'just one friend' for natural phrasing. 'Through their eyes' is fine but pair with 'see things through a friend's eyes' for idiomatic expression. 'Expression' should be plural 'expressions' to match 'their' and general usage.

× I like to talk people in person because I can see their expression from their face and I don't need to be misunderstood from their speech because sometimes when you through the message you is easily under.

✓ I like to talk to people in person because I can see their facial expressions, and I am less likely to be misunderstood than when communicating by message, because written messages can be easily misinterpreted.

Use 'talk to people' not 'talk people'. 'Facial expressions' is the natural phrase instead of 'expression from their face'. 'I don't need to be misunderstood from their speech' is awkward; use 'I am less likely to be misunderstood'. The clause about messages is unclear and ungrammatical — correct to 'written messages can be easily misinterpreted' and fix subject-verb agreement ('you is' incorrect).

× Yes, sometimes if we do have some disagreement or some misunderstanding, but it's easy to clear clearly out via talking because we would like to express our feelings.

✓ Yes, sometimes if we have disagreements or misunderstandings, but it's easy to clear them up by talking because we want to express our feelings.

Remove unnecessary 'do' in affirmative clause. Use plural 'disagreements'/'misunderstandings' for general situations. Use correct phrasal verb 'clear up' rather than 'clear clearly out'. 'Via talking' is unnatural — use 'by talking'. 'Would like to' implies future desire; use 'want to' for present general preference.