Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like chatting with the friends on my phone on Instagram. Nowadays there is latest technologies are used, Instagram, Facebook, Snapchat, mostly people using the Instagram and the Snapchat for the chatting. And I chat with my friends with the WhatsApp also. It's good for me because on WhatsApp we can do.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
We usually chat about with a friend what we have to do in her day and want a new thing is happen to in our day-to-day life. Everyday something new has to be done in our life. Mishappenings also and good things also to these things are we shared with our friends.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I did not prefer to chat with a group of people or with only people. I only prefer to chat with my one off best friend with whom I have. I shared all the things which I've ever done in my life. Whatever the good thing and whatever the wrong thing occur with me.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face to face as compared to social media because face to face we communicate with each other very clearly and very perfectly as compared to the social media with the eye contact, we communicate clear phase to face.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, some of the times I argue with my friends in some situation my friend is to be wrong and I was to be correct in that situation. I argue with my friend that you are the wrong in this situation and I am the correct in that situation. So in this way I will argue with my friend.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: Be more concise, correct grammar, and organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Avoid repetition (naming multiple apps repeatedly) and finish with a specific reason or example. Use linking words like "also" or "because" correctly.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends on social media. For example, I use Instagram and WhatsApp to keep in touch because they let me share photos and send quick voice messages, which makes conversation easier.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and give specific examples of topics. Use linking words (for example, and, or) and correct tense and word order. Avoid vague phrases like "something new" without context.
Ví dụ: We usually talk about plans for the day and any interesting events. For example, we discuss what we will study, share news about work, or tell each other about accidents or celebrations that happened that day.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first (preference), then support it with a clear reason and a brief example. Correct grammar (use "prefer" and singular/plural forms) and avoid contradictory phrasing.
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one close friend rather than in a group. I feel more comfortable sharing personal experiences and opinions with my best friend, for instance when I need advice about a problem.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and give specific reasons with correct phrasing. Use linking words like "because" to connect reason, and avoid redundancy (e.g. "very clearly and very perfectly"). Provide a short example contrasting both modes.
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows eye contact and clearer body language, which helps avoid misunderstandings. For example, when discussing something important, meeting in person makes it easier to show concern and understand reactions.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: Give a concise, natural response: acknowledge that arguments happen, explain why, and say how you handle them. Avoid repetitive and awkward phrasing; use linking words like "when" and "so" and correct verb forms.
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends when we disagree about plans or opinions. When this happens, I explain my point calmly and listen to theirs so we can resolve the issue and keep our friendship strong.
× Yes, I like chatting with the friends on my phone on Instagram.
✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends on my phone using Instagram.
The definite article 'the' before 'friends' is unnecessary because the speaker refers to friends in general, not a specific group. Use 'using Instagram' or 'on Instagram' for clarity and natural phrasing.
× Nowadays there is latest technologies are used, Instagram, Facebook, Snapchat, mostly people using the Instagram and the Snapchat for the chatting.
✓ Nowadays the latest technologies are used, such as Instagram, Facebook and Snapchat; most people use Instagram and Snapchat for chatting.
The original sentence has redundant 'there is' and incorrect verb forms. Use present simple 'are used' and 'use' for general facts. Omit unnecessary definite articles before platform names and connect items with commas and 'such as' for examples.
× And I chat with my friends with the WhatsApp also.
✓ I also chat with my friends on WhatsApp.
Use 'on WhatsApp' (no 'the') and place 'also' in a natural position. 'With the WhatsApp' is incorrect because apps do not take 'the'.
× It's good for me because on WhatsApp we can do.
✓ It's good for me because we can do many things on WhatsApp.
The original sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'do.' Add 'many things' and place 'on WhatsApp' at the end for clear, complete structure.
× We usually chat about with a friend what we have to do in her day and want a new thing is happen to in our day-to-day life.
✓ We usually chat with a friend about what we have to do in her day and about new things that happen in our day-to-day life.
The phrase 'chat about with' is awkward; the correct order is 'chat with a friend about.' 'Want a new thing is happen to' is ungrammatical; use 'about new things that happen.' Ensure proper preposition placement and relative clause formation.
× Everyday something new has to be done in our life.
✓ Every day something new happens in our lives.
Use 'every day' (two words) for the adverbial phrase. 'Has to be done' implies obligation; use simple present 'happens' to express routine occurrences. 'Our life' should be plural 'our lives' when referring to multiple people.
× Mishappenings also and good things also to these things are we shared with our friends.
✓ We also share mishaps and good things with our friends.
The original word order is confused. Use 'We also share mishaps and good things with our friends' to place subject, verb and objects in correct order and use 'share' in active voice.
× I did not prefer to chat with a group of people or with only people.
✓ I do not prefer to chat with a group of people or with many people.
Use present tense 'do not prefer' to match habitual preference. The phrase 'with only people' is unclear; 'with many people' or 'with several people' is clearer.
× I only prefer to chat with my one off best friend with whom I have.
✓ I prefer to chat only with my one best friend, whom I have had for a long time.
'One off best friend' is incorrect; use 'one best friend.' The clause 'with whom I have' is incomplete—add 'had for a long time' or similar. Place 'only' before the phrase it modifies.
× I shared all the things which I've ever done in my life.
✓ I share all the things I have ever done in my life.
Use present simple 'share' to describe a habitual action. 'Which' is optional; 'that' or omission is more natural. Keep tense consistent.
× Whatever the good thing and whatever the wrong thing occur with me.
✓ Whatever good or bad things happen to me.
Use 'happen to me' rather than 'occur with me.' Combine 'good' and 'wrong' into 'good or bad things' for natural expression and correct word order.
× I prefer to communicate face to face as compared to social media because face to face we communicate with each other very clearly and very perfectly as compared to the social media with the eye contact, we communicate clear phase to face.
✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face rather than via social media because face-to-face communication is much clearer; we can use eye contact and communicate more effectively in person.
Use hyphenated 'face-to-face' as an adjective and 'rather than' for comparison. Replace repetitive and awkward phrases with concise clauses. Use 'communicate more effectively' instead of 'clear phase to face.'
× Yes, some of the times I argue with my friends in some situation my friend is to be wrong and I was to be correct in that situation.
✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends; in some situations my friend is wrong and I am correct.
Use 'sometimes' not 'some of the times.' Maintain tense consistency: present simple 'is' and 'am' for general statements. Replace 'to be wrong' with 'is wrong.'
× I argue with my friend that you are the wrong in this situation and I am the correct in that situation.
✓ I argue with my friend and say that they are wrong in that situation and I am correct.
Avoid second-person 'you' when describing past arguments; use 'they' or 'he/she' depending on context. 'The wrong' and 'the correct' are incorrect noun forms—use 'wrong' and 'correct' as adjectives. Use consistent tense.
× So in this way I will argue with my friend.
✓ So in this way I argue with my friend.
If describing habitual behavior, use present simple 'argue.' Using 'will argue' suggests future intent. Choose tense that matches the context of habitual actions.