Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise, grammatically correct, and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, I have several hobbies.”), then list 2–3 hobbies using correct verb forms and give one specific reason why sleeping is your favourite. Use linking words (for example, “and” or “however”) to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have several hobbies. I enjoy watching movies and listening to music, and I also like relaxing or taking short naps. However, my favourite hobby is sleeping because it helps me recharge after a busy day and improves my mood.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and clearer nouns. Begin with a direct sentence about childhood hobbies (e.g. “Yes, I had several hobbies as a child.”), then mention the specific hobby and give details (what the toy/item was and why you liked it). Use linking words like “for example” or “because” properly and avoid filler sounds.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had several hobbies as a child. For example, I loved playing with a small toy lawnmower that my mother bought me because it made me feel grown-up and I enjoyed pretending to care for a garden.

Gợi ý: State clearly which hobby has continued from childhood and give specific information (how long, what you do together, why it matters). Use correct grammar for duration (e.g. “for about 12 years”) and coherent linking words like “because” or “so”. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have kept one hobby since childhood: playing with my neighbour. We have been friends and played together for about 12 years, and we still hang out because we enjoy chatting, playing games, and supporting each other.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use clearer phrasing. Start with “Yes” or “No”, then explain who shares the hobby and why. Use singular/plural correctly and avoid repetition. Provide one supporting reason or example showing how you share the hobby (e.g. napping together on weekends).

Ví dụ: Yes, my brother and I share the same hobby: we both enjoy sleeping and relaxing. For instance, on weekends we often take naps in the afternoon, which helps us feel refreshed and spend quiet time together.

× Yes, I have lots of hobbies like watch movie, listening to music or sleep or doing some activity but the best hobby is the best hobby is sleeping because because I.

✓ Yes, I have lots of hobbies like watching movies, listening to music, sleeping, or doing other activities, but my favorite hobby is sleeping.

The sentence uses base verbs where gerunds (-ing) are required after 'like' and in lists of hobbies (watch → watching, movie → movies). 'Doing some activity' is awkward; 'doing other activities' is clearer. Redundant phrase 'the best hobby is the best hobby is' and repeated 'because' were removed. Use plural 'movies' for general activities.

× When I were a child, I have a lots of hobbies, but especially how my hobbies is playing with the dawn because uh, when I was young, umm half on a baby lawn, my mom bought it to me and I really love.

✓ When I was a child, I had a lot of hobbies, but especially my hobby was playing with the doll because when I was young, my mom bought it for me and I really loved it.

Use past tense 'was' not 'were' with singular subject 'I'. 'Have' should be past 'had' to match time frame. 'A lots' should be 'a lot' or 'lots'—here 'a lot of hobbies' or 'lots of hobbies'; choose 'a lot of'. 'How my hobbies is' is ungrammatical; replace with 'my hobby was'. 'Dawn' likely meant 'doll'. 'Bought it to me' should be 'bought it for me'. Verb tense consistency: change 'I really love' to 'I really loved' to refer to past feelings.

× My half be that I have had since childhood to now is line with my neighbor friends. I play with her about 12 years now. I really like playing with her because we can like to get.

✓ My hobby that I have had since childhood is playing with my neighbor friend. I have played with her for about 12 years now. I really like playing with her because we enjoy being together.

'My half be' is incorrect; 'hobby' is intended. Use present perfect 'have had' is fine but rephrase 'since childhood to now' to 'since childhood'. 'Line with my neighbor friends' is unclear; replace with 'playing with my neighbor friend'. For duration use present perfect 'have played' with 'for about 12 years'. 'We can like to get' is ungrammatical—clarify to 'we enjoy being together' or similar.

× And as my family members the same halfway with my my brother all we love sleep and that's the same hobbies and we can live together and uh.

✓ Yes, like my family members, my brother and I both love sleeping; it's the same hobby, and we can sleep together.

Pronoun and structure errors: 'And as my family members the same halfway with my my brother' is ungrammatical. Use 'my brother and I' for correct subject pronouns. 'We love sleep' should be 'we love sleeping' (gerund). 'That's the same hobbies' should be 'it's the same hobby' (singular). 'We can live together' likely intended 'we can sleep together' in context; choose appropriate phrasing. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct pronoun order.