Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, I mean), and give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have several hobbies, but my favorite is football. I enjoy it because it is a team sport that improves my fitness and helps me make friends. For example, I train twice a week with a local club, which has improved my skills and teamwork.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and specific examples. Avoid uncertainty phrases like maybe and fillers. Use a topic sentence and one or two supporting details, linked logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child I loved reading storybooks and playing with toy cars. I often spent afternoons reading adventure stories and building tracks for my cars, which sparked my imagination.

Gợi ý: Clarify the hobby and describe it briefly and confidently. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "dominoes"), avoid repetition, and give one specific supporting detail or memory.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have played dominoes since I was a child. I used to play with my grandparents every weekend, and that helped me learn strategy and enjoy friendly competition.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and expand slightly with a specific detail about how you share the hobby. Use a clear topic sentence and a linking phrase to add an example.

Ví dụ: Yes, my brother and I both enjoy football. In fact, we often practice together on weekends, which makes it a shared family hobby and helps us motivate each other.

× My favorite one is football because it's, uh, fascinating for me, because it's uh, team sport and it's like, uh, rugby.

✓ My favorite one is football because it's fascinating to me, because it's a team sport and it's similar to rugby.

The errors are pluralization and article use: 'team sport' requires an indefinite article 'a' before singular count noun; 'it's like, uh, rugby' is better expressed as 'it's similar to rugby.' Also 'fascinating for me' is less natural than 'fascinating to me.' Use 'a' with singular countable nouns and choose appropriate collocations.

× Yes, I do. I have a lot of, uh, hobbies.

✓ Yes, I do. I have a lot of hobbies.

Remove the extra comma and filler; 'a lot of hobbies' is correct for plural countable nouns. Keep phrasing concise: 'a lot of, uh, hobbies' has unnecessary hesitation punctuation.

× Yes, maybe the reading a book or playing toys and so on, I don't know.

✓ Yes, maybe reading books or playing with toys and so on.

Article and noun form errors: 'the reading a book' is incorrect—use gerund + plural for general activities: 'reading books.' 'Playing toys' should be 'playing with toys.' Remove unnecessary articles.

× When I was a child, I played at Domino's.

✓ When I was a child, I played dominoes.

'Domino's' (with apostrophe) suggests the pizza chain; the game is 'dominoes.' Use correct noun form and preposition: 'played dominoes' not 'played at Domino's.'

× It's it's my favorite game.

✓ It was my favorite game.

Redundancy and tense: double 'it's' is a repetition. Since speaker refers to childhood, past tense 'was' is appropriate. Correct sentence structure: 'It was my favorite game.'

× It's my end hobby.

✓ It was my main hobby.

'End hobby' is not a correct collocation. Use 'main hobby' to indicate primary pastime. Also use past tense 'was' for childhood context.

× I think it's what from my childhood, probably.

✓ I think it was a hobby from my childhood, probably.

Word order and article issues: 'it's what from my childhood' is ungrammatical. Rephrase to 'it was a hobby from my childhood' to convey meaning clearly and use past tense.

× For example, my brother plays football and I play football.

✓ For example, my brother plays football and I play football too.

Add 'too' for naturalness; articles are fine here but repetition can be smoothed. Alternatively: 'my brother and I both play football.'

× Is it football is our favorite hobby? I think yes.

✓ Football is our favorite hobby, I think.

The original mixes interrogative and declarative forms. Use a clear declarative sentence: 'Football is our favorite hobby.' Add 'I think' for opinion. If asking a question, reword: 'Is football our favorite hobby?' but context calls for a statement.