Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: ・より自然で文法的に正しい表現を使い、冗長さを避けること。 ・「your park」など聞き手を混乱させる語句は避け、具体的な場所を示す。 ・接続詞やフレーズ（for example, usually, on weekends）を使って文をつなげ、情報を整理する。 ・文は最大5文に収め、主題文＋具体的詳細（誰と、いつ、どれくらいの頻度で、なぜ楽しいか）を含める。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually play football with my friends on weekends at the local park. We meet every Saturday morning and play for about two hours. I enjoy it because it keeps me fit and it's a great way to socialise.

Gợi ý: ・時制と文法（"When I was a child"）を正しく使うこと。 ・「so I want to play it again」のような結論は理由を補強する一文で明確に示す。 ・追加の細部（どのくらいの頻度で、どんな思い出があるか）を短く付け加えると説得力が増す。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I used to play baseball with my father every summer. We practised in the backyard and he taught me how to catch and throw. I have fond memories of those times, so I would like to play baseball again.

Gợi ý: ・意味不明なフレーズ（"I just keep eating for for me"）を避ける。文を簡潔にして理由を明確に述べること。 ・現在完了進行形を使う場合は自然な表現にし、具体的な期間や動機（"since I was a child"、"because I wanted to become a professional"）を組み合わせる。 ・補足で努力の内容（練習の頻度、ポジションなど）を加えると説得力が出る。

Ví dụ: Yes. I have played football since I was a child because I wanted to become a professional player. I train three times a week and usually play as a midfielder for my local team.

Gợi ý: ・複数形や所有格の一致（"my family have"→"my family have different hobbies" は英米差あり、"my family members have different hobbies"などを使う）と動詞の一致（"my brother likes"）を正すこと。 ・対比を明確にする接続詞（however, but）を自然に使い、具体例を追加して会話を豊かにする。

Ví dụ: No, we don't share the same hobbies. My family members have different interests: I enjoy playing football with my friends, while my brother likes reading manga and my mother prefers gardening.

× I prefer playing football with my friend on a weekend.

✓ I prefer playing football with my friends on weekends.

The noun phrase 'a weekend' is incorrect here; use plural 'weekends' to indicate regular activity. Also 'friend' should be plural 'friends' if referring to more than one; if only one friend, keep singular but then use 'on the weekend' or 'on a weekend' less commonly. Suggestion: use 'on weekends' for habitual actions.

× I usually do it in your park and you are it is very enjoyable for me.

✓ I usually play in the park, and it is very enjoyable for me.

Use 'play in the park' rather than 'do it in your park'. 'Your' is inappropriate unless addressing the examiner. Remove 'you are' which is an error. Streamline to 'and it is very enjoyable for me' or simply 'and I enjoy it.'

× When I was child I used to play baseball with my father and it was very enjoyable for me, so I want to play it again.

✓ When I was a child, I used to play baseball with my father and it was very enjoyable for me, so I want to play it again.

Missing article 'a' before 'child'. Also add a comma after the introductory clause for clarity. The tense 'used to' correctly indicates past habit; keep the rest unchanged.

× I have been playing football since my childhood.

✓ I have been playing football since I was a child.

The phrase 'since my childhood' is understandable but less natural; 'since I was a child' is preferred. 'Since' requires a specific start point; 'since I was a child' is more idiomatic.

× This is because I wanted to be a professional football player and I just keep eating for for me.

✓ This is because I wanted to be a professional football player, and I still want to pursue it.

Original sentence has nonsensical phrase 'keep eating for for me' and unclear meaning. Replace with 'I still want to pursue it' to express continued desire. Use a comma before 'and' joining two clauses.

× No I don't, my family have a different hobbies and I like playing football with my friends.

✓ No, I don't. My family has different hobbies, and I like playing football with my friends.

'Family' as a collective noun is singular in American English, so use 'has'. 'A different hobbies' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'different hobbies' or 'a different hobby'. Also split into two sentences or use proper comma and conjunction.

× However my brother like to read manga.

✓ However, my brother likes to read manga.

For third-person singular subject 'my brother', the verb must take -s: 'likes'. Also add a comma after 'However' for correct punctuation.