Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word choices (e.g., "pedal", "play with hand"). Use correct verb forms and articles.

Ví dụ: I enjoy running and playing badminton. I usually go for a 30-minute run three times a week to stay fit, and I play badminton with friends on weekends because it helps improve my reflexes and coordination.

Gợi ý: Use past tense for childhood, and make the answer structured: topic sentence + brief supporting detail with linking words. Remove filler words and repeat ideas only once. Provide a specific example (when, how often, what you gained).

Ví dụ: Yes. I danced hip hop when I was in primary school. I trained twice a week for a year, which helped me feel more confident and was a fun way to stay active.

Gợi ý: Clarify and use correct tenses. Answer directly and avoid unclear phrases (e.g., "interrupt people", "since I was chill"). If you have a childhood hobby, state it clearly and give specific details such as types of books and frequency.

Ví dụ: I have enjoyed reading novels since I was a child. I used to read every evening before bed, especially adventure and mystery stories, and I still pick up a novel whenever I have free time.

Gợi ý: Organize the answer: topic sentence then contrasting details using linking words (e.g., "however", "while"). Correct pronouns and verb forms, and be specific about who does what and how often you do activities together.

Ví dụ: Yes. My brother and I both enjoy playing badminton and we often play together twice a week with our friends. However, my father prefers basketball, and my mother enjoys baking, so we usually spend weekends on different activities.

× one of my favorite hobby for now is running because I think running can help me to burn on my calories and also stay healthy for me.

✓ one of my favorite hobbies right now is running because I think running can help me burn calories and stay healthy.

'One of my favorite' requires the plural noun 'hobbies' (singular/plural mismatch). 'For now' is better as 'right now' for naturalness. 'Help me to burn on my calories' is incorrect: use 'help me burn calories' (no 'to' necessary after 'help', and do not use 'on'). Also remove 'for me' as redundant.

× And also I like to enjoy playing badminton and pedal because I think play with hand can improve my reflex and coordination.

✓ I also enjoy playing badminton and cycling because I think playing with my hands can improve my reflexes and coordination.

Use 'enjoy playing' instead of 'like to enjoy playing' (redundant). 'Pedal' as a noun/verb is unclear; 'cycling' is correct. 'Play with hand' should be 'playing with my hands' and 'reflex' should be plural 'reflexes'. Adjust word order for natural English.

× Yes I do when I was child I do like to dancing and I start dancing when I was in a Junior School and the dance that I like it's uh, hip hop dance and also hip hop dance because dance make me feel like some relax and confidence and also can make a fun way to exercise.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child I liked dancing and I started dancing when I was in junior school. The dance I liked was hip hop because dancing made me feel relaxed and confident, and it was a fun way to exercise.

Tense consistency: talking about childhood requires past tense ('did', 'liked', 'started', 'made'). 'When I was child' needs article 'a child'. 'Like to dancing' should be 'liked dancing'. 'Start' -> 'started'. 'The dance that I like it's' should be 'The dance I liked was'. 'Make me feel like some relax and confidence' -> 'made me feel relaxed and confident'.

× I don't think so because I was uh, interrupt people, but I think I do like to reading some book like kind of novel book and I also like to playing with my neighbor since I was chill.

✓ I don't think so because I used to interrupt people, but I think I liked reading books such as novels and I also liked playing with my neighbor when I was a child.

Mixed tenses and incorrect forms: 'I was uh, interrupt people' is incorrect; use 'I used to interrupt people' for habitual past. 'I do like to reading' should be 'I liked reading' (past habit). 'Some book like kind of novel book' -> 'books such as novels'. 'Since I was chill' is wrong: use 'when I was a child'.

× Yes, I do have the same hobbies with my brother we like to play in badminton and often we also playing badminton together with her, with his friend and also my friend.

✓ Yes, I have the same hobbies as my brother. We like to play badminton and we often play together with his friends and my friends.

Pronoun and preposition issues: 'have the same hobbies with' should be 'have the same hobbies as'. 'Play in badminton' -> 'play badminton'. 'We also playing' -> 'we also play'. 'With her, with his friend' mixes pronouns; use 'his friends' and 'my friends' consistently.

× But for my father he don't like playing badminton because he like to playing some basketball and my mother also like to baking.

✓ But my father doesn't like playing badminton because he likes playing basketball, and my mother also likes baking.

Subject-verb agreement for third person singular: 'he don't' should be 'he doesn't'. 'He like to playing' should be 'he likes playing' (use 'likes' and gerund). 'My mother also like to baking' -> 'my mother also likes baking' (use 'likes' and noun/gerund).