Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Give a clear, concise topic sentence first, avoid repetitions and grammatical errors, and limit to 2–3 supporting sentences. Use linking words to add brief details (why you enjoy it, how often you do it). Focus on natural phrasing and correct verb forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy cooking in my free time. I cook about three times a week because I find it relaxing and a great way to try new recipes. For example, last weekend I prepared a spicy chicken curry that my friends liked.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer and then list 2–3 specific childhood hobbies with short reasons or memories. Avoid hesitations and repetition; use past tense consistently and linking words (for example, "also", "for instance").

Ví dụ: I had several hobbies as a child. For example, I loved cycling and often rode with my friends around the neighborhood, and I also enjoyed playing cricket because it kept me active and social.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, use correct tense and clearer phrasing. Give a brief reason and a specific example of what you read and how often. Keep it natural and avoid unclear words like "lazier time."

Ví dụ: Yes, I have enjoyed reading since I was a child. I usually read novels and science articles because they expand my knowledge, and I try to read for at least 30 minutes every evening.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and then briefly explain with a specific comparison (mention one family member's hobby). Use natural vocabulary and avoid repetition. Keep it concise with linking words like "however" or "for example."

Ví dụ: No, my hobbies are different from my family's. For example, my sister likes painting while I prefer cooking and reading, so we usually spend our free time on separate activities.

× There are so many things I like to do, but one of my best things that I really like to do, it's also called you can call as a hobby.

✓ There are many things I like to do, but one of my favorite activities, which I consider a hobby, is cooking.

The original sentence has redundant phrases, incorrect clause structure and awkward wording ('one of my best things', 'it's also called you can call as a hobby'). This is a sentence structure error: clauses are repetitive and unclear. Suggestion: simplify by stating 'one of my favorite activities' and use a defining relative clause 'which I consider a hobby' to clarify meaning.

× It's a cooking.

✓ It's cooking.

The phrase uses an unnecessary indefinite article with an uncountable noun 'cooking'. This is an article error. Use 'cooking' without 'a' when referring to the activity in general.

× I really like to do cooking whenever I got free time, so it's my hobby.

✓ I really like to cook whenever I have free time, so it's my hobby.

The original mixes present simple and incorrect past form 'got'. This is a present tense issue. Use present simple 'have' for habitual actions and use the base verb 'cook' rather than 'do cooking' for a more natural expression.

× I'm not sure about that any of one particular hobby that I I have when I was this child, but there are so many things that time I'd like to do like cycling, cooking, also sometime sports, cricket, cycling, racing, that type of.

✓ I'm not sure I had any one particular hobby when I was a child, but there were many things I liked to do then, such as cycling, cooking, and sometimes sports like cricket and racing.

This sentence contains many structural problems: incorrect word order ('any of one particular'), wrong pronoun placement, redundant repetition, tense inconsistency ('I have when I was this child'). It's a sentence structure error combined with tense issues. Suggestion: use simple past 'I was a child' and 'there were many things I liked', list hobbies with 'such as' and avoid repetition.

× Yes, one of four best hobby that I have had since childhood was reading.

✓ Yes, one of my four best hobbies since childhood has been reading.

Original has wrong word order and agreement ('one of four best hobby' and tense mismatch). This is a sentence structure and subject-verb agreement issue. Use plural 'hobbies', possessive 'my', and present perfect 'has been' to express a hobby continuing from childhood to present.

× I really like to read whenever I got lazier time, so I would say ready.

✓ I really like to read whenever I have free time, so I would say reading.

Uses past form 'got' and incorrect adjective 'lazier time', plus typo 'ready' instead of 'reading'. This is a present tense issue and word choice error. Use present simple 'have free time' for habitual actions and the gerund 'reading' to name the hobby.

× No, I do not have a same type of hobbies as my family member because every person has their unique hobbies and that unique personality so I would say no.

✓ No, I do not have the same hobbies as my family members because each person has unique hobbies and personalities, so I would say no.

Errors include incorrect article 'a' with 'same type of hobbies', singular 'family member' when referring to multiple, and inconsistent pronouns. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and number. Suggestion: use plural 'hobbies' and 'family members', and 'each person' with plural 'personalities' or 'unique personality' depending on intended meaning.