Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence naming your hobbies, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'crocheting' separately from 'cooking').

Ví dụ: I have several hobbies, but my two favourites are cooking and crocheting. For example, I enjoy cooking because I like trying new dishes and experimenting with flavours, and I crochet in the evenings to relax after work.

Gợi ý: Answer directly then give specific examples and use linking words to organise ideas. Avoid filler phrases and correct verb tense (use 'I liked' consistently).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had many hobbies as a child. For instance, I liked dancing and painting, and I also enjoyed listening to music because I found it inspiring. At that age I tried many activities before finding my favourites.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence saying which hobby continued, then explain briefly why with correct grammar and linking words. Remove hesitations and repetitions. Be specific about how often you practice now.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have continued dancing since childhood. I still dance regularly because I love how rhythm and music make me feel energetic; for example, I take a contemporary class twice a week to keep fit and improve my technique.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement about similarity, then give specific examples and use linking words to explain influence. Correct grammar (e.g., 'cooking' not 'a cooking', 'hobbies' plural) and finish the sentence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I share some hobbies with my family. For example, we often cook together at weekends, and my father loves dancing, which inspired me to keep dancing; as a result, I picked up these interests from my parents.

× Yes, I do have many hobbies among which is specially cooking and crocheting cooking.

✓ Yes, I have many hobbies, especially cooking and crocheting.

Errors: redundant 'do' not necessary with 'have', incorrect word order 'among which is specially', duplicate word 'cooking' and wrong choice 'specially' (should be 'especially'). Suggestion: Use simple present 'I have', place 'especially' before the listed hobbies, remove duplicate word and use commas to separate clauses.

× I like cooking because I like trying new dishes and I enjoy cooking and.

✓ I like cooking because I enjoy trying new dishes and experimenting with flavors.

Errors: repetition of 'I like' and 'I enjoy cooking and' creates a fragment and redundancy. The sentence ends with 'and' leaving it incomplete. Suggestion: Combine ideas, avoid repeating verbs, finish the thought (for example 'experimenting with flavors').

× Yes, of course I did have many hobbies at that time, like I used to like dancing, I liked painting, music, everything.

✓ Yes, of course I had many hobbies then; I used to enjoy dancing, painting and music.

Errors: 'did have' is unnecessary in simple past; 'at that time' is wordy - 'then' preferred. 'Used to like' is awkward; use 'used to enjoy.' Suggestion: Use simple past 'had' and 'used to' for past habits, and parallel list structure.

× Like at that time we didn't know what to choose, what we like.

✓ At that time we didn't know what to choose or what we liked.

Errors: starting with 'Like' is informal and unnecessary; tense inconsistency 'we didn't know' (past) with 'what we like' (present). Use past 'liked' and proper conjunction 'or'.

× So we had all in our hobbies list.

✓ So we included everything on our list of hobbies.

Errors: awkward phrase 'had all in our hobbies list.' Use 'included everything' and 'on our list of hobbies' for natural word order.

× Among all the hobbies that I used to like in childhood, I followed dancing as my hob I I I'm falling dancing as my hobby till now because I really like how the music just let us groove in its beat and.

✓ Among all the hobbies I enjoyed in childhood, I continued dancing as my hobby until now because I love how the music lets us groove to its beat.

Errors: 'used to like in childhood' is wordy — 'I enjoyed in childhood' is better; 'I followed dancing as my hob' is garbled; 'I'm falling dancing' incorrect. 'Till now' should be 'until now' or 'still'. 'let' should be 'lets' (present tense third person). Sentence ends with 'and' — incomplete. Suggestion: Clean up to a single clear sentence, use correct verbs 'continued' or 'still', and ensure subject-verb agreement with 'music lets'.

× Yes, I have the same hobbies as my family members because they also like a cooking and my father especially likes dancing.

✓ Yes, I have the same hobbies as my family members because they also like cooking, and my father especially likes dancing.

Errors: unnecessary article 'a' before 'cooking'; 'the same hobbies as my family members' is acceptable but can be shortened. Suggestion: Remove 'a' and use commas to separate clauses.

× So I think I got this hobbies from my parents and.

✓ So I think I got these hobbies from my parents.

Errors: 'this hobbies' wrong demonstrative and number — should be 'these hobbies'. Sentence ends with 'and' creating a fragment. Suggestion: Use correct demonstrative 'these' for plural and complete the sentence without trailing conjunction.