Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details with linking words. Correct small grammar errors (e.g., “I usually play football with my friends every weekend” and “I go to the gym every day to work on my fitness”).

Ví dụ: I do. I usually play football with my friends every weekend, which helps me stay active and social. In addition, I go to the gym every day to work on my fitness, because regular exercise is important for my health.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and reduce fillers. Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then give one specific detail and use a linking word. Fix pronunciation and grammar: “When I was a child, I liked playing PlayStation and Xbox with my friends and my cousin.”

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I liked playing PlayStation and Xbox with my friends. For example, we often spent afternoons playing Xbox 360 together, which was a fun way to relax and bond.

Gợi ý: State the hobby clearly and use correct tense. Remove fillers and be specific about times or reasons. Use a linking word to connect past and present: “I have listened to music since childhood, and I still listen every day, usually in the afternoon and late at night.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. I have listened to music since I was a child, and I still enjoy it today. For instance, I usually listen to music in the afternoon while studying and again around midnight to relax before bed.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and stay on topic. This question asks about hobbies, not food preferences. If your family shares hobbies, say so and give a specific example. If not, say you have different hobbies and explain. Avoid unrelated details and correct grammar.

Ví dụ: Not really; my family and I don't share many hobbies. For example, I enjoy playing football and going to the gym, while my parents prefer cooking and gardening, so we usually spend free time doing different activities.

× Actually, yes I do and I usually play football with my friends every weekend and also I I go to the gym every day to practice, to practice fitness that is important for my health.

✓ Actually, yes, I do. I usually play football with my friends every weekend, and I go to the gym every day to practice fitness because it is important for my health.

The original contains run-on structure and tense/context clarity issues. Separate into two sentences and use simple present consistently for habitual actions (play, go). Add 'because' to connect the reason and use 'it is' for clarity. Also remove the repeated 'I' and duplicated 'to practice'.

× When I child, uh, I like to play, uh, PlayStation and Xbox with my friends and enjoy enjoyable, uh, with that.

✓ When I was a child, I liked to play PlayStation and Xbox with my friends and enjoyed that.

Missing auxiliary 'was' required for past state (When I was a child). Past tense should be used for childhood habits (liked, enjoyed). 'Enjoy enjoyable' is redundant; use 'enjoyed that' or 'found it enjoyable'.

× Uh, so every day I playing, uh, Xbox, uh, 360 with my friends and uh, my cousin.

✓ So every day I played Xbox 360 with my friends and my cousin.

For past habitual actions, use simple past 'played' rather than the present participle 'playing'. Also remove filler words and reorder for clarity.

× Yes, I do that is, uh, listen to music, uh, when, uh, when I child, uh, for this day, I, I enjoy with the listen to music every day, uh, exactly in the in the afternoon and in the, uh, 12 AM.

✓ Yes, I do. I have listened to music since I was a child, and I enjoy listening to music every day, usually in the afternoon or at midnight.

Use present perfect 'have listened' to indicate a hobby that started in the past and continues. 'When I child' needs 'when I was a child'. Use gerund 'listening' after 'enjoy'. Clarify time expressions: 'in the afternoon' or 'at midnight' (12 AM). Remove repetitions and filler words.

× Yes, I am and my family, uh, we like uh, the chocolate and Pepsi, uh, because uh, it's sweet at the uh, I feel enjoy and uh, and fun, uh, when, when I eat Pepsi and uh, chocolate cacao.

✓ Yes, my family and I like chocolate and Pepsi because they are sweet. I enjoy eating chocolate and drinking Pepsi; it makes me feel happy.

'Yes, I am and my family' is incorrect; use 'my family and I'. 'Chocolate and Pepsi' are plural or compound; refer to them with 'they are'. 'It's sweet at the' is ungrammatical; replace with clear adjective phrase. Use 'I enjoy eating' and 'drinking' for correct verb forms and to specify actions. 'Chocolate cacao' is redundant; 'chocolate' is sufficient.