Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words. For example, mention what you cook on weekends and why you enjoy it.

Ví dụ: I enjoy cooking and driving. On weekends I usually spend a few hours in the kitchen preparing family-style meals, such as stir-fries and soups, because I find cooking relaxing and it lets me try new recipes.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific details that explain why the hobby was meaningful. Use linking words to make the answer coherent and avoid repeating phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I loved cooking as a child because I used to cook with my father, and those moments felt special. For example, we would make pancakes together every Sunday, and I learned basic techniques that inspired me to keep cooking.

Gợi ý: Avoid vague phrases and repetition. Repeat the topic briefly if needed, then expand with a specific supporting detail or example. Keep it to two or three sentences and use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘so’ to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have kept cooking since childhood because it reminds me of time spent with my family. As a result, I still cook regularly and try new recipes every month.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a specific example of a shared hobby or a recent trip. Use one linking phrase to add detail and avoid hesitations and repetition. State why the hobby is shared or what you enjoy doing together.

Ví dụ: Yes, my family and I all enjoy traveling abroad. For example, last year we visited Japan together and enjoyed exploring cities and trying local food, which made our trips memorable.

× Yes, I really like cooking and driving, especially cooking on on weekend I I usually stand in the kitchen and cook some meals all the time and just eating then.

✓ Yes, I really like cooking and driving, especially cooking on weekends. I usually stand in the kitchen, cook meals, and then eat.

Errors: repeated words ('on on', 'I I'), wrong noun form 'weekend' should be plural 'weekends' when speaking generally, awkward phrase 'cook some meals all the time and just eating then' mixes verb forms and lacks parallel structure. Correction uses consistent verb forms (stand, cook, eat) and parallel structure. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use plural for habitual actions (on weekends), and keep verbs parallel in lists.

× Yeah, since I was a child, my hobby was cooking actually, because I used to cook with my father when I was a child and that memory was a little special thing for me.

✓ Yes, since I was a child, my hobby has been cooking, because I used to cook with my father when I was young, and that memory is special to me.

Errors: inconsistent tense: 'since I was a child' requires present perfect ('has been') to show continuity to present. Repetition 'when I was a child' redundant; 'used to' already indicates past habit. Awkward phrase 'a little special thing for me' corrected to 'special to me'. Suggestion: use present perfect with 'since' for continuing states and avoid redundancy.

× It has as I said before. The cooking is is one of the favorite hobby of me. Uh.

✓ It is, as I said before. Cooking is one of my favorite hobbies.

Errors: 'It has' incorrect; 'It is' identifies continuation. Repetition 'is is'. Article and noun form errors: 'one of the favorite hobby of me' should be 'one of my favorite hobbies' (possessive + plural). Suggestion: use possessive 'my' and plural 'hobbies' after 'one of' and remove filler words.

× A Yes, I guess traveling abroad is the hobby which I and my family. My family's favorite Umm, my family and I also like traveling abroad.

✓ Yes, I guess traveling abroad is a hobby for both my family and me. My family and I also like traveling abroad.

Errors: incorrect word order and pronoun usage 'which I and my family' is ungrammatical; better: 'for both my family and me'. Repetition and fillers. Suggestion: use 'my family and I' as subject and 'my family and me' as object; place 'my family' before 'me' for natural word order.