Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 2–3 specific hobbies with brief supporting details. Avoid hesitation and redundant phrases. Use linking words to connect items (for example, “Also” or “Besides”).

Ví dụ: I have several hobbies. I enjoy swimming because it helps me stay fit, and I like cooking since I can try new recipes. I also play football with friends on weekends, which keeps me active and social.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and add a specific detail about what you did and why. Use a linking word to expand the idea and avoid repeating phrases like “I used to.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I sang in my school choir when I was a child. In addition, I often took part in school concerts because I enjoyed performing and it helped me become more confident.

Gợi ý: Be concise and reduce hesitations. State the hobby clearly in one sentence, then give a short reason and an example of how you maintained it. Avoid repeated tense mistakes and filler words like “umm” and “uh.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I have loved singing since childhood. I started in school choirs and continued by taking voice lessons, which helped me improve and keep singing as a hobby.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct unclear words. Give a brief contrast and one specific example for each family member. Use linking words (for example, “however” or “while”) and avoid vague or incorrect phrases like “loves to nut.”

Ví dụ: No, my hobbies are different from my family’s. For example, my brothers enjoy cooking and often try new recipes, while I prefer singing. My mother likes gardening, so everyone in my family has a different interest.

× Yeah, I have many hobbies, so I love to swim, I love cooking and I love to go outside, play football and.

✓ Yeah, I have many hobbies: I love swimming, cooking, and going outside to play football.

The student used inconsistent verb forms and left a sentence fragment. Use parallel gerund forms after 'love' (swimming, cooking, going) and complete the phrase 'going outside to play football'. This fixes verb form consistency and removes the fragment. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× Yeah, when I was a child, I remember I used to sing in my school. I used to participate.

✓ Yeah, when I was a child, I remember I used to sing at my school. I used to participate in school activities.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'school' in this context; use 'at my school'. Also the second sentence is incomplete—specify what you participated in (school activities). The tense 'used to' is correct for past habitual actions; only preposition and completeness were fixed. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Yeah, I love singing, so I had, I have this, I'm having this, umm, hobby from my childhood because when I was young, I used to, uh, participate in childhood, uh, in school.

✓ Yeah, I love singing; I've had this hobby since my childhood because when I was young I used to participate in school singing activities.

The student mixed past and present continuous forms unnecessarily. Use the present perfect 'I've had' to show a hobby continuing from the past to present. Replace the awkward phrase 'participate in childhood in school' with 'participate in school singing activities' for clarity and correct word order. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× No, my hobbies are quite different because my brothers, uh, love to do cooking but I don't, I love to do singing. So uh, and my mother, my mother loves to nut. So yeah. So everyone has a different hobbies at my home.

✓ No, my hobbies are quite different. My brothers love cooking but I prefer singing. My mother loves to knit. So, everyone has different hobbies at home.

Several issues: replace awkward 'love to do cooking' with 'love cooking' or 'love to cook'; 'I don't, I love to do singing' corrected to 'I prefer singing'; 'loves to nut' is likely a wrong word—'knit' fits context; article and plurality fixed: 'a different hobbies' -> 'different hobbies'. Also remove repetitive words and improve word order for natural English. Grammar problem type ID: 12