Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、简洁并注意时态与词汇搭配。避免重复（如“just to just”），把原因和频率说明清楚，使用连词使句子更连贯。可以用一个主题句+1-2个支持句，总句数不超过5句。

Ví dụ: I love dancing. I usually practice on weekends or in the evenings after work because it helps me relax. For example, after a long week of studying I spend an hour dancing to relieve stress.

Gợi ý: 回答应更具体并修正表达错误。用清晰的时间短语和准确的搭配（如 “go for bike rides” 或 “ride a bike”），并补充一个具体细节让内容更丰富。避免冗余。

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved riding my bike as a child. I often went for bike rides with my dad around our neighborhood, and we sometimes explored nearby parks on weekends.

Gợi ý: 表达要更流畅并修正语法与重复（如“since I since this childhood”）。给出确切年龄和如何发展变化的细节，使用连接词增加连贯性。保持答案自然且不超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I've been dancing since I was three years old. Over the years I have tried different styles, but I have always kept dancing because it makes me happy and keeps me fit.

Gợi ý: 回答不清楚且有很多语法和词汇错误（如“buying rental bike”、“rise together”）。应直接回答是否共享爱好，使用正确表达（例如 “we both enjoy cycling” 或 “we often go cycling together”），并提供一个简短具体的例子或回忆。

Ví dụ: Yes, my father and I both enjoy cycling. When I was a child we often rented bikes and rode along the riverside, which was one of my favorite memories.

× Yes, I love dancing. I usually dance on the weekends or the night of the work day just to just for remarkation.

✓ Yes, I love dancing. I usually dance on weekends or at night after work just to relax.

句中存在動詞名詞化與介詞使用及詞語選擇問題。“on the weekends”可簡化為“on weekends”或“at the weekends（英式）”，美式常用“on weekends”；“the night of the work day”用法不自然，改為“at night after work”。“remarkation”不是正確詞彙，應為“relax”（放鬆）。此外“just to just for”重複，需刪除多餘詞。建議多練習動詞短語（relax, unwind）與固定介詞搭配。

× I think it's a good way to release my stress as I am really overloaded with my study.

✓ I think it's a good way to release my stress as I am really overloaded with my studies.

“my study”在此語境中應使用複數“my studies”表示學習方面的負擔。這是名詞形式的數量/用法問題，影響現在時表達的自然性。建議使用常見搭配“be overloaded with my studies”或“have a heavy workload”。

× Yeah, when I was a child I loved to ride a bike.

✓ Yeah, when I was a child I loved riding a bike.

在描述過去習慣時，英語中常用動名詞或不定式均可，但“loved riding a bike”更自然流暢，且與後文“used to”搭配一致。此處為過去時態表達的自然性調整建議。

× I used to have a bike journey with my dad with a just ride around my city.

✓ I used to go on bike rides around my city with my dad.

原句中“have a bike journey”與“with a just ride”用法不自然，介詞和詞序錯亂。常見表達是“go on a bike ride(s)”或“have a bike ride”。把“around my city”放在動詞後更自然；“with my dad”放句尾作伴隨狀語。建議學習常見動詞+名詞搭配（go on a ride, take a walk）及正確介詞位置。

× Yes, I think dancing is a hobby I had since I since this childhood.

✓ Yes, I think dancing is a hobby I've had since childhood.

“I had since I since this childhood”時態和語序混亂。表示從過去持續到現在應使用現在完成時“have/I've had ... since childhood”。刪去多餘的“I since this”並改為“since childhood”。建議熟悉表示持續時間的現在完成時用法和固定搭配“since childhood”。

× I learned to dance at age of three and uh I changed my dancing style but I stick to dancing.

✓ I learned to dance at the age of three. I have changed my dancing style, but I still stick to dancing.

“at age of three”應為“at the age of three”或更簡潔“at three”。描述過去到現在的改變與持續時需用現在完成時“have changed”表示已經改變，而“but I stick to dancing”應改為“but I still stick to dancing”或“but I still dance”以表持續。建議練習“at the age of ...”固定結構和現在完成時與副詞搭配（still）。

× I think buying rental bike is a shared hobby of me and my dad it seems I uh, when I was a child we usually rise together.

✓ I think renting bikes is a hobby my dad and I share. When I was a child, we usually rode together.

“a shared hobby of me and my dad”中的代詞順序和所有格用法不自然，正確為“a hobby my dad and I share”或“shared hobby between my dad and me”。“buying rental bike”語義不清，應為“renting bikes”。另外“rise together”用錯動詞，正確為“ride together”，且過去時“rode”。建議學習代詞在短語中的正確排列（X and I / X and me）與常見動詞（ride/rode）。

× He a random story is.

✓ He told a random story.

原句語序碎片化，缺少動詞與正確語序。應使用完整句型如“He told a random story.” 或 “He has a random story to tell.” 根據語境選擇時態。建議練習完整主語+謂語+賓語的基本句子結構。