Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence naming your main hobbies, then give one or two short supporting details using linking phrases. Avoid repetition and filler words. Focus on correct verb forms and article use (e.g., “listening to music”, “cricket”).

Ví dụ: I have several hobbies, mainly playing cricket and listening to music. Listening to music helps me relax after a busy day, while cricket keeps me active even though I am not an expert.

Gợi ý: Use past tense consistently and give a clear topic sentence about childhood hobbies. Remove hesitations and redundant phrases. Use linking words like “also” or “and” to connect ideas and be specific about activities and who you did them with.

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child I enjoyed outdoor games and cycling. I often played in camps with my friends and we spent hours riding our bikes around the neighborhood.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use perfect present or present simple appropriately to show continuity (e.g., “I have been cycling since childhood”). Use correct verb forms and clearer nouns (‘pranks’ → ‘friends’). Provide one supporting detail about how it’s different now.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have been cycling since childhood. Back then I cycled with my friends, and now I still cycle regularly for exercise and relaxation.

Gợi ý: Give a concise, grammatically correct response. Use negative structure simply and add a brief reason or example to enrich the answer. Correct word choice and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: No, my family members have different hobbies from me. For example, my parents enjoy gardening and reading, while I prefer cycling and listening to music.

× Yes, I have many hobbies among them among them cricket and listening music at the top level or the listening music can relax me and the peaceful and the cricket in cricket I am not expert but I.

✓ Yes, I have many hobbies. Among them are cricket and listening to music. Listening to music relaxes me and makes me feel peaceful. I am not an expert at cricket, though.

Multiple preposition errors: 'listening music' requires the preposition to ('listening to music'). 'Among them among them' is repetitive and should be simplified. Also article and verb agreement issues corrected: 'listening music can relax me' -> 'listening to music relaxes me' (subject-verb agreement and more natural phrasing). 'in cricket I am not expert' -> 'I am not an expert at cricket' (use of article 'an' and preposition 'at'). Suggestions: use 'listening to', avoid repetition, include appropriate articles ('a/an/the'), and match verbs to singular subjects (relaxes).

× Yes, I have hobbies when I were, I watch children, uh, at that time, uh, I, I, I have to play with the outdoor camps with the friends and the cycling with the friends.

✓ Yes, I had hobbies when I was a child. At that time, I played outdoors with my friends and went cycling with them.

Tense and subject errors: 'I have hobbies when I were' mixes present tense 'have' with past 'were'; correct past tense is 'I had' and 'I was a child'. 'I watch children' is incorrect context and tense; likely meant 'I was a child'. 'I have to play' should be past 'I played'. Preposition use corrected: 'play with the outdoor camps' -> 'played outdoors' and 'cycling with the friends' -> 'went cycling with them'. Suggestions: keep past tense consistent when referring to childhood, use 'was' with 'I' for past state, and use verbs that fit the activity (played, went cycling).

× Yes, the cycling is still my hobby that uh, since uh uh, since my childhood. In childhood, I would cycling with my uh, pranks, and now I cycling all on.

✓ Yes, cycling is still my hobby; I have had it since my childhood. When I was a child, I would go cycling with my friends, and now I cycle regularly.

Tense and verb form errors: 'the cycling is still my hobby that ... since' is awkward; use present perfect 'have had' to indicate a hobby continuing from past to present. 'I would cycling' is wrong: after 'would' use base verb 'go cycling' or just 'cycle'. 'pranks' is a misheard word; corrected to 'friends'. 'I cycling all on' should be 'I cycle regularly' or 'I cycle often'. Suggestions: use present perfect for actions continuing to present ('have had'), use correct verb forms after modal 'would', and choose accurate words ('friends').

× Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

✓ Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

This examiner question is correct; no change needed. Suggestion: no action required.

× No, they all have a not same hobbies as to my uh my hobbies are different from them and even not uh even one person had the hedges same hobby.

✓ No, they do not have the same hobbies as me; my hobbies are different from theirs, and not even one person has the exact same hobbies.

Multiple structure and grammar errors: 'they all have a not same hobbies as to my' is ungrammatical—correct structure is 'they do not have the same hobbies as me' or 'as I do'. Pronoun and possessive corrected: 'my hobbies are different from theirs'. 'even one person had the hedges same hobby' contains wrong words and tense; correct is 'not even one person has the exact same hobby' (present tense if referring now). Suggestions: use negative auxiliary 'do not' with plural subject 'they', use correct pronouns ('me' or 'I do' and 'theirs'), and keep tense consistent.