Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 句子总体自然且有内容，但存在少量语法和表达问题（例如 “I feel losing myself” 不地道），句子较长且可通过更清晰的主题句与连接词提高流畅性。可把长句拆分，并用更准确的短语表达感受；同时在细节方面可加入具体例子或最近一次看电影的经历以增强真实性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy watching romantic films like La La Land and Titanic because I’m introverted and often prefer quiet evenings at home. These movies help me relax and recharge. For example, last weekend I watched La La Land and found its music and story helped me unwind after a stressful week.

Gợi ý: 回答结构良好，直接回应问题并给出具体细节（上幼儿园学画画、画动物和家人），用词自然。但可通过加入连接词使句子更连贯，并补充一两句关于跳舞经历的具体细节或感受以丰富内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I loved drawing and taking dance lessons when I was a child. For instance, I took drawing classes in kindergarten and often drew animals and my family, which helped me express my creativity. I also learned basic dance steps, and performing in small school shows made me feel confident.

Gợi ý: 回答有主题句但含有明显错误（“I used to spell reading” 不正确），且部分表述重复（relax/unwind）。需纠正词语使用，避免冗余，并在细节上更具体（提到喜欢的书籍类型或最近读过的书）。保持句子简洁不超五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. I’ve enjoyed reading since I was a child. I used to read articles, blog posts and novels, which helped me relax after a busy day. For example, I always read a few pages at night before bed, and recently I’ve been enjoying contemporary fiction.

Gợi ý: 回答直接且清晰，但存在小语法错误（如“my brother tend”应为“tends”），以及用词可以更自然（avoid repetitive 'tend to'）。建议用一两个连接词比较差异，并给出简短原因或例子说明为何兴趣不同。

Ví dụ: No, not really. Our interests are quite different: my brother enjoys playing basketball and watching matches, while I prefer reading and writing fiction. For example, he spends weekends at the court, whereas I like spending evenings working on a short story or reading a novel.

× These films help me relax and recharge and I feel losing myself in their emotional stories.

✓ These films help me relax and recharge and I feel like I'm losing myself in their emotional stories.

原句中“I feel losing myself”结构不正确。英语中动词“feel”后接动词通常用不带 to 的不定式、过去分词或系动词结构；表示“感觉自己正在……”，应使用“I feel like I am doing…”或“I feel as if I am doing…”。建议使用“I feel like I'm losing myself”以表达正在进行的感受。

× As a child, I really enjoyed drawing and learning dance.

✓ As a child, I really enjoyed drawing and learning to dance.

动词“learn”后面接动词时常用不定式“to do”表示学会去做某事。原句“learning dance”不够自然，正确表达是“learning to dance”或“learning dancing”（但更常用前者）。建议使用“learning to dance”。

× I used to spell reading articles, posts and novels, which helped me relax and unwind after a busy day.

✓ I used to enjoy reading articles, posts and novels, which helped me relax and unwind after a busy day.

原句中“used to spell reading”搭配错误，“spell”与“reading”无关。应使用“used to enjoy reading”或“used to read”。建议改为“I used to enjoy reading...”或“I used to read...”以表达过去常做的习惯。

× For example, my brother tend to play basketball and watch some matches.

✓ For example, my brother tends to play basketball and watch some matches.

主语“my brother”为第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式，即在一般现在时动词后加 -s。原句“tend”应改为“tends”。建议记住一般现在时第三人称单数动词要加 -s。

× However, I tend to read and write some novels.

✓ However, I tend to read and write novels.

句中“write some novels”语法上可行，但与“read and write”并列时，使用“some”显得多余且不自然。另“write novels”比“write some novels”在表达习惯爱好时更简洁。建议去掉“some”以使表达更自然。