Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cavabınız təbii və samimidir, amma aydınlıq və məntiqi əlaqə üçün daha strukturlaşmış və qısa ifadələrdən istifadə edin. Səslərdə çox sayda 'um' və təkrarlamalar var, bu da axıcılığa zərər verir. Hər bir hobbi üçün qısa mövzu cümləsi verin, sonra bir və ya iki dəstəkləyici detal əlavə edin və lazımsız məlumatı çıxarın. Ayrıca 'washing' sözünü dəqiqləşdirin (məsələn, 'washing dishes' və ya 'washing clothes'), və düzgün qrammatika üçün fel formalarına diqqət edin (it really makes me happy).

Ví dụ: I have a few hobbies. I enjoy reading books because they help me relax and learn new things. I also like walking outdoors with my friends, which cheers me up when I feel stressed. Additionally, I sometimes do household chores like washing dishes, which I find calming.

Gợi ý: Yaxşı başlanğıc, ancaq qrammatika və söz seçiminə diqqət yetirin. 'Drawing out of pictures' əvəzinə 'drawing pictures of nature' daha təbii səslənir. Fikirinizi dəstəkləyən daha konkret nümunələr verin və feil formalarını düzəldin (It really made me happy). Cümlələri 2-3 cümlə ilə məhdudlaşdırın və əhəmiyyətli terminləri dəqiqləşdirin.

Ví dụ: Yes. As a child I loved drawing pictures of nature, especially girls and dress designs. It made me very happy when I completed a good drawing, and I often showed my pictures to my family.

Gợi ý: Cümlələr qarışıq və anlaşılmazdır; struktur və leksik seçimi təkmilləşdirməlidir. Mövzu cümləsi ilə başlayın ('Yes, I have been drawing since I was a child.') və sonra bir və ya iki dəstək verin (məsələn, nə tip rəsm çəkirdiniz, nə üçün). Yersiz və təkrarlanan sözləri çıxarın, məntiqi keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin (for example, because, so) və zaman formalarına diqqət edin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have been drawing since I was a child. I started with simple landscapes and later enjoyed drawing cartoon characters. For example, I used to spend my weekends creating funny characters, which helped me develop my creativity and passion for art.

Gợi ý: Yaxşı müqayisə ideyası, lakin ifadə daha dəqiq və axıcı olmalıdır. 'He has a good ability of drawing features' əvəzinə 'He is good at drawing faces' və ya 'He is talented at drawing' deyin. Cümlələri qısaldın və əlaqələndirici sözlər əlavə edin (for example, like, also). Həmçinin qrammatika: 'My brother also really likes' və 'both of us like drawing' kimi düzgün fellərdən istifadə edin.

Ví dụ: Yes. My brother shares some of my hobbies; for example, he also likes reading books and watching films. He is also good at drawing faces, so we often draw together, which is something we both enjoy.

× I have some hobbies and one of them is umm, reading book and walking with my friends outside.

✓ I have some hobbies and one of them is reading books and walking with my friends outside.

Use plural 'books' after 'reading' because 'reading book' is uncountable in this context; when referring to the activity of reading multiple or unspecified books, use the plural form. Suggestion: say 'reading books' or 'reading'.

× it really make me happy despite, uh, I do it frequently.

✓ it really makes me happy, despite the fact that I do it frequently.

The subject 'it' requires the third person singular verb form 'makes'. Also add 'the fact that' for clarity with 'despite'. Suggestion: use 'it makes' and connect clauses properly.

× Then I like washing.

✓ I also like washing (clothes).

The verb 'like' should be followed by a noun or a gerund with clear object. 'Washing' alone is vague; add the object 'clothes' or rephrase 'washing clothes'. Suggestion: specify what you wash.

× It's really make me happy because when I do it and when I do a good job.

✓ It really made me happy when I did it well.

The original mixes present 'It's' with past context. Use past tense 'made' and 'did' to match 'when I was a child'. Also 'do a good job' is better as 'did it well'. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense for childhood activities.

× I have enjoyed drawing since charter they started with doubling in school and involved into scratching landscapes and cartoons For example, I used to spend weekends keeping comedy characters each often develop my creativity and passion also, uh, I really enjoy drawing cartoons, characters and.

✓ I have enjoyed drawing since childhood: I started in school by copying pictures and then moved on to drawing landscapes and cartoons. For example, I used to spend weekends drawing comic characters, which often developed my creativity and passion. I really enjoy drawing cartoons and characters.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words ('charter', 'doubling', 'keeping'). Correct structure uses clear chronological description and proper verbs: 'started', 'copying', 'moved on to', 'drawing'. Use relative clause 'which developed' to explain effect. Suggestion: break into shorter sentences and use clear vocabulary.

× My brother also really like reading some books and watching films like me.

✓ My brother also really likes reading books and watching films like I do.

Subject 'My brother' requires third person singular verb 'likes'. 'Like me' is colloquial and can be ambiguous; 'like I do' clarifies the comparison. Suggestion: use 'likes' and 'like I do'.

× I also uh, he has a good umm ability of drawing features because uh, both of us like.

✓ He also has a good ability to draw; both of us like drawing.

Original mixes 'I also' and 'he' causing a sentence fragment. Use clear subject and verb 'He has' and express ability with 'ability to draw'. Finish the thought 'both of us like drawing'. Suggestion: avoid starting with 'I also' when referring to 'he' and complete the sentence.