Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, grammar and cohesion. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and word choice, and avoid repetition. Use one or two linking words to add a supporting detail (when/so/because). Keep answers under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I enjoy jogging because it helps me relax. I usually run in the morning when the streets are quiet and the air is fresh, which makes it easier to clear my mind. Because I run regularly, jogging has become an important part of my daily routine.

Gợi ý: Focus on correct tense and vocabulary, and organize sentences with linking words (for example, because, and, so). Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. Be specific: give one or two concrete examples about football or hide-and-seek. Keep to a maximum of five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, as a child I mainly played football and hide-and-seek with my friends. I liked football because it taught me teamwork and communication, for example we would plan simple tactics before each match. We also enjoyed hide-and-seek because it was exciting and helped us bond.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar (verb forms, articles, plurals) and make the timeline clear. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add two specific supporting details (when you started and how you practice now). Use linking words such as since/when/because to show continuity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have been singing since I was a child. I started taking singing lessons when I was about eight, which helped me develop my interest, and even now I still sing often—in the shower and when I meet friends—though I no longer take formal lessons.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and natural phrasing (e.g., 'like my mom' → 'as my mother does'). Use a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific examples of activities you do together. Use linking words (so/when/while) and correct verb forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I share a hobby with my mother: cooking. She taught me many recipes, so we usually cook together in the evening—I'm in charge of chopping vegetables while she handles the seasoning and explains techniques.

× As I run, I find my mind naturally wander, so this sense of come come along with it make joking and essentials part of my life.

✓ As I run, I find my mind naturally wandering, so this feeling that comes with it makes jogging and exercise an essential part of my life.

The verb 'wander' should be in the present participle 'wandering' after 'find my mind' to show an ongoing action. 'Come come along' is incorrect repetition; use 'comes' (third-person singular) to agree with 'feeling'. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'this feeling'. 'Joking' is the wrong word; 'jogging' fits context, and 'essentials' should be 'essential' as an adjective modifying 'part'. Use 'exercise' instead of 'essentials' for meaning clarity.

× I usually like to jog in the morning when the surroundings are peaceful and when the air is fresh.

✓ I usually like to jog in the morning when the surroundings are peaceful and the air is fresh.

The phrase 'when the air is fresh' is fine but 'and when' is redundant; removing the second 'when' improves flow. No preposition error remains; this correction focuses on natural phrasing.

× Yes, when I was a child, I like playing football and also hiring sick together with my friends.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I liked playing football and also hanging out with my friends.

The sentence refers to past habits, so verbs must be in past tense: 'like' -> 'liked'. 'Hiring sick' is incorrect; context suggests 'hanging out'. 'Hanging out' correctly expresses spending time together.

× I particularly enjoy football is because of the teamwork that it involved where I need to cooperate with my teammate and it's increased our relationship.

✓ I particularly enjoyed football because of the teamwork involved, where I needed to cooperate with my teammates and it strengthened our relationships.

This describes past enjoyment, so use past tense 'enjoyed', 'involved', 'needed', and 'strengthened'. 'It involved' should be 'involved' without 'it'. 'Teammate' should be plural 'teammates' to match 'cooperate with'. 'Increased our relationship' is unnatural; 'strengthened our relationships' is clearer.

× And we also like to play hide and seek because we are we like to competing to each other to fight at the best.

✓ We also liked to play hide-and-seek because we enjoyed competing with each other to do our best.

Past tense 'liked' fits the past context. 'Hide and seek' is commonly hyphenated as 'hide-and-seek'. Remove the redundant 'we are we like to'. Use 'competing with each other' not 'to each other'. 'To fight at the best' is awkward; 'to do our best' is the correct expression.

× Yes, one of the hobby that I had have had since childhoods and singing.

✓ Yes, one of the hobbies that I have had since childhood is singing.

Use plural 'hobbies' after 'one of the'. 'Have had' is redundant; use present perfect 'have had' once. 'Childhoods' should be singular 'childhood'. Place the verb 'is' to link the subject and complement.

× I joined singing class when I was a kid and there was a place where I start to develop a interest in singing.

✓ I joined a singing class when I was a kid, and that was where I began to develop an interest in singing.

Add the article 'a' before 'singing class'. Use past tense 'began' or 'started' to match 'joined'. 'There was a place where I start' is awkward; 'that was where I began' is natural. Use 'an interest' (article 'an') before vowel-starting noun 'interest'.

× And right until now I still sing a lot even though I didn't go for a particular class, but I sing in shower, I sing with my friends and.

✓ Even now I still sing a lot, although I don't attend a particular class; I sing in the shower and with my friends.

Use present tense 'don't attend' and 'even now' for continuing habit. 'Didn't go for a particular class' mixes past; change to present 'don't attend' to match 'still sing'. 'Sing in shower' needs 'the shower'. Remove trailing 'and' and combine clauses properly.

× Yes, I have the same hobby like my mom.

✓ Yes, I have the same hobby as my mom.

Use 'the same ... as' not 'the same ... like'. 'Like' compares similarity but 'the same ... as' is the correct structure here.

× She was the one who teach me how to cook and share me her own secret recipe.

✓ She was the one who taught me how to cook and shared her secret recipes with me.

Past actions require past tense verbs: 'teach' -> 'taught', 'share' -> 'shared'. 'Share me her own secret recipe' is incorrect word order; use 'shared her secret recipes with me'.

× So in the evening we will always cook together.

✓ So in the evening we always cook together.

For habitual present actions, use simple present 'always cook' rather than 'will always cook', which implies future. The context describes a regular routine.

× I'm her small helper where I have to cut vegetable and she is my teacher where she instruct me on how to cook.

✓ I'm her little helper; I cut vegetables and she is my teacher who instructs me on how to cook.

Use 'little' instead of 'small' for a person. 'Cut vegetable' needs plural 'vegetables'. 'Where' is incorrectly used to link clauses; use a semicolon or conjunction. 'She instruct me' requires third-person singular present 'instructs' and object pronoun 'me'.