Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然且避免重复。开头直接说喜欢并简要说明频率，然后用一到两句具体细节和连接词说明原因或感受，句子不超过五句。注意时态和单复数（e.g. "on almost every weekend" -> "on almost every weekend" 或更自然的 "almost every weekend"），避免重复短语（不要说两次 "relaxed"）。

Ví dụ: I enjoy playing volleyball; I play almost every weekend with my friends. Playing helps me unwind because it gets me moving and lets me forget about work for a few hours. As a result, I usually feel less stressed and more energized afterwards.

Gợi ý: 回答应使用正确时态并避免重复同一信息。开头用过去时直接回答，如 "Yes, I liked dancing." 然后用一两句具体细节说明原因或记忆，使用连接词使句子连贯。避免句子碎片和语法错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, I liked dancing when I was a child. I enjoyed learning different styles at school because I found the movements graceful, and performing on stage made me feel confident and proud.

Gợi ý: 回答不清晰且有口语填充词（uh, I think）和拼写/用词错误（"persuading" 错误）。应直接用完整句子说明没有长期爱好并解释原因，去掉填充词并用连词组织句子。举例说明什么时候喜欢不同的活动会更具体。

Ví dụ: No, I don’t have a single hobby I’ve kept since childhood. I tend to try different things — for example, some years I focused on painting, while other years I practised dancing — so I never stuck with just one activity for long.

Gợi ý: 回答总体可以理解，但需更流畅并减少重复和填充词。开头直接说明有共同爱好，接着用一两句具体细节如什么时候一起跳舞、频率或一起做什么练习，使用连接词使逻辑更顺畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, my mother is a dancer, so I started learning dance as a child. We still practise together regularly—usually on weekends—so dancing has become a shared activity that helps us bond.

× On almost every weekends I will play play volleyball with my friends.

✓ On almost every weekend I play volleyball with my friends.

“every” 后面應接單數名詞；“weekends” 應為單數 “weekend”。另外這是習慣性動作，使用一般現在時更自然，故將 “will play play” 改為 “play”。建議：使用 “every + 單數可數名詞” 表示每一個……，習慣性動作用一般現在時。

× It makes me feel relaxed and relaxed and feel less stressed.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and less stressed.

句中重複使用 “relaxed” 是冗餘，且語序不自然。刪去重複並合併形容詞短語使句子更簡潔。建議：避免重複表達，同一意思只用一次。

× Yes, I like dancing when I was a child, When I was a child, I think dance.

✓ Yes, I liked dancing when I was a child. When I was a child, I liked dancing.

描述過去的習慣或狀態應使用過去時（liked/danced），而不是現在時 “like/think”。此外原句 “think dance” 不正確，應為動名詞或動詞過去式。建議：談論過去使用一般過去時，如 “I liked dancing.”

× I think that dance is very elegant and beautiful.

✓ I thought that dancing was very elegant and beautiful.

句子在上下文中描述過去的感受，時態應一致使用過去時；同時名詞 “dance” 在此處更自然用動名詞 “dancing”。建議：保持時態一致，過去感受用過去時，名詞/動名詞用法選擇依語境。

× No, I don't. I think I'm not a persuading person because sometimes I, I like painting, uh, sometimes I like dancing.

✓ No, I don't. I don't think I'm a person who sticks to one hobby because sometimes I like painting and sometimes I like dancing.

原句中 “persuading person” 用詞不當，語序和邏輯混亂。應表達 “不是那種堅持一件事的人”，可用 “a person who sticks to one hobby”。另外避免多餘停頓詞並使用並列連接。建議：用清晰的名詞性從句或關係從句表達性格特點，避免錯誤形容詞。

× So I'm not good at, uh, one thing.

✓ So I'm not good at sticking to one thing.

原句語序不完整且缺少合適的動詞結構。用短語 “sticking to one thing” 能完整表達“堅持做一件事”。建議：選用恰當的動詞短語來完成句子意義。

× Yes, my mom is a, is a dancer. So, uh, when I was a child, I, I started to learn dancing.

✓ Yes, my mom is a dancer. So, when I was a child, I started to learn dancing.

“is a, is a” 是重複；“started to learn dancing” 雖可接受，但更自然的說法是 “started learning to dance” 或 “started to learn to dance”。刪去重複並修正動名詞結構。建議：避免冗餘重複，學習常用動詞搭配（start + doing / start to do + to/doing 選擇）。

× And now I'm always dancing with my mom.

✓ And now I always dance with my mom.

“always dancing” 雖可表示習慣，但在正式敘述習慣時更常用一般現在時 “always dance”。若要強調正在進行中的動作可用現在進行時但需上下文支持。建議：描述經常性活動用一般現在時。