Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid wordiness and mistakes (e.g., “Majorly of my hobbies”). Give one or two specific examples and briefly explain why you enjoy them, using linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I have several hobbies. For example, I enjoy reading novels and magazines because they help me relax and learn new ideas. I also like watching documentaries on TV, which keeps me informed about world events, and listening to music to unwind.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, direct answer and avoid filler words. Use a topic sentence stating the main point, then add a brief supporting detail or example. Use past tense consistently and link ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. As a child I mainly played sports — especially cricket and football — because I enjoyed being active and playing with friends. Those games also taught me teamwork and discipline.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and be specific. Start with a clear topic sentence (use present perfect or simple present), then give a brief reason or example and use linking words if needed.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have been reading books and magazines since childhood. I started with children’s stories and now I read fiction and science magazines because I like learning new things and improving my English.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and briefly, then give a specific comparison and an example to make your point clearer. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and linking words to structure the response.

Ví dụ: No, my hobbies are different from my family’s. For instance, my parents prefer gardening and cooking, while I enjoy reading and listening to music, so we each spend free time in different ways.

× Yeah, I have many hobbies. Majorly of my hobbies include reading books, magazines, spending time watching television and listening to music.

✓ Yes, I have many hobbies. Most of my hobbies include reading books and magazines, watching television, and listening to music.

Errors: 'Majorly of my hobbies' is ungrammatical — incorrect quantifier and preposition use (Grammar problem type IDs 14 and 11) and the list punctuation and parallel structure were incorrect (26). Correction: use the quantifier 'most of' and make the list parallel: 'reading books and magazines, watching television, and listening to music.' Suggestion: use common quantifiers like 'most of' or 'many of' with 'of' plus a determiner if needed, and keep -ing forms parallel when listing activities.

× When I was a child, my hobby used to very, uh, then it is right now when, uh, at that time I used to like to play cricket and football more.

✓ When I was a child, my hobby was different. At that time I used to like playing cricket and football more.

Errors: 'my hobby used to very' is ungrammatical and mixes structures (26), and tense/verb forms are inconsistent (5 and 6). Correction: separate into clear sentences and use 'used to' plus verb-ing or base verb: 'used to like playing' or 'used to play.' Suggestion: keep past habitual 'used to' for repeated past actions and use consistent, simple sentences to express contrast with present.

× Yes, one of my hobby is that since my childhood it is reading books and magazines.

✓ Yes, one of my hobbies is reading books and magazines since my childhood.

Errors: 'one of my hobby' shows singular/plural mismatch (1 and 27) and the sentence word order is awkward (26). Correction: 'one of my hobbies is reading books and magazines since my childhood.' Suggestion: after 'one of' use plural noun, and use a clear verb phrase 'is reading' for the habit; place time expressions ('since my childhood') at the end or beginning for clarity.

× No, basically hobbies vary from person to person, so I cannot say that my hobby are similar to my family member as each and every person in my family has different hobbies.

✓ No, hobbies vary from person to person, so I cannot say that my hobbies are similar to my family members, as each person in my family has different hobbies.

Errors: 'my hobby are' mixes singular and plural (1 and 27), 'my family member' should be plural when referring to multiple people (11/12), and the sentence was wordy (26). Correction: use plural forms 'my hobbies are' and 'my family members.' Suggestion: ensure noun and verb number agree and pluralize nouns when speaking about more than one person; simplify redundant phrases like 'each and every' to 'each'.