Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Reduce fillers ("uh", "um") and avoid redundancy ("I do have lots of hobbies" → "I have several hobbies"). Use linking words like "for example" or "also" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I have several hobbies. For example, I enjoy reading self‑help books and swimming when I have free time; I also love spending quality time with my family.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid vague phrasing. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples and brief reasons. Remove fillers and vague endings like "and so on." Use linking words such as "for example" or "also" to organize ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had several hobbies as a child. For example, I loved swimming because I enjoyed playing in the water, and I also often played games with my friends after school.

Gợi ý: Give a concise topic sentence and specific details. Say exactly which hobby and how you practise it now. Avoid fillers and vague phrases like "and so on." Use linking words like "still" or "nowadays" to show continuity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have continued swimming since childhood. I still go to the beach or the pool regularly, and sometimes I combine it with a relaxing spa visit.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear direct answer, then contrast your hobbies with your family's using linking words like "however" or "whereas." Be specific about what each person does and avoid absolute phrases like "completely opposite" unless accurate.

Ví dụ: No, my hobbies are different from my family’s. I enjoy reading and swimming, whereas my family members prefer cooking and spending time together at home.

× Yes I do have lots of hobbies, some of them are reading books on self help and sometimes I go to swimming when I have free time.

✓ Yes, I do have lots of hobbies. Some of them are reading self-help books, and sometimes I go swimming when I have free time.

You used 'go to swimming' which incorrectly combines the verb 'go' with a preposition and a noun. Use the verb 'go' + activity without 'to' for activities like swimming: 'go swimming'. Also 'reading books on self help' is better as 'reading self-help books' (compound adjective before noun). Add punctuation to separate clauses. Suggestion: Use 'go swimming' for the activity and combine adjectives correctly as 'self-help books'.

× Uh, and the most uh favorite hobby of mine is spending time with my loved ones.

✓ Uh, and my most favorite hobby is spending time with my loved ones.

The phrase 'the most favorite' is redundant; use 'my most favorite hobby' or better 'my favorite hobby'. Also word order 'favorite hobby of mine' is acceptable, but 'my most favorite hobby' is clearer. Suggestion: Prefer 'my favorite hobby' or 'my most favorite hobby' for clarity.

× Umm, apparently there were lots of hobbies when I was child.

✓ Umm, apparently there were lots of hobbies when I was a child.

The noun 'child' requires the article 'a' in this context: 'when I was a child'. Without it, the sentence is ungrammatical. Suggestion: Add the indefinite article 'a' before 'child'.

× Umm, one of my favorite habit was going out for swimming as a child.

✓ Umm, one of my favorite habits was going out for swimming as a child.

'One of my favorite' must be followed by a plural noun: 'habits' because 'one of' refers to one item within a group. Suggestion: Use plural 'habits' after 'one of my'.

× I used to love playing with water and another one is playing with my friends which is part of my daily routine and so on.

✓ I used to love playing in the water, and another was playing with my friends, which was part of my daily routine.

Tense inconsistency: the sentence starts in past ('I used to love') so following clauses should remain past ('another was'). 'Playing with water' is awkward; 'playing in the water' is natural. Also 'which is part of my daily routine' should be past 'which was part of my daily routine' to match timeframe. Suggestion: Keep consistent past tense and choose natural prepositions ('in the water').

× Uh, I have one favorite hobby that is from childhood and I still love to do it, which is going out for swimming in the beach or, uh, going to the swimming pool and have, uh, some spa and so on.

✓ I have one favorite hobby from childhood that I still love to do, which is going swimming at the beach or going to the swimming pool and having a spa or similar treatments.

Use 'going swimming' rather than 'going out for swimming' and use 'at the beach' not 'in the beach'. 'Have some spa' is incorrect; use 'having a spa' or 'having spa treatments'. Also reorder clause for clarity: 'one favorite hobby from childhood that I still love to do'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions ('at the beach'), gerunds ('going swimming', 'having a spa'), and smoother clause order.

× No, me and my family members are completely opposite as they have their own hobbies but I love to read books and go for swimming while they love to spend their time cooking and have quality time with us.

✓ No, my family members and I are completely different: they have their own hobbies, while I love to read books and go swimming; they prefer to spend their time cooking and having quality time together.

'Me and my family members' is colloquial and should be 'my family members and I' (subject pronoun order and case). 'Completely opposite' is awkward; 'completely different' is better. Use 'go swimming' not 'go for swimming'. 'Have quality time with us' is incorrect perspective; if referring to family spending time together, say 'having quality time together'. Also maintain parallel structure: 'they prefer..., while I...'. Suggestion: Use correct subject pronouns, parallel structures, and natural prepositions ('go swimming', 'together').