Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 注意语法和代词使用，避免重复并使表达更简洁自然。可以把主题句放在首位，随后用一到两个具体细节支持，并用连接词使句子更连贯。例如：说明频率、对象和谈话内容时，用正确的人称代词并减少重复。

Ví dụ: I enjoy playing tennis because it keeps me fit and helps me socialize. For example, I usually play with friends every weekend, and we often catch up on each other's news during breaks.

Gợi ý: 注意时态、词汇和句子完整性，避免结尾模糊或用词错误。回答应直接说明过去的爱好并给出具体原因或例子。清晰陈述能表达“我当时喜欢跳舞，因为……，例如……”。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I loved dancing because it allowed me to express myself without words. For example, I performed at school events and received praise from teachers, which made me feel proud.

Gợi ý: 注意语法（尤其是开始时间的表达和动词形式），避免重复，控制句子长度在五句以内。用清楚的时间表达“since I was six”或“since I was six years old”，并说明现在的频率对比过去。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have been dancing since I was six years old. Back then I took classes twice a week, but now I still dance occasionally, although not as regularly as before.

Gợi ý: 避免重复短语，注意冠词和复数（e.g. "on weekends"），并尽量提供具体细节（比如打球的频率或活动时长）。将原因和现在的情况分成清晰的句子，用连接词使逻辑更强。

Ví dụ: Yes. My father taught me basketball when I was eight, so it became a hobby for both of us. Even now we usually play together on weekends for an hour or two.

× Yes, I really enjoy playing tennis because it can help me keep fit and also let me socialize.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy playing tennis because it helps me keep fit and also lets me socialize.

句中动词时态与主语一致问题： 1) “can help” 虽然语法上可以，但在表达习惯中更常用一般现在时表述常态事实，且与 enjoy 的现在一般习惯相呼应，改为“helps”。 2) “let me socialize” 中的主语是第三人称单数（it），应使用第三人称单数动词形式“lets”。 建议：日常陈述常态时用一般现在时；主语为第三人称单数时动词加 -s。

× For example, every weekend I usually play tennis with my friends. At that time I can chat with her about my news.

✓ For example, every weekend I usually play tennis with my friends. At that time I can chat with them about my news.

代词与先行词不一致导致介词或代词错误： 原句提到的 friends 为复数，但用的是单数代词“her”，应改为复数代词“them”。 建议：在指代复数名词时使用复数代词（them / they）。

× Well, when I was here I really loved loved dancing because it allows me to express myself in without words and also I was good at it.

✓ Well, when I was here I really loved dancing because it allowed me to express myself without words and I was also good at it.

时态与用词混用问题： 1) 句子描述过去的情况，应使用过去时，故将“allows”改为“allowed”。 2) “in without words” 是冗余且介词使用错误，应改为“without words”。 3) 去掉重复的“loved loved”，并调整副词位置为“I was also good at it”。 建议：叙述过去经历时保持动词均为过去时，注意介词短语的正确搭配。

× So I can always get some press or from this.

✓ So I could always get some praise from this.

动词形式及词汇选择错误： 1) 上下文描述过去习惯，应使用过去时“could”。 2) “press or” 不是恰当表达，应该是“praise（赞扬）”。 3) 介词搭配应为“get ... from this”。 建议：回忆过去经历时用过去时，注意单词拼写与词义搭配。

× Yes, dancing is one of the hobbies that I have started in in six years old.

✓ Yes, dancing is one of the hobbies that I started when I was six years old.

时态与表达年龄的习惯用法错误： 1) 描述开始于过去，应使用过去时“started”。 2) 表示年龄时应使用结构“when I was six years old”，而不是“in six years old”。 3) 去掉多余重复的“in”。 建议：表示年龄用 when I was + 年龄；叙述过去事件用过去时。

× I at that time I took license twice a week and now I still dancing, but I still dance, but not so regularly as before.

✓ At that time I took lessons twice a week, and now I still dance, but not as regularly as before.

动名词/名词与词序错误： 1) “took license” 词不当，正确应为“took lessons”或“had lessons”。 2) 删除多余的“I”，并合并重复部分，使用一般现在时“dance”表示现在的习惯。 3) 比较结构应为“not as regularly as before”。 建议：注意常用短语（take lessons）和比较结构，以及避免重复。

× Yes, my father is good at playing basketball and he taught it to me when I was 8 years old, so it became one of became one of my hobbies at that time and even now we usually play together in the weekends.

✓ Yes, my father is good at playing basketball and he taught me when I was eight years old, so it became one of my hobbies at that time and even now we usually play together on weekends.

代词、重复与介词使用错误： 1) “taught it to me” 中的“it”多余，应直接说“taught me”。 2) 去掉重复的“became one of”。 3) 表示一般性的“周末”应使用“on weekends”或“at the weekends”，而不是“in the weekends”。 4) 年龄数字在正式写作中建议写作“eight”。 建议：指人时不需要多余的“it”，注意不重复短语并使用正确的介词（on weekends）。