Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰但有语法与用词错误，句子有时不够简洁流畅。建议注意动词形式和时态（例如“I always write”而不是“I always writing”），保持句子简短并使用连接词使表达更自然。此外可以补充一两个具体例子来丰富内容（如写日记、短篇小说或博客）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. My main hobby is writing — I've enjoyed it for many years. It helps me relax and organize my thoughts, so it's very important to me. I usually write in my free time, mostly keeping a daily journal and occasionally drafting short stories.

Gợi ý: 回答内容相关但有语法和词汇使用问题（如“when I was younger”而不是“when I was a younger”；“little things”可更具体）。建议改进时用更准确的短语并给出具体例子或描述一段记忆来支持观点，同时适当使用连接词提高连贯性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was younger I enjoyed writing short pieces, like little stories and poems. I wasn't very skilled at first, but I loved expressing my feelings on paper, for example writing poems about school and family.

Gợi ý: 回答存在明显错误（“rewriting”应为“writing”；“interest come and go”时态与单复数问题；“stocked with me”不合适）。建议纠正词汇、语法并用一两句具体说明为什么写作持续影响你，比如它如何帮助你成长或改变。保持句子不超过五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely writing. It's probably the one hobby that has stayed with me since childhood. Many interests have come and gone, but writing has always been constant because it helps me reflect and improve over time.

Gợi ý: 回答意思明确但有重复与小错误（“This hobby is”重复且大小写错误）。建议删掉重复部分并扩展一句说明为什么家人不共享此爱好或写作对你的个人意义，以增加细节和深度。

Ví dụ: No, not really. As far as I know, no one in my family is especially into writing, so it's a very personal hobby. I prefer writing alone because it lets me process my thoughts privately.

× I always writing at my leisure time.

✓ I always write in my leisure time.

句中原用“writing”不符合習慣用法。動詞“always”後面需用動詞原形“write”。同時慣用介詞為“in my leisure time”而非“at my leisure time”。建議記住：頻率副詞+動詞用一般現在時（動詞原形/第三人稱加-s），並使用固定介詞短語“in leisure time/ in my free time”。

× When I was a younger I enjoyed writing little things here and there.

✓ When I was younger I enjoyed writing little things here and there.

原句中“a younger”使用了多餘的冠詞“a”。年代或年齡比較時應用形容詞“younger”而不加冠詞。建議：說“when I was younger”來表示“當我年紀較小時”。

× I wasn't always good at it of course, but I generally like putting my feelings and thoughts into words whatever I write.

✓ I wasn't always good at it, of course, but I generally liked putting my feelings and thoughts into words, whatever I wrote.

此處問及過去（childhood），前半句用過去時“I wasn't”正確；後半句應保持時態一致，將現在時“like/putting/ write”改為過去時“liked/putting/ wrote”。此外需要在“it”與“of course”之間加逗號以清晰語義。建議：敘述過去經歷時，保持動詞時態一致。

× A lot of interest come and go, but writing has really stocked with me all the time since I was a child.

✓ A lot of interests come and go, but writing has really stuck with me all the time since I was a child.

原句有兩個錯誤：1) “a lot of interest”若表多種興趣，應為複數“interests”；2) 動詞“stocked”拼寫與用法錯誤，應為過去分詞/過去式“stuck”用於完成時結構“has stuck with me”。因此更正為“interests”與“stuck”。建議：注意名詞單複數和常用短語“stick with someone”（一直伴隨）。

× No, not really. As far as I know, no one in my family is especially into writing, so I'd say that hobby is This hobby is quite personal to me.

✓ No, not really. As far as I know, no one in my family is especially into writing, so I'd say that hobby is quite personal to me.

原句出現冗餘重複“that hobby is This hobby is”，造成句子結構錯亂並有大小寫錯誤。應刪去多餘部分，只保留完整連貫的表述。建議：寫句子時檢查是否有重複片段，並確保大小寫和標點正確。

× Yes, definitely rewriting.

✓ Yes, definitely rewriting it.

原句片段不完整。問句是“Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?” 回答應表達“重寫/修改（作品）”的行為及賓語，建議加上賓語“it”或改為名詞形式“I do, I rewrite my work a lot”以使句子更完整。此處依照原意補全為“rewriting it”。