Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 句子有语法和用词错误，表达不够自然且信息不够具体。建议：1) 使用完整句子并注意时态和主谓一致；2) 用更准确的词汇（e.g. "practice yoga", "about three times a week"); 3) 增加1-2个具体细节并用连接词使表达连贯（如原因或感受）。

Ví dụ: I practise yoga about three times a week. I do it to relax and improve my balance, and I usually spend around an hour on each session.

Gợi ý: 语法和词序有问题，表达重复且不够具体。建议：1) 使用过去时描述童年爱好（e.g. "I used to"）；2) 避免重复，先给主题句再补充细节；3) 提供具体例子或回忆来丰富内容（如喜欢哪位歌手或看哪类电影）。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I used to listen to music and go to the cinema regularly. My favourite was pop music, and I especially enjoyed songs by Taylor Swift.

Gợi ý: 回答结构重复，连词和时态使用不够准确。建议：1) 开始用一条明确的主题句说明持续的爱好；2) 用对比连接词（e.g. "although", "but"）清楚表达从流行转到古典的变化；3) 增加具体原因或例子说明为什么喜欢古典音乐。

Ví dụ: Yes, I've loved music since childhood, although my taste has changed over time. I used to prefer pop, but now I enjoy classical music because it helps me relax and concentrate when I study.

Gợi ý: 语法错误多且表达冗余，逻辑不清晰。建议：1) 用一句话直接回答并用连接词扩展细节；2) 修正词形（e.g. "play games", "my brother does too"); 3) 给出具体例子（玩什么游戏），并说明何时和如何一起玩。

Ví dụ: Yes, my brother and I enjoy the same hobby: we play video games together. We usually play cooperative games on weekends and talk about strategies while we relax.

× Yes, I like yoga. Always go on the game about 3 * a week. I do some exercise to relax myself also it makes my body balance.

✓ Yes, I like yoga. I always go to class about three times a week. I do some exercise to relax myself and it helps keep my body balanced.

句中存在現在時使用與語序不當問題： 1) “Always go on the game about 3 * a week.” 時態與主詞遺失，應使用現在簡單並加主語“I”，以及常用表達“go to class/ go to the gym/ go for a game”。“3 * a week” 應為“three times a week”。 2) “I do some exercise to relax myself also it makes my body balance.” 連接兩個分句時缺少連詞或標點，且“makes my body balance” 表達不自然，應改為“helps keep my body balanced”。 建議：使用完整主語和現在簡單時態（I always go... / I do...），用正確的頻率表達（three times a week），並用連詞如“and”或分號連接句子，避免直譯。

× Yes, in my childhood I also like listen music, go to the cinema, but the listen to music is my first favor. I love pop music.

✓ Yes, in my childhood I also liked listening to music and going to the cinema, but listening to music was my favourite. I loved pop music.

句中時態與動詞形式錯誤： 1) 回憶過去應使用過去時，故“like”改為“liked”。 2) 動詞接動名詞時需使用 -ing 形式，故“listen music”改為“listening to music”；“go to the cinema” 在並列時也應改為“going to the cinema”。 3) “the listen to music is my first favor” 結構和詞彙錯誤：應為“listening to music was my favourite”。 4) “I love pop music.” 若要保持在過去背景一致，改為“I loved pop music.”（若仍指現在，則可保留現在時）。 建議：敘述過去事件時統一使用過去時，動詞後接動名詞時使用 -ing，並使用自然的詞組如 “listening to music”。

× Yes, I like music, not only in my childhood also, but now I also love music. But now I like classical music. It makes me relax and peaceful.

✓ Yes, I like music; not only did I in my childhood, but I also love it now. Now I like classical music. It makes me feel relaxed and peaceful.

句子在時態與表達上混亂： 1) “not only in my childhood also” 語序不正確且邏輯不清，可改為“not only did I in my childhood” 或更自然的表達“not only did I like it in my childhood” 。 2) 為保持清晰，可將“but now I also love music” 改為“I also love it now”。 3) “It makes me relax and peaceful.” 英語中應使用形容詞短語“feel relaxed and peaceful” 或 “make me feel relaxed and peaceful”。 建議：保持時態一致，使用正確的語序(not only... but also...)，以及常用的“make/feel + 形容詞” 結構。

× Yes, I like play games my brother also. We will play the same game in our free time. Most of the time at weekend we can relax, we will discuss also we can relax.

✓ Yes, I like to play games, and my brother does too. We play the same games in our free time. Most of the time at the weekend we can relax and talk.

句中代詞與助動詞使用不當及時態/語序問題： 1) “I like play games” 應為“I like to play games” 或“I like playing games”。 2) “my brother also” 需用代詞與助動詞補全為“my brother does too”以避免重複動詞。這裡屬於代詞/省略結構問題。 3) “We will play the same game in our free time.” 根據情境，習慣性活動用現在簡單“we play”。 4) “Most of the time at weekend we can relax, we will discuss also we can relax.” 語序混亂且重複，“at weekend” 應為“at the weekend”或“on weekends”，將“discuss” 用更自然的“talk”替代，並用連詞連接句子。 建議：使用完整的代詞/助動詞結構（does too），現在習慣用現在簡單，注意介詞搭配（at the weekend/on weekends），並用連詞連接句子使語意清晰。