Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence naming your hobbies, avoid irrelevant remarks (e.g., “I have a problem”), reduce hesitations, and give one specific detail about a recent book or a travel experience. Use linking words if adding details (for example, “also” or “recently”). Keep answers under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I have two main hobbies: reading and traveling abroad. Recently, I’ve been reading a book by Kahlil Gibran, which I enjoyed because of its poetic language. Also, I like traveling to new countries to learn about different cultures.

Gợi ý: Answer directly about childhood hobbies with a clear topic sentence. Avoid irrelevant words and hesitations. Use specific details (what you did, how often, and why you liked it) and linking words (for example, “When I was a child,” “because,” or “also”). Correct vocabulary errors (e.g., “playing soccer,” not “praying soccer”).

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I enjoyed playing soccer almost every weekend because it kept me active and helped me make friends. I remember practicing with my neighborhood team and feeling excited before matches.

Gợi ý: Respond clearly with a topic sentence stating whether a hobby has lasted since childhood. Use correct grammar (e.g., “I haven’t had the same hobby since childhood” or “Yes, I have always liked X”). Explain briefly why it changed, using linking words like “because” or “so.” Keep it concise and error-free.

Ví dụ: No, I haven’t had the same hobby since childhood; my interests have changed over time. For example, I used to play soccer as a child, but now I prefer reading and traveling because I enjoy learning about different cultures.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, grammatical response explaining similarities or differences with family hobbies. Use a topic sentence and a specific supporting detail (what kind of books your wife likes). Use linking words like “also” or “for example,” and avoid trailing off. Correct grammar: “My wife’s hobby is reading” and “she likes books about…”

Ví dụ: Yes, my wife and I share a hobby: reading. For example, she enjoys historical novels while I prefer contemporary fiction, so we often recommend books to each other.

× Yes, I have a problem. My hobby is reading a book and, uh, traveling abroad. OK. Recently particularly, I love book by Halkimi.

✓ Yes, I have a hobby. My hobbies are reading books and traveling abroad. Recently, in particular, I love books by Halkimi.

The student used 'problem' instead of 'hobby' (wrong word choice) and mixed singular/plural forms incorrectly ('reading a book' should be the general activity 'reading books'). 'Recently particularly' is awkward; use 'Recently, in particular,' for correct adverbial use. Also 'love book by Halkimi' needs plural 'books' and the preposition 'by' is fine but the author name should follow. Suggest using consistent plural for general activities and place adverbial phrases correctly.

× When I was tired, I enjoyed praying soccer and this is my hobby in childhood. Seka, it's, uh, wonderful for me.

✓ When I was a child, I enjoyed playing soccer and it was my hobby. It was wonderful for me.

The original used 'when I was tired' which doesn't match 'childhood'; correct is 'when I was a child'. 'Praying soccer' is incorrect word choice; verb should be 'playing'. Tense consistency: use past tense 'enjoyed' and 'was' for childhood. Remove filler 'Seka' and replace 'this is my hobby in childhood' with past form 'it was my hobby.' Provide clear subject-verb agreement and correct verb choice.

× No, I don't have a hobby. I've had, uh, had since childhood. My hobby have changed from childhood to adult.

✓ No, I don't have a single hobby that I've had since childhood. My hobbies have changed from childhood to adulthood.

The sentence is confusing and tense/matching issues exist. 'I've had, uh, had since childhood' is ungrammatical; clarify 'I've had since childhood' if present perfect is intended, but student means they do not have a hobby that continued from childhood. Use plural 'hobbies have changed' for subject-verb agreement. 'From childhood to adult' should be 'from childhood to adulthood.' Ensure subject and verb number match and use appropriate noun forms.

× Yes, my wife the hobby is read also reading books because she like books about uh.

✓ Yes, my wife's hobby is reading books because she likes books about various topics.

Original has several agreement and structure errors: 'my wife the hobby is' should be 'my wife's hobby is' using possessive. Use the gerund 'reading books' as the noun phrase. Verb agreement: 'she like' should be 'she likes.' Add a clear object phrase; 'about uh' is filler—replace with 'various topics' or a specific subject. Ensure possessive form and correct third-person singular verb ending.