Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use plural/singular correctly, and give one or two specific examples with a brief reason. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'because' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I enjoy collecting unusual items I find outdoors. For example, I often pick up interesting stones and trading cards because it keeps me from using my phone when I'm out and gives me something to examine and sort later.

Gợi ý: Grammar and verb agreement need attention; link ideas smoothly and keep within 3–4 sentences. Start with a clear statement, then give two specific benefits using correct verb forms and linking words like 'also' or 'which'.

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child I loved playing football with my friends because I wanted to become a professional player. Playing regularly improved my fitness and also helped me develop teamwork and self-confidence.

Gợi ý: Make the sentence structure correct and logical. Use past or present perfect for long-term hobbies, avoid contradictory statements (e.g., saying you can't live without your phone but collecting to avoid it). Give clear reasons and one specific example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I've collected unusual items I find on the ground since I was a child. I started doing it to reduce my phone use; for instance, I often pick up interesting pebbles and old cards, which gives me a reason to walk and think, improving my mood and fitness.

Gợi ý: Fix pronouns and verb agreement, and finish the thought clearly. Begin with a direct answer, then give specifics: who, how often, and one concrete detail about where or cost. Use linking words like 'so' or 'because' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, my brother and I both enjoy playing football with our friends because it boosts our physical fitness and mental wellbeing. We usually play twice a week at the local stadium, which is affordable and convenient for us.

× My hobbies is to collect some strange strange thing on the ground such as the new stone or card because I can avoid to use my phone when I'm going out. Beside.

✓ My hobby is collecting some strange things on the ground, such as new stones or cards, because I can avoid using my phone when I'm going out.

The subject 'My hobbies' (plural) conflicted with 'is' (singular); choose singular 'My hobby' or make the verb plural. Also 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'some', and 'the new stone or card' is unnatural; use plural nouns and remove the definite article. 'To collect' followed by noun list is acceptable, but 'collecting' (gerund) is more natural here. 'Avoid to use' is incorrect; after 'avoid' use the -ing form 'avoiding' or 'avoid using'. Combine and reorder for natural English and remove the stray 'Beside.' suggestion.

× When I was a child, I really liked playing football with my friends because I wanted to become a professional footballer. Playing regularly not only improve my fitness but also help me build teamwork skills and confidence.

✓ When I was a child, I really liked playing football with my friends because I wanted to become a professional footballer. Playing regularly not only improved my fitness but also helped me build teamwork skills and confidence.

The narrative is in the past, so verbs 'improve' and 'help' should be in past tense 'improved' and 'helped' to match the time frame and maintain tense consistency. Use past simple after 'playing regularly' when referring to past repeated actions.

× I really like it collecting strange things on the ground since I was a child because I can't live without using my mobile phone and it can improve both my physical and mental health.

✓ I have liked collecting strange things on the ground since I was a child because it helps me avoid using my mobile phone and improves both my physical and mental health.

After 'I really like' the form 'it collecting' is incorrect; use 'collecting' alone or better use present perfect 'I have liked' to show an action continuing from childhood. 'Can't live without using' is acceptable but here 'helps me avoid using' is clearer. Also 'it can improve' should be 'it improves' (present simple) to state a general result. Ensure verb forms match meaning and tense continuity.

× Yes, me and my brother is really like playing football with friends because it boots our physical and mental health. We usually place twice a week at the local stadium which also have a reduced rate and.

✓ Yes, my brother and I really like playing football with friends because it boosts our physical and mental health. We usually play twice a week at the local stadium, which also has a reduced rate.

Subject pronouns must be in correct order and form: use 'my brother and I' (not 'me and my brother'). 'Is really like' mixes singular verb and incorrect structure; use 'really like' for plural subject. 'Boots' is a typo for 'boosts'. 'Place twice a week' is incorrect; the verb should be 'play twice a week'. 'Which also have' should be 'which also has' because 'which' refers to 'the stadium' (singular). Remove the trailing 'and' and fix sentence punctuation.