Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap doğal ve ilgili, fakat biraz tekrar ve gereksiz detaylar var. Cümleleri daha akıcı ve kısa tut; gereksiz tekrarları çıkar. Ayrıca bir bağlaç ekleyip yüzme sıklığı veya nasıl başladığınızı belirtirseniz cevap daha güçlü olur.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy swimming at the local pool because it’s excellent exercise and helps me unwind after a busy day. I usually go three times a week, and I started swimming to improve my fitness and reduce stress.

Gợi ý: Cümle yapısı bozuk ve anlam belirsiz; ayrıca bağlaç yanlış kullanılmış. Net bir konu cümlesi kur ve ardından kısa bir açıklama ver. Çocukken hangi aktiviteleri yaptığını ve neden bıraktığını belirt.

Ví dụ: As a child, I wasn’t very outgoing, but I did enjoy playing tennis occasionally. I wanted to play more, however I didn’t have regular lessons or a partner, so I stopped.

Gợi ý: Dilbilgisi hataları (have/has, tense) ve ifade karışıklığı var. Kısa ve net bir konu cümlesi kullan; ardından neden ara verdiğini açıkla ve gelecekte tekrar başlayıp başlamayacağını ekle.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have been swimming since I was a child, but I haven’t been able to swim much this year because I’m focusing on university studies and a heavy homework load. I hope to resume regularly after exams.

Gợi ý: Anlatım karışık ve anlamsal sorunlar var. Aile üyelerinin hobilerini karşılaştırırken net bir cümle kur; ailenin mesleğini ve sizin ilgi alanınızı ayır. Gereksiz sayılar veya kelimeleri çıkar.

Ví dụ: No, my hobbies are different from my family’s. My mother is a hairdresser, and although I sometimes help her, my main hobby is swimming rather than hairdressing.

× However, I was very boring child.

✓ However, I was a very boring child.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article a before the singular count noun child and uses the adjective boring to describe the child. The correct form requires 'a' before 'very boring child'. Suggestion: always use 'a' or 'an' before singular count nouns (e.g., 'a child').

× Then other child because I want to play tennis but.

✓ Other children wanted to play, but I wanted to play tennis.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun/noun form and fragmented structure. 'Other child' should be plural 'other children' and verbs need past tense to match 'Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?'. Also the clause order and connectors are incorrect. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree in number and use past tense for past events; connect clauses with 'but' properly (subject + verb after 'but').

× Yes, I has been swimming in a pool but this year I can't swim because I can study universities or homework.

✓ Yes, I have been swimming in a pool, but this year I can't swim because I have to study for university and do homework.

The auxiliary 'has' is incorrect with the first person singular subject I; it should be 'have' for present perfect (I have been). Also modal/phrase 'can study universities' is wrong; 'have to study for university' or 'study at university' is appropriate. Use 'do homework' to express completing assignments. Suggestion: use 'have' with I for present perfect and use appropriate verb phrases like 'have to study' and 'do homework'.

× I think it is not as my mother is hairdresser and if I have a hobbies I want to do hairdresser 1.

✓ I don't think so, because my mother is a hairdresser, and if I had a hobby related to that, I would like to be a hairdresser.

Multiple errors: 'it is not as' is unnatural and should be 'I don't think so'. Missing article 'a' before 'hairdresser'. 'If I have a hobbies' has incorrect tense and number: should be 'if I had a hobby' (singular) and conditional 'I would like to be a hairdresser'. Also 'do hairdresser 1' is unclear; use 'be a hairdresser' or 'work as a hairdresser'. Suggestion: use correct articles with professions, match singular/plural, and use conditional forms for hypothetical statements.