Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Исправьте неточности и нелепые выражения, говорите прямо и естественно. Начните с чёткой темы, затем добавьте 1–2 поддерживающие детали, используя связки. Избегайте противоречивых слов (например, “cruel” вместо “creative” или “curious”), уберите лишние слова и грамматические ошибки.

Ví dụ: I have a few hobbies. I enjoy drawing and reading — drawing helps me relax and be creative, while reading lets me learn new things and unwind in the evenings.

Gợi ý: Упростите структуру и используйте правильные времена. Начните с прямого ответа, затем объясните когда и почему, добавив связку (for example / because) и конкретику о частоте.

Ví dụ: Yes. My main hobby as a child was drawing. I started in primary school and practised almost every day because it helped me relax and develop my creativity.

Gợi ý: Уберите повторы и подберите правильные слова (например, “sculpting”, “clay”), используйте простые связки и корректные эмоциональные выражения (например, “reduces stress”). Избегайте заполнителей (uh) и исправьте грамматику времен.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have practised sculpting since childhood. I make small clay sculptures because it relaxes me and allows me to express my creativity, and it helps reduce stress.

Gợi ý: Устраняйте неясности и лишние слова. Сначала ясно ответьте «no» и поясните причину коротко, затем приведите чёткие примеры хобби семьи и свои собственные. Избегайте бессмысленных сочетаний ("political guitar") и ошибок в словосочетаниях.

Ví dụ: No, my hobbies are different from my family's. For example, my parents like gardening and cooking, while I prefer reading and playing the guitar or singing in my free time.

× I have several hobbies because I am quite cruel and optimistic.

✓ I have several hobbies because I am quite creative and optimistic.

The student used 'cruel' which is an incorrect adjective in this context and changes meaning drastically. 'Creative' fits the intended idea of enjoying hobbies that involve making things. Suggestion: choose adjectives that match the intended positive personal quality.

× I enjoy drawing and reading books, so I also practice take one of these activities help me relax and keep me fit and healthy.

✓ I enjoy drawing and reading books, so I also practice one of these activities to help me relax and stay fit and healthy.

The phrase 'practice take one of these activities' is ungrammatical. After 'practice' we use a gerund or a noun: 'practice one of these activities'. Use 'to' plus verb for purpose: 'to help me relax'. Use 'stay' rather than 'keep' for oneself: 'stay fit and healthy.' Suggestion: simplify to 'practice one of these activities to help me relax and stay fit and healthy.'

× Yes, I heard one main hobby, science childhood drawing.

✓ Yes, I had one main hobby in my childhood: drawing.

The original sentence uses 'heard' incorrectly and wrong word order. 'Had' indicates possession in the past. Use 'in my childhood' to indicate time and a colon or 'which was' to introduce the hobby. Suggestion: use simple past 'had' for past states and keep clearer word order.

× I start drawing in primary school and I practice almost every day because it was relaxing and allowing me to be creative.

✓ I started drawing in primary school and I practiced almost every day because it was relaxing and allowed me to be creative.

The student mixed present tense 'start' with past context. Use past tense 'started' and 'practiced' to match 'in primary school'. 'Allowed' is the past tense of 'allow'. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense when describing past habits.

× Yes, I have been interested in sculpt sculpting since I was a child.

✓ Yes, I have been interested in sculpting since I was a child.

The repetition 'sculpt sculpting' is an error. Use the gerund 'sculpting' after 'interested in'. Suggestion: remove duplicate and use correct gerund form.

× I enjoy making smile clay sculptures because it's relaxing and lets me express my creativity as as make me very, uh, unstressful.

✓ I enjoy making small clay sculptures because it's relaxing and lets me express my creativity and makes me feel less stressed.

Multiple issues: 'smile' should be 'small' (spelling/adjective). 'as as' duplicated. 'make me very unstressful' is incorrect; use 'makes me feel less stressed' or 'relaxed'. Suggestion: use appropriate adjectives and common expressions for mental state: 'less stressed' or 'relaxed.' Maintain subject-verb agreement 'it... makes.'

× So I like it.

✓ So I like it.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable. It correctly uses present simple to state a general preference. No change needed.

× I don't have the same hobbies as my family members because we are quite different as people.

✓ I don't have the same hobbies as my family members because we are quite different as people.

This sentence is grammatically correct; subject-verb agreement is fine. No correction necessary.

× For example, my parents enjoy gardening and cooking, while I prefer reading books in the political guitar or singing my free time.

✓ For example, my parents enjoy gardening and cooking, while I prefer reading books, playing the guitar or singing in my free time.

Several preposition and word choice errors: 'in the political guitar' is nonsensical; likely intended 'playing the guitar'. 'singing my free time' needs preposition 'in my free time'. Use commas to separate activities. Suggestion: list hobbies in parallel form and place 'in my free time' at the end.