Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (use plural 'hobbies' or 'a hobby'), and avoid unnecessary phrases. Add a brief reason or detail using a linking word. Also correct tense and article usage: 'in my free time' and 'I work out' or 'I go to the gym.'

Ví dụ: I don't have a regular hobby, but in my free time I usually work out at the gym. For example, I go three times a week because exercise helps me relieve stress and stay healthy.

Gợi ý: Use past tense consistently and expand slightly with a linking word. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example or reason. Avoid mixing present tense 'like' with past timeframe.

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child I liked playing online games. For example, I often played adventure games after school because they helped me relax and I enjoyed solving puzzles.

Gợi ý: Use consistent tenses and combine sentences to avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence stating you have kept this hobby, then provide specific details and use linking words (e.g., 'so', 'therefore', 'for example'). Correct article usage ('a pet', 'the animal park') and phrasing ('take photos of animals').

Ví dụ: Yes — I have loved animals since childhood, and I still spend time with my pet. For example, when I have extra free time I visit the animal park and take photos of the animals because I enjoy observing their behaviour.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, use concise structure and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement). Avoid redundant pronouns ('my brother he'). Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to contrast. Provide a short summary statement at the end.

Ví dụ: No, my family members have different hobbies. For example, my brother enjoys chess, my sister plays badminton, and my father plays golf, so everyone has a different interest.

× To be honest, I don't have any hobby, but if I have a free time I will go for a workout to spend some time there.

✓ To be honest, I don't have any hobbies, but if I have free time I will go for a workout to spend some time there.

Errors: 'hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' when speaking generally (Article errors / plural). 'a free time' is incorrect because 'time' in this sense is uncountable and needs no article; use 'free time'. Suggestion: Use plural for general countable nouns and omit the article with uncountable 'time'.

× When I was a kid, I like to play online games.

✓ When I was a kid, I liked to play online games.

Error: Tense mismatch. The clause 'When I was a kid' sets a past time frame, so the verb should be past tense 'liked' rather than present 'like'. Suggestion: Match verb tense to the time marker; use past tense for past time references.

× When I was a kid, I like spending time with pet and right now I'm also doing the same thing. I still like spending time with pet. If I have extra time I will go to animal park to have to take a picture of the pet.

✓ When I was a kid, I liked spending time with my pet and right now I'm also doing the same thing. I still like spending time with my pet. If I have extra time I will go to the animal park to take a picture of the pet.

Multiple errors: 'like' should be past 'liked' for past timeframe; missing possessive article 'my pet'; 'have to take' is incorrect here — use 'to take'; 'animal park' needs definite article 'the animal park' if referring to a specific place. Suggestions: Use past tense for past habits, include possessive 'my' for owned pet, and use correct infinitive form 'to take' without extra 'have'. Add 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× That's totally different as I know that my brother he like to play chess and my sister she like playing badminton and my father he like to play golf. So everyone have a different hobby in my family.

✓ That's totally different; as far as I know, my brother likes to play chess, my sister likes to play badminton, and my father likes to play golf. So everyone has a different hobby in my family.

Errors: 'different as I know' is incorrect; use 'as far as I know'. Redundant pronouns 'my brother he' etc. Remove extra subject pronouns. Verb 'like' should be third person singular 'likes'. 'Everyone have' should be 'everyone has' (subject-verb agreement). Suggestions: Use correct phrase 'as far as I know', avoid repeating subjects, apply third person singular 's' and ensure subject-verb agreement with 'everyone'.