Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your response more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (articles and verb forms), avoid redundancy, and limit to 3–4 short sentences. Use linking words when listing hobbies.

Ví dụ: Yes. I enjoy listening to music and exploring new places. In addition, I often play outdoor sports such as cricket and football, which help me stay fit and socialise.

Gợi ý: Use the correct past tense and be slightly more specific. Begin with a topic sentence in past tense, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., 'also' or 'besides'). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. When I was a child, I enjoyed playing outdoor games with my friends, especially football and cricket. I also listened to a lot of music and often watched movies and TV series to relax and imagine different stories.

Gợi ý: Use consistent tense and more natural expressions. Correct word order and remove awkward phrases ('rejuvenate', 'have fun lot of with them'). Limit to 2–3 sentences and give one specific example of what you play or the kind of music.

Ví dụ: Yes. Since childhood I have enjoyed listening to music and playing video games. I still listen to music every day—mostly pop and film songs—and I often play football games on my PS to relax and have fun.

Gợi ý: Clarify who you mean, use correct pronouns and tense, and avoid fillers ('uh', 'he', 'she' confusion). Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether your hobbies match your family's, then give one or two brief specific examples with a linking word. Keep it concise and grammatical.

Ví dụ: Yes, my sister and I share some hobbies. She also enjoyed music—mostly Bollywood and Hollywood songs—and she liked playing badminton with her friends because it made her feel refreshed.

× Yes, I have hobbies like listening music, exploring places and apart from this I have a hobbies to playing outdoor games such as cricket and football.

✓ Yes, I have hobbies like listening to music, exploring places, and apart from this I have a hobby of playing outdoor games such as cricket and football.

Errors: missing preposition 'to' after 'listening' and incorrect use of plural 'hobbies' with 'a' and wrong verb form 'to playing'. Correction uses 'listening to music' (verb + preposition), 'a hobby of playing' or 'hobbies such as playing' to match noun forms, and 'playing' as the gerund. Suggestion: use 'listening to' and ensure noun and determiner agree (a hobby vs hobbies) and use gerund after 'of' or after verbs like 'enjoy'.

× When I was a child, I enjoy playing games with my friends, especially outdoor games like football and cricket.

✓ When I was a child, I enjoyed playing games with my friends, especially outdoor games like football and cricket.

The sentence sets a past time frame ('When I was a child') so the verb should be in the past tense ('enjoyed') not present. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time expression; use past simple for habitual past actions.

× I also used to listen to music a lot and love watching movies and TV series in my free time because they help me relax and imagine different stories.

✓ I also used to listen to music a lot and loved watching movies and TV series in my free time because they helped me relax and imagine different stories.

Mixing 'used to' (past habit) with present tense verbs 'love' and 'help' is inconsistent. All verbs referring to past habits should be in the past: 'loved' and 'helped'. Suggestion: keep verbs consistent with past habitual context.

× Yes I do, since childhood I have enjoyed listening to music and playing games.

✓ Yes I do. Since childhood I have enjoyed listening to music and playing games.

Main issue is punctuation and clarity rather than tense. 'Yes I do' is fine for current confirmation; 'Since childhood I have enjoyed' correctly uses present perfect to show a continuing state. Suggestion: add a period after 'Yes I do' for sentence separation. No tense change needed.

× I still listen to music every day and often play games with my PS because they help me rejuvenate as well as have fun lot of with them.

✓ I still listen to music every day and often play games on my PS because they help me rejuvenate and I have a lot of fun with them.

Problems: incorrect preposition 'with my PS' should be 'on my PS' (use of device), awkward phrase order 'have fun lot of with them' and mixing 'they help me rejuvenate as well as have fun lot of with them'. Correction clarifies subject and actions, uses 'help me rejuvenate' and 'I have a lot of fun with them'. Suggestion: use natural collocations: 'play on my PS', 'have a lot of fun'.

× Well, I distinctly remember that my sister had the same hobby just like me.

✓ Well, I distinctly remember that my sister had the same hobby as I did.

'Just like me' is informal and pronoun case is better as 'as I did' to match 'had the same hobby'. Suggestion: use 'the same hobby as I did' or 'the same hobby as me' in informal speech; ensure clarity and correct comparison structure.

× ** *** used to play music like Bollywood and Hollywood.

✓ She used to listen to music from Bollywood and Hollywood.

The original is unclear and uses 'play music like Bollywood and Hollywood' which is awkward. Assuming reference to sister, pronoun should be 'she' and collocation is 'listen to music from Bollywood and Hollywood' or 'listen to Bollywood and Hollywood music'. Suggestion: use clear subject and correct verbs and prepositions: 'listen to music from'.

× Apart from the she loved to play badminton especially with her friends.

✓ Apart from that, she loved to play badminton, especially with her friends.

Issues: missing word 'that' after 'apart from', and missing commas for clarity. Also pronoun usage is fine after correction. Suggestion: use 'Apart from that' to introduce an additional point and add commas.

× Uh, Moreover, he uh, he feel very rejuvenate and fresh while she played.

✓ Moreover, she felt very rejuvenated and fresh while she played.

Pronoun confusion (he vs she) and tense/agreement errors: 'he he feel' is wrong. Assuming subject is sister (she), verb should be past 'felt' to match past context, and adjective 'rejuvenated' is correct form. Suggestion: keep pronouns consistent and match tense and adjective forms.