Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁、语法更准确并增加连贯词。避免重复表达“by myself/alone”和“so”。可以先给主题句，然后用一两句具体细节说明为什么喜欢，例如完成后的感受或常做的活动。注意人称和时态一致（people → people who, I like → I enjoy）。

Ví dụ: I enjoy building LEGO models. I like it because constructing something piece by piece gives me a strong sense of achievement, especially when a difficult model is completed. For example, I recently finished a spaceship set that took me three evenings, and I felt very proud of the result.

Gợi ý: 回答中有时态、人称和句子结构错误，表达也重复。应使用过去时描述童年，句子更连贯并补充具体细节（例如最喜欢的玩具或与谁一起玩）。可加入连接词如 'because'、'so'、'and' 但不要滥用。

Ví dụ: Yes. When I was a child, I loved playing with toy cars. My mother often bought me different models, and I enjoyed making little races with my friends. I remember breaking many cars because I was rough, but I still loved collecting them.

Gợi ý: 回答内容有用但表达重复且语法不准，应改用更自然的句型并避免多次重复同一短语。使用过去时描述背景，然后说明对现在的影响，加入连接词（therefore, so, which）使逻辑更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have enjoyed reading since childhood. Because my family was poor, I often went to our community library to borrow books, which helped me learn a lot. As a result, reading has improved my studies and remained an important hobby for me.

Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰但句子衔接可更自然。避免用 but 和 while 同时表示对比，尽量合并成一到两句话并给出具体例子（常做的室内运动或频率）。可用连接词如 'however' 或 'while' 但结构要紧凑。

Ví dụ: No, we don't. My family prefers outdoor activities like walking, while I prefer exercising at home. For example, I usually do a 30-minute indoor workout or yoga three times a week because it's more convenient and relaxing for me.

× My hobby is playing Legos and making models because some of people who like to build things by my own and I'm proud of it by myself after I finish it, so it gives me a strong sense of pride and achievement.

✓ My hobby is playing with Lego and making models because I like to build things on my own, and I'm proud of them after I finish, so it gives me a strong sense of pride and achievement.

句中“playing Legos”应改为“playing with Lego”（或“playing with Legos”）表示玩乐高；“by my own”错误，正确表达为“on my own”；“proud of it by myself”重复且不自然，应为“proud of them”指代所做的模型。整体使用动名词短语和代词需注意搭配和指代。

× Yes, when I was a child, my hobby is to play with car models because I like to see cars When I was small and I buy, my mom buys me many cars, but because I was small so I crashed and destroyed a lot of cars and I still love it now.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my hobby was playing with car models because I liked to look at cars when I was little and my mom used to buy me many, but because I was small I crashed and destroyed a lot of them. I still love them now.

时态和主谓一致问题：句子在叙述过去时却混用现在时（“my hobby is”应为“my hobby was”，“I like”改为“I liked”，“my mom buys me”改为“my mom used to buy me”）。另外代词指代和句子连接需要调整，且英文中应使用复数代词“them”指代多辆车。建议把描述的时间一致地使用过去时。

× Yes, my favorite hobby since childhood is reading because when I was small our family was poor and I can't do anything and I can't do anything. So I would like to go to our community's library and borrow books to read. That gives me many knowledge and let me study well today.

✓ Yes, my favorite hobby since childhood has been reading because when I was small our family was poor and I couldn't do much. So I liked to go to our community library and borrow books to read. That gave me a lot of knowledge and helped me study well today.

时态不一致：谈及从小到现在持续的爱好用现在完成时更合适（has been reading）。叙述过去经历应使用过去时（can't → couldn't；would like 在此表过去习惯可改为liked）；“many knowledge”是错误搭配，应为“a lot of knowledge”；“let me study well today”应更自然为“helped me study well today”。建议注意完成时和一般过去时的正确使用以及不可数名词搭配。

× No, my family members usually prefer going out for walks and or other outdoor activities. But while I prefer staying at home and doing sports, for example, I often exercise indoors or do some workouts because I find them more convenient and relaxing.

✓ No, my family members usually prefer going out for walks or other outdoor activities. But I prefer staying at home and doing exercise; for example, I often work out indoors because I find it more convenient and relaxing.

介词和连词使用问题：原句“going out for walks and or other”重复且“and or”错误，改为“or”。“doing sports”可以，但与“staying at home”搭配更自然的是“doing exercise”或“working out”；“do some workouts”可简化为“work out”；代词“them”指代模糊，改为“it”指“exercise”。建议检查连词搭配、介词短语和代词指代的一致性。