Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid filler words like “yeah, no” and repetition.

Ví dụ: I have two main hobbies. First, I enjoy playing football because it helps me stay active and social with friends. Second, I do regular exercise to maintain my fitness, usually by running and strength training three times a week.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and avoid hesitation. Begin with a clear past-tense sentence, then give a specific example and one brief reason using a linking word.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to love playing football when I was a child. For example, during PE lessons I always chose football because I enjoyed the teamwork and the competition it provided.

Gợi ý: Organize ideas and correct verb forms. State the hobby, then explain continuity and give one specific detail about how you practice it now. Avoid long, unstructured sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have exercised daily since childhood and I still do. In fact, I run my own gym and work as a freelance fitness trainer, so I train clients three to five times a week and help them reach their fitness goals.

Gợi ý: Keep the answer simple and grammatically correct. Give one clear contrast and a specific example of your family’s hobbies using linking words like “however” or “while.” Avoid vague phrases like “old era.”

Ví dụ: No, my hobbies differ from my family’s. While I prefer sports and fitness, my parents enjoy reading books and spending time studying literature at home.

× I have two hobbies. One is to play football and second one is I love to do regular exercise to stay fit myself because it is very necessary to be healthy.

✓ I have two hobbies. One is playing football and the second is doing regular exercise to stay fit because it is very necessary to be healthy.

Lists of hobbies should use parallel forms; use gerunds for activities ('playing', 'doing') and include 'the' before 'second' for clarity. Remove redundant 'myself'. ID:1

× Yeah, when I were a child, I love to play football.

✓ Yeah, when I was a child, I loved to play football.

The time marker 'when I was a child' requires past tense; use 'was' (singular) and 'loved' to match past timeframe. ID:5

× Football was my favorite game, uh, usually in my game period.

✓ Football was my favorite game, usually during my games period.

Use 'during' for time spans and pluralize 'games period' or better 'physical education period'; 'the' not necessary here. Corrects article/preposition choice. ID:22

× Uh, whenever our, uh, physical education teacher took us to the ground, then I always prefer to play football.

✓ Whenever our physical education teacher took us to the ground, I always preferred to play football.

Pronoun use is acceptable but tense consistency: 'took' is past, so 'preferred' should be past. Remove filler 'then' and extra commas. ID:12

× Yes, I love to do exercise daily and still I'm doing that and even I am.

✓ Yes, I love to exercise daily and I still do.

Use simple present for habitual actions: 'love to exercise' or 'love exercising'; 'still I am' is redundant and ungrammatical. ID:6

× I'm running my own gym and I'm also a freelance fitness trainer.

✓ I run my own gym and I am also a freelance fitness trainer.

Present simple ('I run') is more natural for occupations/ownership; 'I'm running' suggests temporary. Articles are correct; change tense for appropriateness. ID:22

× I used to give fitness training to my clients and almost all of my clients getting their desired result whatever they want.

✓ I used to give fitness training to my clients, and almost all of my clients got their desired results.

'Used to' indicates past habitual action; follow with past simple 'got'. Use plural 'results' and remove 'whatever they want' which is vague and wrong tense. ID:5

× Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

✓ Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct. ID:1

× No, my hobbies were different are different from my family members because they are from old era and I'm from a new era so they don't have that type of hobby that I have.

✓ No, my hobbies are different from my family members' because they come from an older generation and I'm from a newer one, so they do not have the same hobbies as I do.

Original mixes past and present and has word order problems. Use consistent present tense for general statements, change 'old era'/'new era' to 'older generation'/'newer one', and possessive for 'family members'. ID:26

× So they love to read books. They are my parents are used to of.

✓ They love to read books. My parents are used to that.

Original has redundant 'They are my parents are used to of.' Fix pronoun/subject placement and use 'used to that' or better 'are used to it'. Remove unnecessary fragments. ID:12