Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like reading because reading is can make me to know a lot of knowledge and know different stories. I'm can feel happy when I was reading.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I prefer to reading on paper because of my reading. I prefer to use my eyes and use my hand. I need to touch the paper and it's can make me feel this story more happy to me.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
I think to learn learning and when I were learning somethings I need to reading the book very carefully, but when I just want to relaxed I usually reading not carefully and just.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 语法和时态错误较多,句子结构不够自然,表达有重复。回答应直接回应问题并加一两句具体细节,使用正确时态和主谓一致,避免多余词汇。例如用现在时描述习惯,用连接词使句子流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. It helps me learn new things and explore different stories, and I often feel happy and relaxed when I read.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 表达不够简洁,存在语法和用词错误(如不定式、代词和形容词搭配)。应明确给出偏好,并用一两句具体原因支持,使用连接词如“because”或“because of”。避免重复。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because I like the tactile feel of pages. Turning pages helps me focus better, and I find print less tiring for long reading sessions.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答含混且语法错误严重,时态和词形需改正。应该先给出明确对比(需要仔细阅读的情况和不需要的情况),然后用具体例子说明,如工作或考试时需仔细阅读,休闲阅读可随意。使用连接词如“when”或“but”。
Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I'm studying for exams or working on a project because I must understand details. But when I'm reading for pleasure, I usually skim and don't focus on every detail.
× Yes, I like reading because reading is can make me to know a lot of knowledge and know different stories.
✓ Yes, I like reading because reading can help me learn a lot and know different stories.
句中出现了不正确的动词形式和多余的助动/不定式结构:“reading is can make me to know” 不符合英语语法。应使用“can help me learn”或“helps me learn”。建议:不要同时使用“is”与情态动词“can”,并把“to know”改为动词不带 to 的原形“learn”或“know”。
× I'm can feel happy when I was reading.
✓ I can feel happy when I read.
原句混合使用了现在时与过去时('I'm can' 和 'was'),且 'I'm can' 是不正确的助动词结构。应统一使用一般现在时描述习惯性动作:'I can feel happy when I read'。建议:关于习惯和经常发生的事用一般现在时。
× I prefer to reading on paper because of my reading.
✓ I prefer reading on paper because I enjoy reading that way.
动词 prefer 后可接动名词(reading)或不定式(to read),但不能写成“prefer to reading”。此外原句“because of my reading”不自然,应改为说明原因。建议:使用 'prefer reading' 或 'prefer to read'。
× I prefer to use my eyes and use my hand.
✓ I prefer to use my eyes and my hands.
原句中 'use my hand' 与 'eyes' 搭配不一致,且通常两只手都用应为复数'hands'。建议:保持词数一致并使用常见表达 'use my eyes and my hands'。
× I need to touch the paper and it's can make me feel this story more happy to me.
✓ I need to touch the paper and it makes me feel happier about the story.
句中 'it's can' 是错误的助动词组合,应使用简单现在时 'it makes'。此外 'more happy to me' 不自然,应改为比较级 'happier' 或 'feel happier about the story'。建议:使用 'it makes me feel happier'。
× I think to learn learning and when I were learning somethings I need to reading the book very carefully,
✓ I think when I am learning and when I am studying something, I need to read the book very carefully,
原句有多个时态和形式错误:'I think to learn learning' 不正确,重复使用 'learn/learning';'when I were' 使用了过去式 'were',应为现在进行时或一般现在时;'need to reading' 中动词形式错误,应为 'need to read' 或 'need to be reading'(但此处用 'read' 更自然)。建议:用 'when I am learning' 或 'when I study',并用 'need to read'。
× but when I just want to relaxed I usually reading not carefully and just.
✓ but when I just want to relax, I usually don't read carefully.
原句 'want to relaxed' 用法错误,动词不定式后应接动词原形 'relax';'I usually reading not carefully' 时态错误,应为否定的简单现在 'I usually don't read carefully'。最后的 'and just.' 不完整,应删除或补全。建议:使用 'want to relax' 和 'don't read carefully'。