Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
I like letting because it's make me feel calm and, uh, it's make me feel focused on the thing that I.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I prefer to read on paper, uh, because uh, I can touch a paper, I like picture of it and uh, currently I usually raise on the skin more than paper.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
When do you need to reach us? Uh, I list carefully when I leave for knowledge for a check and exam and be not uh, I lead on a cartoon, uh, for entertainment.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: ปรับโครงสร้างประโยคให้ชัดเจน ใช้คำศัพท์ถูกต้อง และลดคำย้อนไป-มา (uh) ให้คำตอบเป็นประโยคสั้น ๆ ไม่เกิน 3-4 ประโยค เน้นประโยคหัวข้อแล้วตามด้วยเหตุผล/ตัวอย่างสั้น ๆ ใช้คำว่า "reading" แทน "letting" และแก้ไวยากรณ์ เช่น "it makes me" รวมถึงฝึกความคล่องแคล่วเพื่อลดการหยุดชั่วคราว
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. It makes me feel calm and helps me concentrate on the topic, so I can relax and learn at the same time.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 38.0Gợi ý: ตอบตรงคำถามและจัดลำดับเหตุผลโดยใช้ linking words เช่น "because" และ "however" แก้คำศัพท์ผิด (เช่น "touch paper", "pictures") และประโยคที่ไม่สมเหตุสมผล ("raise on the skin") ให้ชัดเจนว่าชอบอะไรและทำไม หลีกเลี่ยงคำเติมเสียง (uh) และจำกัดความยาวไม่เกิน 4-5 ประโยค
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because I like the feel of the pages and the printed pictures, which make reading more enjoyable. However, I sometimes read on a screen for convenience when I'm traveling.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: ทำความเข้าใจกับคำถามก่อนตอบ เริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวข้อแล้วให้ตัวอย่างเฉพาะเจาะจง ใช้คำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น "read carefully" และ "read for fun" แสดงความแตกต่างระหว่างกรณีที่ต้องอ่านละเอียดกับกรณีที่ไม่ต้องอ่านละเอียด และใช้ linking words เช่น "when" หรือ "but"
Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I'm studying for tests or checking important information, because accuracy matters. But when I'm reading comics or novels for fun, I don't read as thoroughly and just enjoy the story.
× I like letting because it's make me feel calm and, uh, it's make me feel focused on the thing that I.
✓ I like reading because it makes me feel calm and it makes me feel focused on what I am doing.
The student used 'letting' instead of the gerund 'reading' (correct -ing form) and omitted third person singular agreement ('it makes' not 'it's make'). Also sentence ended incompletely; replaced vague 'the thing that I' with 'what I am doing' to complete the idea. Suggestion: use correct gerund for activities and ensure subject-verb agreement with third person singular 'it makes'.
× I prefer to read on paper, uh, because uh, I can touch a paper, I like picture of it and uh, currently I usually raise on the skin more than paper.
✓ I prefer to read on paper because I can touch the paper, I like its pictures, and currently I usually read on a screen more than on paper.
Prepositions and word choices were incorrect: use 'on paper' and 'on a screen' for reading mediums, 'touch the paper' (not 'a paper'), and 'pictures' with possessive 'its' for illustrations. 'Raise on the skin' is incorrect; likely meant 'read on the screen'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions 'on' for devices/surfaces and accurate verbs 'read'.
× When do you need to reach us? Uh, I list carefully when I leave for knowledge for a check and exam and be not uh, I lead on a cartoon, uh, for entertainment.
✓ When do you need to read carefully? I read carefully when I study for tests and exams, and when I'm not studying I read comics or cartoons for entertainment.
Multiple present-tense and word-choice errors: 'reach' should be 'read', 'list' -> 'read', 'leave for knowledge for a check' -> 'study for tests', 'be not' -> 'when I'm not', 'lead on a cartoon' -> 'read comics or cartoons'. Correct present simple for habitual actions ('I read') and use contractions or 'I am' for present continuous if needed. Suggestion: use the verb 'read' consistently and correct tense forms for habits and temporary situations.'