Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaiki kejelasan dan keteraturan jawaban: mulai dengan kalimat topik yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan, lalu tambahkan 1–2 detail spesifik yang relevan dan gunakan penghubung. Perhatikan tata bahasa (waktu dan struktur kalimat) serta hilangkan pengulangan. Misalnya jelaskan sejak kapan Anda suka membaca dan jenis buku yang Anda nikmati dengan kalimat yang jelas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. I have loved books since I was a child because reading helped me relax and escape daily stress. In my free time I usually read novels, especially classics and mysteries, depending on my mood.

Gợi ý: Jaga kepadatan dan kelancaran: jawaban sudah jelas tetapi bisa dipersingkat dan diperkaya dengan satu contoh spesifik atau perbandingan singkat. Perbaiki tata bahasa (agreement, tenses) dan gunakan satu atau dua penghubung untuk alur yang baik.

Ví dụ: I prefer reading physical books because they are easier on my eyes and help me concentrate. For example, when I read a paperback I can sit comfortably for longer and feel more immersed than when reading on my phone.

Gợi ý: Buat struktur yang lebih sistematis: jawab langsung, lalu berikan contoh spesifik untuk masing-masing situasi. Hindari filler words (uh) dan perbaiki grammar (verb forms, articles). Gunakan penghubung seperti 'whereas' atau 'however' untuk kontras yang jelas.

Ví dụ: I need to read carefully for academic purposes, such as studying scientific articles or preparing for exams, because accuracy is important. However, when I read for pleasure—like novels or fiction—I don't read as carefully and I focus more on enjoying the story.

× Yes I do, I have a lot of friends since I was a child because it helped me at one one and escaped from everyday stress.

✓ Yes, I do. I have enjoyed reading since I was a child because it helped me at one time and helped me escape from everyday stress.

The original sentence mixes tenses and has unclear phrasing. Use present perfect 'have enjoyed' to show a past-to-present habit connected to now. 'Since I was a child' requires a perfect tense. 'At one one' is incorrect; use 'at one time' or remove it. Use parallel verbs 'helped... and helped' or rephrase to 'helped me escape'. Also split into two sentences for clarity.

× I often read in my free time and I was 12.

✓ I often read in my free time, and I started when I was 12.

The clause 'I was 12' is a time expression and needs a verb to indicate starting age. Use 'I started when I was 12' to show when the habit began. Also add a comma before the conjunction for clarity.

× For many generations of books such as a classic novels, contemporary fiction or mystery.

✓ I enjoy many genres of books, such as classic novels, contemporary fiction, or mysteries.

The phrase 'For many generations of books' is incorrect; 'genres' is the correct word. Use plural noun forms consistently: 'classic novels' and 'mysteries'. Also make the sentence complete by adding a subject and verb: 'I enjoy...'. 'Or' list items should agree in form.

× Depends on my mood.

✓ It depends on my mood.

This fragment lacks a subject. Add 'It' as the subject and conjugate the verb: 'It depends on my mood.' This completes the sentence.

× Personally I prefer reading physical books because they are easier on my eyes, also help me to feel more comfortable and concentrate, and I also enjoy holding a book since it feel more immersive and help me to consider better than reading on a screen.

✓ Personally, I prefer reading physical books because they are easier on my eyes, help me feel more comfortable and concentrate, and I also enjoy holding a book since it feels more immersive and helps me think better than reading on a screen.

Pronoun-verb agreement errors: 'it feel' should be 'it feels' and 'help me' should be 'helps me' when referring to 'holding a book' as a singular action. Also remove unnecessary infinitive 'to' after 'help' when followed by a bare verb: 'help me feel' not 'help me to feel'. Use commas for clarity and parallel structure in lists.

× I definitely need to read carefully when it comes to academic purpose, foreign science, when I need to read a journal or article, and preparing for my exam.

✓ I definitely need to read carefully when it comes to academic purposes, scientific texts, when I need to read a journal or article, and when I am preparing for my exams.

Use consistent noun phrases: 'academic purposes' (plural) and 'scientific texts' (instead of 'foreign science'). Maintain parallel structure: use 'when' clauses consistently ('when I need...' and 'when I am preparing...'). 'Preparing' needs an auxiliary to match 'when' clause: 'when I am preparing'. Also 'exam' is usually plural here: 'exams' if referring generally.

× On another hand, I didn't need to read uh, carefully when it come to my hobbies such as reading a novel or fiction books.

✓ On the other hand, I don't need to read carefully when it comes to my hobbies, such as reading novels or fiction books.

Tense and agreement errors: use present simple 'don't need' instead of past 'didn't need' because the speaker describes a general habit. 'When it come' should be 'when it comes' for third person singular agreement. Remove filler 'uh'. Use plural 'novels' to be natural and parallel with 'fiction books'. 'On another hand' should be 'On the other hand.'