Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct plural/singular and verb forms (e.g., "advantages"). Avoid redundant phrases like repeating "I love" twice. Use linking words briefly (e.g., "also", "because").

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading a lot. I read both traditional books and ebooks because paper books feel tangible while ebooks are convenient for travel and storing many titles.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and word choice: use correct adjective/adverb forms (e.g., "easily accessed" → "easy to access"). Combine sentences to avoid repetition and add a brief specific reason or example. Use a linking word like "because" or "so" smoothly.

Ví dụ: I prefer ebooks to paper books because they are more convenient and easy to access; for example, I can download a novel on my phone and read it on the commute.

Gợi ý: Clarify the response structure and correct many grammar and coherence issues. Start with a clear topic sentence stating occasions for careful reading. Use linking words to contrast (e.g., "however", "but") and provide precise examples. Avoid unclear words like "excitement" and typos ("we we", "SEC").

Ví dụ: We need to read carefully for exams and when studying textbooks because accuracy matters; however, when I read for pleasure I often skim or skip sections to enjoy the story without focusing on every detail.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and noun forms ("I prefer detailed reading to scanning"). Make the reason concise and specific, and avoid vague phrases like "their background" without referring to what "their" means. Use a linking word such as "because" and give one concrete example.

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading to scanning because reading carefully helps me understand characters, background information and subtle plot points; for example, close reading of a novel reveals hidden motives and themes.

× I love both traditional books and ebooks, and I read them whenever I had a chance.

✓ I love both traditional books and ebooks, and I read them whenever I have a chance.

The sentence mixes present simple ('love') with past tense 'had', causing a tense inconsistency. Use present tense 'have' to match the habitual action expressed by 'love' and 'read'. Suggestion: keep present simple for repeated/habitual actions (I have a chance).

× Moreover, books have many advantage.

✓ Moreover, books have many advantages.

The noun 'advantage' is countable and the use of 'many' requires the plural form 'advantages'. Change to plural to match the quantifier 'many'.

× I prefer ebooks to paper books because they are more convenient and they have easily accessed.

✓ I prefer ebooks to paper books because they are more convenient and they are easily accessible.

The phrase 'have easily accessed' is ungrammatical: 'accessed' is a past participle and 'have' with it would form a perfect tense but meaning is unclear. Use the adjective 'accessible' with adverb 'easily' to describe ebooks: 'easily accessible'. Also include verb 'are' for passive/adjective structure. Suggestion: use 'are easily accessible'.

× I can read them whenever I want.

✓ I can read them whenever I want.

This sentence is correct. It uses modal 'can' plus base verb and present simple 'want' to express ability and habitual action. No change needed.

× I don't think where we need to read carefully is when we read our test, our textbook and our excitement and but if we we read book just for fun then we don't have to read it from page to page every SEC.

✓ I think we need to read carefully when we take tests, study textbooks, or when a text excites us, but if we read a book just for fun, we don't have to read it page by page every second.

Original sentence has unclear structure, incorrect connectors, repeated words ('we we'), wrong word choices ('excitement' instead of 'excites'), and awkward phrases ('from page to page every SEC'). Reorganize into two clauses connected by 'but' and use appropriate verbs and nouns: 'take tests', 'study textbooks', 'when a text excites us'. Use 'page by page' for continuous reading and replace 'SEC' with 'second' if intended, though context likely means 'second' or 'section'—here 'second' kept. Also fix article use and verb forms. Suggestion: separate ideas into clearer clauses and use correct collocations.

× I preferred detail readings to scanning because it when we read carefully, we know more about their story, their background and the details of the story.

✓ I prefer detailed reading to scanning because when we read carefully, we learn more about the story, its background, and its details.

Mixed tenses and word forms: 'preferred' (past) conflicts with general preference; use present 'prefer'. 'Detail readings' is incorrect—use 'detailed reading' or 'detailed readings' depending on context; 'it when' is ungrammatical leftover; 'we know' is acceptable but 'learn' is more natural for gaining information. 'Their story' and 'their background' are vague pronouns; use 'the story' and 'its background' to refer back to the book. Suggestion: use present simple for general preferences and correct noun/adjective forms and pronoun reference.