Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm big fan of reading. I enjoy various topic of books such as crime fiction, science fiction and some magazine about geography which help me expand my horizon and gain knowledge. Besides, it's a perfect way to reduce my stress after a busy day.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I prefer to read on a screen because it's portable and handy without tone and place limit. For example, I always need to complete many assignments and task, so it's a efficient and effective way to research information and write notes.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
Maybe when starting an essay because it's significant to better understand what to do and how to do it. Usually my mentor requires us to read carefully and thoroughly, which keeps our minds clear and provides more uniform information.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
I prefer scanning because it's both time saving and energy saving. Especially I'm dealing with lots of reading materials alike When I need to master the main ideas and the structure of different assets for studies, the reading method helps me stay focused and find useful information quickly.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 语音流畅但有语法和表达不自然之处。注意冠词和单复数(a big fan, various topics, some magazines),句子可更简洁并使用连接词以增强连贯性。可以增加一到两句具体例子或短描述来丰富内容,同时控制在5句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I'm a big fan of reading. I enjoy various types of books, like crime and science fiction, and I also read geography magazines because they expand my horizons and increase my knowledge. For example, a recent article about mountain ecosystems helped me understand how climate affects wildlife. Reading is also a great way to relieve stress after a busy day.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 表达有意义但用词和句子结构不够地道(例如 'without tone and place limit',应改为 'without time or location limitations')。注意复数和搭配(tasks),尽量使用连接词使理由更清晰,并给出更具体的例子。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on a screen because it's portable and convenient, and I can read anytime and anywhere without time or location limits. For instance, when I have many assignments and tasks, I can quickly search for articles online and take notes on my tablet, which saves time.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答直观但表达不够自然。注意语法('it's significant to better understand' 可改为 'it's important to understand clearly'),避免含糊词(Maybe)。可用连接词说明对比并给具体情境。控制句子数量并更准确用词。
Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I start an essay because it's important to understand the requirements and plan my approach. On the other hand, I skim news headlines or emails when I only need the main idea rather than every detail. My tutor often tells us to read instructions thoroughly to avoid mistakes.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: 表达有重复且存在语法和拼写问题('time saving' → 'time-saving','alike' 用法不当,'assets' 替换为 'texts' 或 'materials')。应用连接词并给出具体场景说明何时用扫读或精读。注意句子连贯性和标点。
Ví dụ: I prefer scanning because it's time-saving and energy-saving when I have a lot of material to get through. For example, during exam revision I scan journal articles to find main ideas and the structure of each text so I can prioritize what to study in depth later.
× Yes, I'm big fan of reading.
✓ Yes, I'm a big fan of reading.
缺少不定冠词“a”,英語中“fan”是可數名詞,作單數時前面需要冠詞或限定詞。建議記住可數單數名詞需配不定冠詞(a/an)或定冠詞(the)或其他限定詞。
× I enjoy various topic of books such as crime fiction, science fiction and some magazine about geography which help me expand my horizon and gain knowledge.
✓ I enjoy books on various topics such as crime fiction, science fiction and some magazines about geography, which help me expand my horizons and gain knowledge.
"various topic" 應為複數 "various topics";"book" 應用複數形式"books"或在前加限定詞;"magazine" 需用複數 "magazines"。此外"expand my horizon" 常用複數 "expand my horizons"。建議注意可數名詞單複數一致及搭配合適的限定詞。
× For example, I always need to complete many assignments and task, so it's a efficient and effective way to research information and write notes.
✓ For example, I always need to complete many assignments and tasks, so it's an efficient and effective way to research information and write notes.
"task" 應為複數 "tasks" 以與 "assignments" 一致;"a efficient" 應為 "an efficient" 因為以元音音素開頭的形容詞前使用 "an"。建議學習冠詞用法與可數名詞複數形式。
× I prefer to read on a screen because it's portable and handy without tone and place limit.
✓ I prefer to read on a screen because it's portable and handy without time and place limits.
原句 "tone and place limit" 用詞錯誤:應為 "time and place limits"(時間和地點的限制)。另外"limit" 根據語境應為複數"limits"。建議注意常用短語(time and place)和名詞單複數形式。
× Maybe when starting an essay because it's significant to better understand what to do and how to do it.
✓ Maybe when starting an essay, because it's important to better understand what to do and how to do it.
語義上使用 "significant" 有點不自然,應改為常用形容詞 "important"。此外應在主句前加逗號使句子結構更清晰。建議選用更自然的詞彙並注意標點以改善句子流暢度。
× Usually my mentor requires us to read carefully and thoroughly, which keeps our minds clear and provides more uniform information.
✓ Usually my mentor requires us to read carefully and thoroughly, which keeps our minds clear and provides more consistent information.
"uniform information" 用法不自然,應改為更常用的 "consistent information"(一致的資訊)。建議學習常用搭配和固定搭配以避免詞義偏差。
× I prefer scanning because it's both time saving and energy saving.
✓ I prefer scanning because it's both time-saving and energy-saving.
複合形容詞作為定語時通常用連字符,例如 "time-saving"、"energy-saving"。建議在複合形容詞前使用連字符以符合書寫慣例。
× Especially I'm dealing with lots of reading materials alike When I need to master the main ideas and the structure of different assets for studies, the reading method helps me stay focused and find useful information quickly.
✓ Especially when I'm dealing with lots of similar reading materials, and I need to master the main ideas and structure of different texts for my studies, this reading method helps me stay focused and find useful information quickly.
原句結構混亂,缺少連接詞和標點;"alike" 用法不當,應改為 "similar";"assets" 與語境不符,應為 "texts" 或 "materials"。建議重組句子,補上連接詞和必要的標點,使語義更清楚明確。