Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, use correct grammar and a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition like 'whenever'. Also correct articles and verb forms (e.g., 'when I have time').

Ví dụ: To be honest, I don't read very much. However, when I have free time I often read news magazines and short fiction stories to relax. For example, I read a weekly news digest to keep up with current events.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear preference sentence and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Explain one or two reasons with linking words (because, so) and avoid unclear words ('supreme', 'cream').

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient. I can read on my phone or tablet anywhere, and digital books are easier to carry than paper ones.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence contrasting the two situations, use correct tense and pronouns, and provide specific examples of 'serious' reading. Use linking words like 'whereas' or 'but'.

Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when the information is important, such as work emails or legal notices, because I must understand details. By contrast, I skim humorous articles or memes and skip parts that are not interesting.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer (prefer scanning or detailed) and explain with clear conditions and examples. Use linking words and correct word order; avoid unclear phrases like 'put it on details'.

Ví dụ: I generally prefer scanning for general information, for example when I browse news headlines. However, I read in detail when the topic affects me directly, such as a work report or an important article, because I need to understand the facts and consequences.

× To be honest, I don't like to read too much, but whenever I get a time, I usually read the news magazines and fiction storybooks whenever I feel bored.

✓ To be honest, I don't like to read too much, but whenever I have time, I usually read news magazines and fiction when I feel bored.

The phrase 'get a time' is incorrect; use 'have time' for present situations. Also 'the news magazines' is unnatural — use 'news magazines' without 'the' (article error). Removed repeated 'whenever' for clarity. Use present simple for habitual actions.

× Nowadays technology is advanced instantly so usually prefer reading on a supreme because I can read anywhere anytime, I do not need to tell any kind of paper book with me. So usually prefer it's a cream.

✓ Nowadays technology is advancing quickly, so I usually prefer reading on a screen because I can read anywhere and anytime; I do not need to carry a paper book with me. So I usually prefer it that way.

Multiple errors: 'advanced instantly' is incorrect — use 'advancing quickly' (verb form and adverb). 'Supreme' and 'cream' are incorrect word choices; correct word is 'screen' and phrase 'prefer it that way'. 'Tell any kind of paper book with me' is wrong preposition/verb — use 'carry a paper book with me'. Also add 'and' between 'anywhere' and 'anytime' and use present simple for habitual preference.

× Whenever I need to read the news about any serious things that I'm in, that time I wait very carefully.

✓ Whenever I need to read the news about any serious matters I'm involved in, I read very carefully.

'That time I wait very carefully' is awkward and uses wrong verb; use 'I read very carefully' to express careful reading. 'Serious things that I'm in' is incorrect phrasing — use 'serious matters I'm involved in'. Present simple is appropriate for habitual actions.

× And whenever I I read the jokes that time I didn't read very carefully, I just ignored some lines.

✓ And when I read jokes, I do not read very carefully; I just ignore some lines.

The original mixes past and habitual meanings inconsistently. Use present simple 'do not read' and 'ignore' to indicate habitual behavior. Removed duplicate 'I'. Also changed 'that time' to 'when' for natural phrasing.

× People think is not very important that time I usually prefer scanning if the use really needs need attention.

✓ If something is not very important, I usually prefer scanning; I scan in more detail only when the content really needs attention.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear references ('People think is not very important that time'). Rewritten to clarify conditional structure and the contrast between scanning and detailed reading. Corrected 'use really needs need attention' to 'content really needs attention'.

× So that time I usually put it on details because I want to know about the result as well as I want to know about the meaning and get up to date about the latest news.

✓ At those times I usually read in detail because I want to know the results and understand the meaning, and to stay up to date with the latest news.

'Put it on details' is incorrect; use 'read in detail'. 'Want to know about the result' should be 'want to know the results'. Use parallel structure 'know the results and understand the meaning, and to stay up to date'. Present simple is appropriate for habitual actions.