Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Actually yes because I major in Chinese is a second language education so I must be reading lots of books about the culture wise and Chinese and since I'm a child I'm very like reading some stories so I will strike it.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I'm really like reading on the paper because I can attach the book. I think it's so happiness. But nowadays maybe on screen is more convenient and online has many useful a books about my major some Chinese culture so.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
It must be a compile prepare my a final text, so I'm pretty all careful to read it and to keep my A grade have a high level sometimes to kill the time I'm not carefully to read it.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
It had to say when I read some major books, I'm really like to scanning it because research some useful things can improve my work work and when I read some stories about the love and friendship I'm really like details it can.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接和有条理。开头给出简洁的主题句(喜欢或不喜欢),然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持。注意语法和词序(比如:"I major in Teaching Chinese as a Second Language"),避免冗长或不相关的短语。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I major in Teaching Chinese as a Second Language, so I often read books about Chinese culture and language for my studies. I have also enjoyed reading stories since I was a child, which helped me develop a lifelong habit.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答应先表明偏好,然后比较两者并给出具体原因。注意正确词汇("prefer reading on paper","annotate books"),语法和连贯连接词(however, because)。避免模糊表达如"attach the book"。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because I can annotate the margins and it feels more satisfying. However, I often use screens for convenience and access to academic articles about Chinese culture.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: 先明确什么时候需要精读,再说明什么时候可以粗读。使用清晰的原因和连接词(for example, because, while)。修正语法错误并用具体场景说明("when preparing for finals","when reading for fun")。
Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I'm preparing for final exams or writing an important paper because accuracy matters. By contrast, I skim casually when I'm reading for relaxation or to kill time.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 先给出偏好(或说两者皆用),然后分别解释在不同情境下的选择。用连接词(for academic texts, whereas, because)并给出具体例子。注意时态和词形("scan" vs "scanning","detailed reading")。
Ví dụ: For academic books, I prefer scanning to find useful information quickly because it helps my research. For novels about love and friendship, I prefer detailed reading to enjoy the characters and emotions.
× Actually yes because I major in Chinese is a second language education so I must be reading lots of books about the culture wise and Chinese and since I'm a child I'm very like reading some stories so I will strike it.
✓ Actually, yes. I major in Chinese as a second language education, so I have to read lots of books about Chinese culture. Since I was a child, I have really liked reading stories, so I will continue doing so.
句子结构混乱,包含多个子句但缺乏恰当连接词与正确的时态和词序。需要将长句拆分为数个短句,纠正动词形式('major in Chinese is' -> 'major in Chinese as';'must be reading' -> 'have to read'),以及修正习惯表达('very like reading' -> 'have really liked reading')。建议将信息分句表达,使用正确的时态和常用搭配。
× To be honest, I'm really like reading on the paper because I can attach the book.
✓ To be honest, I really like reading on paper because I can touch the book.
'have/I'm really like' 用法错误,应为 'I really like'。此外 'on the paper' 不自然,通常说 'on paper';'attach the book' 用词错误,应为 'touch the book' 或 'hold the book'。建议注意主语与动词搭配,使用固定短语 'on paper'。
× I think it's so happiness.
✓ I think it makes me very happy.
'so happiness' 词类错误,'happiness' 是名词,句中需形容词 'happy' 或用动词短语 'makes me happy'。建议使用正确的词性:形容人的感受用形容词。
× But nowadays maybe on screen is more convenient and online has many useful a books about my major some Chinese culture so.
✓ But nowadays reading on a screen is more convenient, and there are many useful online books about my major and Chinese culture.
句子词序与冠词混乱:'on screen is' 应为 'reading on a screen';'online has many useful a books' 顺序、冠词错误,需使用 'there are many useful online books'。同时 'my major some Chinese culture' 需理顺为 'my major and Chinese culture'。建议理清主谓结构并使用 'there is/are' 来表示存在。
× It must be a compile prepare my a final text, so I'm pretty all careful to read it and to keep my A grade have a high level sometimes to kill the time I'm not carefully to read it.
✓ When I have to compile and prepare my final text, I am very careful when reading it to keep my A grade. Sometimes, when I'm trying to kill time, I'm not careful when I read.
原句缺乏清晰主谓结构并混用词形('compile prepare my a final text')。应使用动词不定式或动名词短语 'compile and prepare my final text';表示目的或原因时用 'to' 或从句;'I'm pretty all careful' 非标准,改为 'I am very careful'。此外存在时态与副词位置问题。建议拆分句子、使用正确短语并注意副词位置。
× It must be a compile prepare my a final text, so I'm pretty all careful to read it and to keep my A grade have a high level sometimes to kill the time I'm not carefully to read it.
✓ When I had to compile and prepare my final text, I was very careful when reading it to keep my A grade. Sometimes, when I was killing time, I wasn't careful when I read.
如果描述过去发生的行为,应使用过去时 'had to', 'was careful' 等。原句时态混乱,需根据语境选择现在时或过去时。建议明确时间点并一致使用相应时态。
× It had to say when I read some major books, I'm really like to scanning it because research some useful things can improve my work work and when I read some stories about the love and friendship I'm really like details it can.
✓ I would say that when I read some books related to my major, I really like to scan them because researching useful information can improve my work. When I read stories about love and friendship, I prefer detailed reading.
句子结构混乱,错误使用时态与动词形式('I'm really like to scanning it' 应为 'I really like to scan them' 或 'I prefer scanning them');名词复数与代词一致性错误('books' 与 'it');重复词 'work work'。建议拆句、使用正确动词不定式或动名词形式,以及保持主谓和数的一致。
× I'm really like to scanning it because research some useful things can improve my work work
✓ I really like scanning them because researching useful information can improve my work.
'like to scanning' 动词形式混用。应在 like 后面接动名词 'scanning' 或不定式 'to scan',不能混用。建议记住固定搭配:like + -ing 或 like + to + base verb(两者意义略有差异)。
× when I read some stories about the love and friendship I'm really like details it can.
✓ When I read stories about love and friendship, I really like reading them in detail.
代词使用和词序错误:'details it can' 不通顺,需用 'read in detail' 或 'reading them in detail';'the love and friendship' 可直接说 'love and friendship'。建议使用正确代词 'them' 指代前文的 'stories',并把副词短语放在动词附近。