Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Yes, I love reading. I really like UMM detection novels. I think they are very amazing and I'm very interested in them. I love have a read in my free time.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I prefer to read on paper. It is a traditional type of books and I think it is good for me to make some labels on them.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
I think I need to really carefully. When the context is very complex and not really clear, such as a detection novel, they may propel quickly. Then I need to read more carefully.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
I prefer detailed reading. I would like to catch up with the details that the writers pose to us. It is a good way to build a bridge with them.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 用词和语法要更准确,句子应更自然连贯。回答应直接开门见山并控制在最多5句;注意拼写和搭配错误(如“UMM detection novels”、“have a read”)。可以给出具体例子或原因来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I love reading, especially mystery novels. I find their plot twists and clues fascinating, and I enjoy trying to solve the case before the ending. For example, I recently read a detective book with an unexpected suspect that surprised me.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 表达应更自然且语法更准确。可用一到两句补充具体原因并用连接词使逻辑更清楚。避免直译式短语(如“traditional type of books”)。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because I like the feel of a physical book and find it easier to make notes in the margins. Also, paper books help me concentrate better than reading on a screen.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 改善句子结构与用词,直接回答问题并用连接词说明原因。注意语法(如副词位置)和词汇选择(如“detection novel”应为“detective novel”),给出明确对比场景。
Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when the material is complex or contains many details, such as a detective novel or technical article, because clues and arguments can be subtle. For light reading like magazines or short stories, I usually skim.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 使表达更自然并修正措辞(如“catch up with the details that the writers pose to us”不地道)。用一两句说明原因并举例,保持简洁且连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because I want to understand the author's ideas and notice small clues or stylistic features. For example, when reading a novel I pay attention to foreshadowing and character descriptions to appreciate the story fully.
× Yes, I love reading.
✓ Yes, I love reading.
无语法问题,句子正确。
× I really like UMM detection novels.
✓ I really like UMM detective novels.
原句中使用了非标准的单词“detection”,应该使用形容词“detective”来修饰“novels”(侦探小说)。建议使用正确的形容词形式来描述名词。
× I love have a read in my free time.
✓ I love having a read in my free time. / I love to read in my free time.
动词“love”后面跟动名词(having)或不定式(to read)都可以,但原句使用不定式和名词短语混用("have a read")导致结构不自然。简洁正确的表达是使用动名词或不定式。建议多练习 love 后接动名词或不定式的用法。
× It is a traditional type of books and I think it is good for me to make some labels on them.
✓ They are a traditional type of book, and I think it is good for me to make some labels on them. / It is a traditional type of book, and I think it is good for me to make some labels on it.
原句中“a traditional type”是单数结构,但后面跟的是复数“books”,数不一致。需要将两部分的数一致:要么把主语改为复数(They are ... books),要么把后面改为单数(type of book / on it)。建议注意“a type of + 单数名词”及主谓数的一致性。
× When the context is very complex and not really clear, such as a detection novel, they may propel quickly.
✓ When the context is very complex and not really clear, such as in a detective novel, the plot may move quickly.
句中“detection novel”应为“detective novel”;主语“they”指代不清且与“novel”单数不一致,此外“propel”用法不当,应用“move”或“develop”来描述情节推进。建议使用正确的名词/代词指代并选用常用动词描述情节发展。
× I think I need to really carefully.
✓ I think I need to read really carefully.
原句缺少主要动词,只有副词短语“really carefully”,导致句子不完整。需要加上动作动词,如“read”。建议注意主语后要有完整谓语结构,副词应修饰动词。
× Then I need to read more carefully.
✓ Then I need to read more carefully.
句子语法正确,主谓一致,无需修改。
× I prefer detailed reading.
✓ I prefer detailed reading. / I prefer to read in detail.
原句可以接受,但更自然的表达是“I prefer to read in detail”或“I prefer detailed reading”。两种形式都正确,当前句子无强制修改。
× I would like to catch up with the details that the writers pose to us.
✓ I would like to catch the details that the writers present to us. / I would like to catch up on the details that the writers present to us.
“catch up with”通常用于赶上某人或某事进度,搭配“details”不太自然;“pose to us”用法不当,通常用“present”来表达作者呈现细节。建议使用“catch”或“catch up on”与“present”搭配。