Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 文法と語彙の誤りを直し、発音の不自然さを減らす必要があります。例えば、主語と動詞の一致（"I'm a voracious reader"）、不必要なフィラー（"uh"）を減らす、前置詞や動詞の選択（"I am drawn to bookstores" や "I look for interesting books"）を改善してください。また発言は簡潔にして文は最大5文に収め、話の流れを明確にするために接続詞を使ってください。具体的には最初に直接答えを述べ、その後必要な補足（理由や例）を1〜2文で加える練習をしてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love reading. I'm a voracious reader and often visit bookstores to find interesting books. During holidays I usually pick up one or two novels to enjoy in my free time.

Gợi ý: 構文と語順を整理し、冗長な語の繰り返し（"I I"）や余分な語を省いて自然な表現にしましょう。理由を述べる際は接続語（"because", "so"）を使って論理的に繋げ、具体例を1つ追加すると説得力が増します。発音や流暢さの改善のために短めの文で練習し、"recently"の位置や完了形の使い方を確認してください。

Ví dụ: Recently I've come to prefer reading on a screen because it is very convenient. I can carry an entire library on a single tablet, which makes travelling and commuting much easier.

Gợi ý: 語彙選択と文の完成度を改善する必要があります。まず話の冒頭で直接答え（"I need to read carefully when..."）を述べ、その後に具体例と理由を整理して述べてください。専門的な分野名の前の冠詞や複数形（"science books"、"subjects like mathematics, physics and chemistry"）を正しく使い、不要なフィラー（"uh"）を減らす練習をしましょう。また"accountants"は誤用で意味不明なので、正しい語（"concepts"や"ideas"）に直してください。

Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I'm studying science subjects, such as mathematics, physics or chemistry. These topics contain complex concepts, so if I don't read carefully I might miss important details and misunderstand the ideas.

Gợi ý: 構文と語彙の正確さを高め、曖昧な語（"bookjar", "skin"）や文法ミス（"It's depend"）を直してください。まず簡潔に答え（"It depends on the book"）を述べ、その後に理由と具体例（"detailed for textbooks, skimming for novels"）を述べます。接続語（"however", "for example"）を使って対比を明確にし、文を5文以内に収めて流暢さを意識してください。

Ví dụ: It depends on the type of book. I prefer detailed reading for textbooks, especially in subjects like physics or mathematics. However, for novels or general nonfiction I often skim sections that are less important.

× I love reading uh, too much and uh actually I'm a voracious readers.

✓ I love reading very much and actually I'm a voracious reader.

The noun 'readers' should be singular to match the singular subject 'I'. Use 'very much' instead of 'too much' in this context. Suggestion: use singular noun forms when the subject is singular and choose appropriate adverb ('very much').

× I always attract bookstore to find the interesting book I would like to read during my holidays.

✓ I am always attracted to bookstores to find the interesting books I would like to read during my holidays.

The verb 'attract' was used incorrectly; the passive 'am attracted to' or active 'I always go to' is appropriate. Use the preposition 'to' after 'attracted' and plural 'bookstores' and 'books' for general meaning. Suggestion: use 'go to bookstores' or 'am attracted to bookstores' and pluralize when speaking generally.

× So either book and I will bookworm actually.

✓ So I tend to be a bookworm.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Either book and I will bookworm' is not a correct structure. Use the fixed expression 'tend to be a bookworm' to express the idea. Suggestion: simplify to a standard phrase conveying the intended meaning.

× Recently I come to love readings on screen.

✓ Recently I have come to love reading on screens.

Use present perfect 'have come to' to indicate a recent change. 'Readings' is incorrect; use the uncountable noun 'reading' and plural 'screens' or 'on a screen'. Suggestion: use 'have come to love reading on screens' or 'on a screen'.

× The reason why I I shift from a paper to the screen is its convenience.

✓ The reason I shifted from paper to screens is their convenience.

Avoid repeating 'I'. Use past tense 'shifted' (change occurred) or present perfect; match pronoun 'their' to plural 'screens' or 'its' to 'the screen' consistently. Suggestion: maintain consistent number between nouns and pronouns.

× I can carry a wide collection of books with in just one tablet, so it is quite a convenient for example for.

✓ I can carry a wide collection of books in just one tablet, so it is quite convenient, for example, when I travel.

Remove unnecessary 'with' and article 'a' before 'convenient'. Add a clarifying phrase 'when I travel' to complete the sentence. Suggestion: ensure correct prepositions and complete ideas.

× For example, when I, uh, read the a science science book, I like a mathematics, physics, chemistry and so on.

✓ For example, when I read a science book, I like mathematics, physics, chemistry and so on.

Remove the extra article 'the a' and duplicate 'science'. Use uncountable noun 'mathematics' without 'a'. Suggestion: avoid double articles and unnecessary repetition.

× I have to read carefully the contents.

✓ I have to read the contents carefully.

Adverb placement: 'carefully' should follow the object 'contents' in natural English. Suggestion: place adverbs in the correct position for clarity.

× The uh, reason is that, uh, without careful reading the uh, I cannot fully understand the accountants itself and I may lead to.

✓ The reason is that without careful reading, I cannot fully understand the concepts themselves and I may make mistakes.

Original has many filler words and wrong nouns: 'accountants' should be 'concepts', 'itself' should agree in number 'themselves', and 'I may lead to' is incomplete—use 'I may make mistakes'. Suggestion: remove filler words and choose correct nouns and verbs to complete the idea.

× It's depend on bookjar as I typically love detailed reading like the a science book, like physics, mathematics and so on.

✓ It depends on the book, as I typically prefer detailed reading for science books like physics and mathematics.

Use 'depends' for third person singular, 'on the book' instead of 'bookjar', and 'prefer' rather than 'love detailed reading'. Remove extra article 'the a'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use correct nouns.

× But I skipped the content of the book for novels and documentaries.

✓ But I skip the content of novels and documentaries.

Use present tense 'skip' to match habitual action. 'The book' is unnecessary; use plural 'novels and documentaries' to express general habit. Suggestion: match tense and use plural for general statements.

× So whether or not I love skin it's totally depend on.

✓ So whether or not I skim depends on the book.

'Love skin' is incorrect; intended 'skim'. Use third person 'depends' to agree with 'whether or not I skim' as the subject of the sentence, or rephrase 'it totally depends on the book'. Suggestion: correct verb choice ('skim') and ensure subject-verb agreement.