Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 명확한 주제문으로 답을 시작하고, 문법 오류와 어색한 표현을 교정하세요. 또한 supporting detail을 하나 또는 두 개의 구체적인 예로 정리하고, 문장들을 연결하는 연결어를 활용하세요. 예: ‘Yes, I enjoy reading because…’로 시작하고 이유(취향, 얻는 것)와 구체적 예(최근에 읽은 책의 내용 또는 느낀 점)를 덧붙이세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading because it is my favorite hobby and helps me understand different perspectives. For example, last month I read a novel about family relationships which made me see how people cope with loss. As a result, I feel more empathetic and open-minded.

Gợi ý: 중복되는 말(uh, umm)과 어색한 중복 표현을 줄이고 이유들을 논리적으로 연결하세요. 또한 하나의 주된 장점(예: 편의성)과 보조적인 장점(예: 메모 기능)을 짧고 구체적으로 제시하세요. 연결어(for example, also)를 사용해 자연스럽게 이어가세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on a screen because it is very convenient for commuting. For example, I can read e-books on the subway and quickly highlight passages or add notes. Also, digital books save space and are easy to search.

Gợi ý: 문장의 의미가 불분명하고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 먼저 주제문으로 ‘I read carefully when…’ 형태로 명확히 답하고, 반대 상황도 하나의 문장으로 정리하세요. 또한 불필요한 말버릇(umm, uh)을 제거하고 구체적 이유나 예시를 제시하세요.

Ví dụ: I read carefully when I need to understand something important, such as study materials or work reports. However, when I am stressed or tired, I prefer light activities like meeting friends or watching videos, so I do not read seriously then.

Gợi ý: 간결한 주제문으로 선호를 밝히고, 이유와 구체적 예를 논리적으로 연결하세요. 현재 답변은 문법과 어휘 선택이 부정확하고 예시가 불분명합니다. 예시를 하나 명확히 들어 ‘for example’로 연결하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me focus on the story and understand the characters. For example, when I joined a book exchange with friends, I read each book carefully so I could discuss its themes during our meeting.

× Yes, I like reading it is my favorite hobby.

✓ Yes, I like reading; it is my favorite hobby.

The original is a run-on sentence missing proper punctuation or conjunction between independent clauses. Use a semicolon or separate into two sentences to join related independent clauses correctly. Suggestion: 'Yes, I like reading. It is my favorite hobby.' or use a semicolon as corrected.

× When I read a book I can guess others perspective and I can so various views of life.

✓ When I read a book, I can guess others' perspectives and see various views of life.

Possessive form for others must be others' and 'perspective' should be plural to match context. 'So' is incorrect; use 'see' to express perceiving various views. Also add a comma after the subordinating clause.

× I think another.

✓ I think differently.

The fragment 'I think another' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use an adverb 'differently' to express a different opinion or 'I think another way' if meaning is different; corrected to a concise, grammatical form.

× I prefer to read on the screen on because I can read, uh, on the subway or bus, umm, it is very convenient and umm, I can leave some memo and highlight umm.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because I can read on the subway or bus; it is very convenient, and I can leave memos and highlight text.

Preposition 'on the screen on' is redundant; use 'on a screen'. Use article 'a' before 'screen'. 'Memo' should be plural 'memos' for general capability. 'Highlight' needs an object 'text' or gerund; adjusted to 'highlight text'. Punctuation added for clarity.

× Umm, when I feel very stressful, umm, I wear some books and I come down and when I miss umm, a lot of dopamine at the time, uh, I, I don't read book.

✓ When I feel very stressed, I take out some books to calm down, and when I lack a lot of dopamine, I don't read books.

Use adjective 'stressed' not 'stressful' to describe feeling. 'Wear some books' is incorrect; likely 'take out' or 'read' books. 'Come down' replaced with 'calm down' for intended meaning. 'Miss ... dopamine' is unnatural; use 'lack' or 'have low' dopamine. 'I don't read book' needs plural 'books'.

× I met some of my friend.

✓ I met some of my friends.

'Some of my friend' is ungrammatical; use plural 'friends' and 'some of' requires plural noun. Alternatively, 'I met some friends' is acceptable.

× Umm I prepare detailed reading because I can focus on the books story.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I can focus on the book's story.

'Prepare detailed reading' is incorrect verb choice; 'prefer' fits the context of preference. 'Books story' needs possessive 'book's'. Also add article 'the' was unnecessary before 'book's story', use 'the book's story' or 'the story of the book'.

× Umm, for example, umm, when I got some exchange, book exchange reading umm at the time my friend.

✓ For example, when I participated in a book exchange with my friend, I did more scanning than detailed reading.

Original is fragmented and unclear. 'Got some exchange, book exchange reading' is ungrammatical; clarify intended meaning as 'participated in a book exchange'. Added contrast to explain preference. Ensure sentence is complete with subject and verb.