Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely. I like reading because I think reading can bring me more knowledge and sometimes it can makes me more comfortable and feel more relaxed.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
Compared reading on the screen, I prefer reading on the paper because I think it can makes me more comfortable for my eyes and helps me more focus better without distractions.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
I have to read more carefully when I was studying or working because I need to understand every detail clearly. But if I was just for fun, like news or stories, I can read more quickly and casually.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
Compared to read scanning, I like read more details because I think reading details can makes me understand every single things clearly.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 74.0Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰直接,但存在语法错误、用词和冗长问题。注意动词时态和主谓一致(例如“it can makes”应为“it can make”),避免重复表达(“more comfortable and feel more relaxed”意义重复)。可将回答控制在3—4句内,先给出主题句,再用一两个具体理由或例子支持,并使用连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Reading helps me gain knowledge and also relax after a busy day. For example, I often read short stories before bed because they calm me and improve my vocabulary.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了偏好,但语法和措辞不准确(如“Compared reading on the screen”应为“In comparison to reading on a screen”或“I prefer reading on paper to reading on a screen”;“makes me more comfortable for my eyes”应为“is more comfortable for my eyes”)。避免冗余短语(“helps me more focus better”重复)。可以加入一具体情境举例提高说服力。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper to reading on a screen because it is gentler on my eyes and helps me concentrate. For instance, when studying for exams I always use printed notes to avoid online distractions.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 76.0Gợi ý: 结构合理但时态和语法错误较多(应使用现在时,如“I have to read more carefully when I am studying or working”)。“every detail clearly”可更自然地说成“every detail”或“clearly understand the details”。第二句建议给出具体例子或说明以增强内容。
Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I am studying or working because I must understand the details accurately. However, when I read for pleasure, such as checking news headlines or short fiction, I usually skim more quickly.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达意图明确,但语法、句式和词汇搭配不自然(如“Compared to read scanning”应为“Compared to scanning”或“Rather than scanning”;“can makes me”错误;“every single things”应为“every single thing”或“all the details”)。建议简化句子,用连接词并给出短例子说明何时会选择细读。
Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading rather than scanning because it helps me understand all the information accurately. For example, when I read technical articles or instructions, I always read slowly and take notes.
× I like reading because I think reading can bring me more knowledge and sometimes it can makes me more comfortable and feel more relaxed.
✓ I like reading because I think reading can bring me more knowledge and sometimes it can make me more comfortable and feel more relaxed.
错误类型:动词后接 -s(第三人称单数)与情态动词后不加 -s 混淆。句中“can makes”不正确,情态动词 can 之后动词应使用原形。建议:记住情态动词(can, could, may, might, will, would, shall, should, must)后面跟动词原形;不要在动词后加 -s。
× Compared reading on the screen, I prefer reading on the paper because I think it can makes me more comfortable for my eyes and helps me more focus better without distractions.
✓ Compared with reading on a screen, I prefer reading on paper because I think it makes me more comfortable for my eyes and helps me focus better without distractions.
错误类型:多项错误主要涉及介词使用和动词形式。1) “Compared reading on the screen” 用法错误,应为 Compared with reading on a screen(使用介词 with 并用不定冠词)。2) “reading on the paper” 通常说 reading on paper(不加定冠词)。3) “can makes” 同上情态/助动词后不加 -s,应为 makes 或 can make;此处无需 can,直接用 makes 更自然。4) “helps me more focus better” 中“more”和“better”重复且位置错误,应为 helps me focus better。建议:注意固定搭配(compared with),纸上阅读常说 reading on paper;情态动词后用动词原形;避免重复比较词。
× I have to read more carefully when I was studying or working because I need to understand every detail clearly.
✓ I have to read more carefully when I am studying or working because I need to understand every detail clearly.
错误类型:时态不一致。主句使用一般现在时(have to),表示习惯或一般事实,时间状语从句应使用一般现在时而不是过去时。句中“when I was studying or working”应改为 when I am studying or working。建议:同一句中描述习惯或常态时,要保持时态一致;如果说一般情况,用一般现在时。
× But if I was just for fun, like news or stories, I can read more quickly and casually.
✓ But if I am just reading for fun, like news or stories, I can read more quickly and casually.
错误类型:时态和结构错误。1) 条件从句应使用一般现在时(if I am),因为这里说的是一般情况而非与现在相反的假设。2) “was just for fun” 结构不完整,需用动名词短语 reading for fun。建议:条件句表一般事实用一般现在时;注意动名词的使用。
× Compared to read scanning, I like read more details because I think reading details can makes me understand every single things clearly.
✓ Compared to scanning, I like to read more details because I think reading details can make me understand every single thing clearly.
错误类型:动词形式与名词单复数错误。1) “Compared to read scanning” 不自然,应为 Compared to scanning 或 Compared with scanning。2) “I like read more details” 应为 I like to read more details 或 I prefer reading details。3) “can makes” 情态动词后不加 -s,应为 can make。4) “every single things” 复数错误,应为 every single thing(every + 单数名词)。建议:注意固定搭配(compared to/with),情态动词后用动词原形,every 后接单数,动词不定式与动名词选择要一致。