Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (articles, countable nouns, verb forms), and add one specific supporting detail. Avoid repetition and finish within 3–4 sentences. Use linking words like “for example” correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love reading. It helps me gain knowledge and sparks new ideas. For example, by reading historical novels I learned a lot about my country’s past and its culture.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence, avoid hesitation and repetition, and complete your reason with a specific detail. Use linking words such as “because” and limit answer to 2–4 sentences. Mention one practical example or consequence to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because screens strain my eyes after long periods. For example, after reading news on my phone I often get headaches, so I save screen reading for short articles only.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence addressing both parts of the question. Use linking words (“however”, “on the other hand”) and provide a specific example of what careful reading involves and why you can read other material more casually. Avoid unfinished sentences and hesitations.

Ví dụ: I need to read textbooks very carefully because I must understand concepts and sometimes provide feedback. However, I read storybooks more casually for enjoyment, so I usually skim them and focus only on interesting passages.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, then explain the conditions for each approach using linking words (“when”, “but”). Remove fillers and finish with a concise concluding sentence that summarizes your preference depending on the context.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. When I have enough time I prefer detailed reading to fully understand the text, but if I need specific information quickly I use scanning to find key facts.

× I believe that reading books you can gather so many knowledge and it gives you so many ideas.

✓ I believe that by reading books you can gather so much knowledge and they give you many ideas.

Incorrect use of noun quantity and sentence structure: 'reading books you can gather' needs a preposition 'by' to show manner (present participle phrase). 'Knowledge' is uncountable so use 'so much' not 'so many'. 'Books' is plural so refer back with plural pronoun 'they' and use 'many' with countable 'ideas'. Suggestion: add 'by' before the -ing clause, use 'so much knowledge', and match pronoun number.

× For an example, when I read various novels, I can know the history of our nation and also.

✓ For example, when I read various novels, I can learn about the history of our nation.

Preposition and word choice errors: use 'for example' or simply 'for example' is acceptable but 'for an example' is incorrect. 'Can know the history' is unnatural; use 'learn about the history'. The trailing 'and also' is incomplete and should be removed or completed. Suggestion: use 'for example' and 'learn about' for clarity.

× I prefer reading books in a paper rather than in screen.

✓ I prefer reading books on paper rather than on a screen.

Incorrect article and preposition: use 'on paper' (no article) and 'on a screen' or 'on screens'. The original used 'in a paper' and 'in screen' which are wrong. Suggestion: use the preposition 'on' and include 'a' before 'screen'.

× I believe that, uh, when uh, I believe that reading any articles or any news in a screen is not good for our eye and I have another problem that when I.

✓ I believe that reading articles or news on a screen is not good for our eyes, and I also have another problem when I...

Redundant repetition and incorrect phrases: remove repeated 'I believe that' and fillers. Use 'articles or news' (avoid 'any' twice), 'on a screen' not 'in a screen', 'eyes' plural. The sentence ends incomplete; indicate continuation with ellipsis or complete thought. Suggestion: eliminate redundancies, correct preposition, and pluralize 'eyes'.

× To be honest, when I read the textbook, then I have to read it very carefully because I have to analyze so many things and sometimes I have to give the feedback on it.

✓ To be honest, when I read a textbook, I have to read it very carefully because I need to analyze many things and sometimes give feedback on it.

Article and tense/style: use 'a textbook' (general), avoid 'then' after 'when'. Use 'need to' for necessity instead of repeating 'have to' and 'so many things' is better as 'many things'. 'Give the feedback on it' is awkward; use 'give feedback on it'. Suggestion: streamline verbs and articles for natural present tense.

× On the other hand, when I read any story books, I don't want, uh, I don't have to give so many.

✓ On the other hand, when I read story books, I don't have to give much feedback.

Quantifier and phrase errors: 'any story books' is odd—use 'story books' or 'any storybook' depending on meaning. 'Don't want, I don't have to give so many' lacks object; 'so many' needs a plural noun. Likely meaning is 'much feedback' or 'many comments'. Suggestion: specify the object and use appropriate quantifier 'much' with uncountable 'feedback'.

× It completely depends on the situation.

✓ It completely depends on the situation.

Correct sentence; no correction needed. 'Depends' correctly matches third-person singular and present tense. Suggestion: none.

× When I get so much time, then I prefer to reading thoroughly, but when I uh, have to search, so may just few things, then I uh go through by scanning so uh it I, I decided it whatever the.

✓ When I have a lot of time, I prefer to read thoroughly, but when I have to search for just a few things, I go through them by scanning.

Multiple errors: 'get so much time' is unnatural—use 'have a lot of time'. 'Prefer to reading' should be 'prefer to read' or 'prefer reading'. 'Search, so may just few things' is garbled—use 'search for just a few things'. 'Go through by scanning' needs an object: 'them'. Removed fillers and corrected word order. Suggestion: simplify structure, use correct infinitive or gerund, include preposition 'for' with 'search', and provide clear object for 'go through'.