Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do, and reading is a very important, important part of my, uh, routine and I sometimes I really be enjoying uh, since I was a childhood and I actually love it because it's a less you pick into the another's lives and inspire you to explore the.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer like to read on the paper, especially read a whole book umm, it can reduce my access strength and enhance the focused umm and provide umm textile experience uh, compared to reading on on screen for a long time.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
Well, I think it is depends on the different situation. When I read the some information is very important, some exams, introductions or the some academic paper is need to read carefully.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
Well, I really prefer scanning reading and I read very fast and doing some dedicated reading is neat. For example, when I read an articles online, I will scan the heading and the key sentence first and only release the details if it is really useful.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 答案需要更自然、简洁并修正语法错误。注意句子结构:先给出直接回答,然后用一到两句具体支持细节。避免重复词(例如 “important, important”)和含糊表达(例如 “I really be enjoying”)。发音停顿的填充词(uh, umm)应减少。可增加具体细节(喜欢哪类书、何时阅读)以丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. It has been an important part of my daily routine since childhood. I especially like novels because they let me see different lives and ideas, and they often inspire me to try new things.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 答案表达要更准确,使用恰当词汇替换不明确或错误的词(例如 “access strength” 和 “textile experience” 不合适)。结构上先直接回答,再给出一到两条具体原因,用连接词提高连贯性。减少语气词。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper, especially for whole books, because it helps me concentrate better and reduces eye strain. Also, holding a physical book gives me a more tactile and satisfying reading experience.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 答案需更流畅与精确。先直接回答,然后用清晰分类说明需细读和可浏览的情形。修正语法(主谓一致、冠词使用)并加入连接词使逻辑更明确。举一两个具体例子能提高说服力。
Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. I read carefully when the information is important, for example study materials, exam questions or academic papers. For less important things like news headlines or casual blog posts, I usually just skim.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并修正语法错误(例如 “scanning reading”, “doing some dedicated reading is neat”, “release the details”)。先直接回答偏好,再解释原因与举例,使用连接词使条理清楚。注意动词形式和冠词的正确使用。
Ví dụ: I prefer scanning because I read quickly and it helps me find useful information fast. For example, when I read articles online I scan the headings and topic sentences first, and only read the details if the article seems relevant.
× I sometimes I really be enjoying uh, since I was a childhood and I actually love it because it's a less you pick into the another's lives and inspire you to explore the.
✓ I sometimes really enjoy it; I have enjoyed reading since my childhood, and I actually love it because it lets you peek into others' lives and inspires you to explore them.
句中出现“be enjoying”与时间状语“since I was a childhood”冲突,应使用现在完成时或一般现在时表达持续的喜好;“since my childhood”是正确的固定搭配;“lets you peek into others' lives”中的动词形式和词汇选择更自然;“inspires you to explore them”使代词与前文“lives”一致。建议:将进行时改为一般现在或现在完成时,使用正确的固定搭配(since my childhood),并调整动词和代词一致性。
× Well, I prefer like to read on the paper, especially read a whole book umm, it can reduce my access strength and enhance the focused umm and provide umm textile experience uh, compared to reading on on screen for a long time.
✓ Well, I prefer to read on paper, especially a whole book; it can reduce eye strain, enhance focus, and provide a tactile experience compared to reading on a screen for a long time.
“read on the paper”应为“read on paper”或“read a paper book”;“access strength”是错误搭配,应为“eye strain”(眼睛疲劳);“enhance the focused”应为“enhance focus”;“textile experience”误用,正确为“tactile experience”(触觉体验);“on on screen”多余重复。建议:使用正确介词搭配(on paper/on a screen),用常用表达(eye strain, tactile experience),并删去重复词。
× Well, I think it is depends on the different situation. When I read the some information is very important, some exams, introductions or the some academic paper is need to read carefully.
✓ Well, I think it depends on the situation. When some information is very important—such as exams, instructions, or academic papers—I need to read carefully.
“it is depends”中“depends”不应有“is”,正确为“it depends”;“on the different situation”介词短语冗余,应为“on the situation”或“on different situations”;“When I read the some information is very important”语序混乱,需重组为“When some information is very important”;“introductions”误用,语境应为“instructions”或“introductions”需根据意思选择;“the some academic paper is need to read carefully”应为“academic papers I need to read carefully”。建议:省去多余助动词,调整名词单复数,重组句子使主谓一致。
× Well, I really prefer scanning reading and I read very fast and doing some dedicated reading is neat.
✓ Well, I really prefer scanning (skimming) and I read very fast; doing some focused/detailed reading is neat.
“scanning reading”混用名词,应使用单一形式“scanning”或“scanning/skim reading”;“doing some dedicated reading”中的“dedicated”用词不自然,应为“focused”或“detailed”;句子应使用一致的动词形式并用分号连接复合句。建议:使用正确的 -ing 形式名词(scanning/skimming),用更自然的形容词(detailed/focused),并保持句子结构一致。
× For example, when I read an articles online, I will scan the heading and the key sentence first and only release the details if it is really useful.
✓ For example, when I read articles online, I scan the headings and key sentences first and only read the details if they are really useful.
“read an articles”中冠词与名词数不一致,应为“read articles”或“an article”;“scan the heading and the key sentence”应为复数形式或与单数一致;“only release the details”动词“release”用错,应为“read”或“look at”;时态与习惯性动作匹配应使用一般现在时(I scan)。建议:注意冠词与名词单复数一致,使用恰当动词,动作为习惯时用一般现在时。