Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. Reading is my big hobby and because I studied Physiology and I I am a literature teacher so I read book very much.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I prefer read on paper because I love, uh, reading slowly and umm, I only highlight in the sentence I want to remember.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
I need to read carefully when uh, reading and researching and uh, I don't read carefully when uh, read the fiction or something entertainment book.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
Well, it depends I it will scanning skill when uh, umm, restarting or uh, something to do uh, to need to uh, fast and detail reading when I am really, really like this book.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and fix verb/noun agreement (e.g., 'I read books a lot').
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Reading is one of my main hobbies because I studied physiology and now work as a literature teacher, so I read a lot of academic and literary texts.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Use a clear topic sentence and smooth linking words. Reduce fillers (uh, umm) and improve grammar (e.g., 'I prefer reading on paper because I like to read slowly and highlight important sentences'). Add a brief reason to support your choice.
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because I like to read slowly and make annotations; for example, I highlight sentences I want to remember, which helps my comprehension.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Answer directly with clear contrast and correct verb forms. Use linking words like 'whereas' or 'but' to show the difference, and give specific examples of each situation.
Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I'm doing research or studying academic material because accuracy matters, whereas I read less carefully when I'm enjoying fiction or light entertainment reading for relaxation.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Give a clear conditional statement and reduce hesitations. Use linking words ('usually', 'however') and correct grammar (e.g., 'I use scanning when I need to find information quickly, but I read in detail when a book interests me'). Provide a short example of each case.
Ví dụ: It depends: I usually scan when I need to find information quickly, for example when researching or revising, but I read in detail when a book truly interests me so I can enjoy the language and ideas.
× Yes, of course. Reading is my big hobby and because I studied Physiology and I I am a literature teacher so I read book very much.
✓ Yes, of course. Reading is my main hobby. I studied Physiology and I am a literature teacher, so I read books a lot.
The original contains run-on structure and repetition ('I I'), wrong adjective choice ('big hobby'), article/number errors with 'read book' and awkward adverb placement. Split into two sentences to fix sentence structure, replace 'big' with 'main' for natural collocation, remove duplicated 'I', add plural 'books', and use 'a lot' for frequency. Grammar problem type ID:26
× I prefer read on paper because I love, uh, reading slowly and umm, I only highlight in the sentence I want to remember.
✓ I prefer reading on paper because I love reading slowly, and I only highlight the sentences I want to remember.
The verb 'prefer' should be followed by a gerund ('reading'), not the base form. Also 'highlight in the sentence' is incorrect preposition choice and 'sentence' should be plural when referring generally. Reorder and remove filler to improve fluency. Grammar problem type ID:8
× I need to read carefully when uh, reading and researching and uh, I don't read carefully when uh, read the fiction or something entertainment book.
✓ I need to read carefully when I am reading and researching, and I don't read carefully when I read fiction or other entertainment books.
Maintain consistent present tense forms: use 'I am reading' for ongoing action and 'I read' for habitual actions. 'Read the fiction' is incorrect article use and countability; use 'read fiction' or 'read fiction books' and pluralize 'books'. Also replace 'something entertainment book' with 'other entertainment books' for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:6
× Well, it depends I it will scanning skill when uh, umm, restarting or uh, something to do uh, to need to uh, fast and detail reading when I am really, really like this book.
✓ Well, it depends. I use scanning skills when I'm skimming or need to read quickly, and I use detailed reading when I really like a book.
Original is a run-on with misplaced pronouns and incorrect verb forms ('it will scanning skill'). Use 'I use' to indicate habitual action, pluralize 'skills', replace unclear 'restarting' with 'skimming', and use 'read quickly' for clarity. 'Detail reading' should be 'detailed reading', and 'when I am really, really like this book' is ungrammatical; change to 'when I really like a book'. Grammar problem type ID:26