Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Do you like reading? Yes, absolutely. I enjoy reading the detective novels. This is because, uh, the characteristics in the book are vivid and I think it is so interesting.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
Well, at school I prefer to read on paper because we are not allowed to use electronic devices.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
Well, during the examination I need to reading carefully because even small mistakes can cost can cost Marks and I need to an exact reading exact instructions.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
I prefer details reading because I enjoy reading stories and read word by word.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、精炼并使用正确词汇。注意句子结构和词语搭配,例如用 "characters" 而不是 "characteristics",将理由用一两句简单具体说明,并控制在不超过5个句子。可以去掉填充词(例如 uh)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy detective novels because the characters are vivid and the plots keep me guessing. For example, I like how clues are revealed gradually, which makes the ending satisfying.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答清晰但可以更完整。直接给出总体偏好并补充一两条具体原因,用连词使表达更连贯。避免只以学校规则作为唯一理由,展示个人偏好和具体好处。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable and helps me focus. At school we also have to use paper since electronic devices aren’t allowed, but even outside school I find paper easier for long texts.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 句子语法和用词需要改进并去掉重复。应先给出直接回答,再用具体例子说明何时不需要仔细阅读。注意时态和冠词,纠正重复或多余短语,使句子更简洁。
Ví dụ: I need to read carefully during exams because small mistakes can lose marks and I must follow instructions exactly. By contrast, I don’t read carefully when skimming news headlines or casual social media posts.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 表达需更地道并修正词形(detailed reading 而非 details reading)。可以加入具体原因和短例说明为何偏好精读,用连接词提高连贯性并控制句数。
Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because I enjoy getting into the story and understanding characters fully. For instance, when I read novels I go word by word to appreciate the author's style and clues in the plot.
× I enjoy reading the detective novels.
✓ I enjoy reading detective novels.
原句中定冠词“the”不合适,因为这里泛指侦探小说这一类,而非特定的、已知的那些小说。应去掉“the”。(定冠词用法错误,参见Grammar Problem Type ID 27/17)
× This is because, uh, the characteristics in the book are vivid and I think it is so interesting.
✓ This is because the characters in the book are vivid, and I think it is very interesting.
原句中"characteristics"用错,描述人物性格应使用"characters"(名词)。另外口语停顿词“uh”可去掉,且"so"在此处不太恰当,改为"very"更自然。整体为词汇选择与句子表达问题,属于现在时描述(Grammar Problem Type 6相关)。
× Well, during the examination I need to reading carefully because even small mistakes can cost can cost Marks and I need to an exact reading exact instructions.
✓ Well, during examinations I need to read carefully because even small mistakes can cost marks and I need to read the exact instructions.
存在多处问题:1) "need to reading" 中动词不定式后应接原形动词,应为"need to read"(主谓搭配/动词形式错误,参见Grammar Problem Type 27和8)。2) 重复"can cost"重复出现,应删去重复词。3) "Marks" 不需大写且在泛指考试分数时用小写"marks"或改为"points"。4) "I need to an exact reading exact instructions" 结构混乱,应为"I need to read the exact instructions",使用定冠词“the”指代考试中具体的说明。整体修改遵循时态和句子结构正确性。
× I prefer details reading because I enjoy reading stories and read word by word.
✓ I prefer detailed reading because I enjoy reading stories and reading word by word.
原句中"details reading" 使用错误的名词形式,正确应为形容词"detailed"修饰名词"reading"(动名词短语)。另外并列结构中需保持动词形式一致,前后都应使用动名词,故将最后的"read"改为"reading"。这些属于动词+ -ing形式与形容词/名词形式使用错误(Grammar Problem Type 8 和 13)。
× Well, at school I prefer to read on paper because we are not allowed to use electronic devices.
✓ Well, at school I prefer to read on paper because we are not allowed to use electronic devices.
该句语法正确,无需改动。保留原句。