Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like reading. I usually reading the books about self growth because it can help me gain practical insights and improve myself constantly.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I prefer reading on paper because it feels more tangible and it can helps me concentrate better. For example, when I study for exams, I find that highlighting make makes it easier to remember information.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
When I read to prepare exams, I need to read very carefully and word by word to remember the information. However, when I read just for relaxing, I can scan them too quickly.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
I don't particularly prefer scanning or detailed reading and it depends on what my purpose is when I read. For relaxing I usually choose scanning when I but when I preparing for the exams I usually choose the detailed reading.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 语言要更自然、句子更准确并避免语法错误。回答时先直接回应(topic sentence),然后用一到两句支持细节;注意动词形式、冠词和词序。可以把“self growth”改为“self‑development”或“personal development”,把“I usually reading”改为“I usually read”,并简化表达避免冗长。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read books on personal development because they give me practical insights and help me improve my habits and thinking.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 注意单复数和动词形式,避免重复词及拼写错误。先给出明确立场,然后用具体原因和例子支持。将“it can helps”改为“it helps”,并改正“make makes”为“makes”。可补充少量细节使理由更具体。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more tangible and helps me focus. For example, when I prepare for exams I can underline and highlight key points, which makes it easier to remember important facts.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,但可改进用词和流畅度。避免逐字逐句(word by word)等略绝对的表达,使用更自然的短语如“in detail”。此外注意名词一致性,'scan them too quickly'可改为'scan quickly'或'skim them'.
Ví dụ: I need to read very carefully when I’m studying for exams, so I usually read texts in detail to remember the facts. However, when I read for relaxation I tend to skim quickly to get the general idea.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 句子有重复和语法错误,表达不够简洁。先给出总观点,再用一两句举例支持。修正语法(e.g. 'when I but when I preparing')和时态,减少重复。可用连词(however, but, when)更好地组织句子。
Ví dụ: I don’t have a fixed preference; it depends on my purpose. For relaxation I usually skim the material, but when I’m preparing for exams I read in detail and take notes to remember key points.
× I usually reading the books about self growth because it can help me gain practical insights and improve myself constantly.
✓ I usually read books about self-growth because they can help me gain practical insights and improve myself constantly.
错误类型:动词后接 -ing(动名词/现在分词)使用不当。原句中的 “I usually reading” 在一般现在时应使用动词原形/第三人称时加 -s,因此应改为 “I usually read”。另外,"the books about self growth" 可精简为 "books about self-growth",并将代词与复数名词一致(they 对应 books)。建议:一般现在时表习惯动作时用动词原形(I/you/we/they + 动词原形;he/she/it + 动词+s)。
× I prefer reading on paper because it feels more tangible and it can helps me concentrate better.
✓ I prefer reading on paper because it feels more tangible and it can help me concentrate better.
错误类型:第三人称单数动词形式错误。结构 “it can helps” 中情态动词 can 后应接动词原形 help,而不能接加 s 的形式。建议:情态动词后始终使用动词原形(can + V)。
× For example, when I study for exams, I find that highlighting make makes it easier to remember information.
✓ For example, when I study for exams, I find that highlighting makes it easier to remember information.
错误类型:此句主要是动词形式错误(makes 重复拼写并且主谓不一致),但也涉及单词重复。原句 “highlighting make makes” 有重复与主谓不一致问题。正确结构是主语 highlighting(动名词,单数)+ 谓语 makes(第三人称单数)。建议:确认主语是单数时动词要加 -s,且避免单词重复/打字错误。
× When I read to prepare exams, I need to read very carefully and word by word to remember the information.
✓ When I read to prepare for exams, I need to read very carefully, word by word, to remember the information.
错误类型:现在时用法与介词搭配问题。此句主要问题是缺少介词 for:应为 'prepare for exams'。同时加逗号更清晰。建议:固定搭配是 prepare for (something),注意短语动词与介词的使用。
× However, when I read just for relaxing, I can scan them too quickly.
✓ However, when I read just to relax, I can scan them too quickly.
错误类型:介词/不定式使用不当。短语应为 'read to relax' 而不是 'read for relaxing';此外,代词 them 指代前文 books,句子语义可接受,但也可改为 'scan too quickly'。建议:表示目的常用 to + 动词原形(to relax),而不是 for + 动名词。
× I don't particularly prefer scanning or detailed reading and it depends on what my purpose is when I read.
✓ I don't particularly prefer either scanning or detailed reading; it depends on what my purpose is when I read.
错误类型:句子结构问题与连词使用。原句缺少 either 导致二选一结构不清晰,且两个独立分句最好用分号或连词分开。建议:在否定选择时用 'don't ... either' 或 'don't ... particularly prefer either A or B',并用合适的连接标点。
× For relaxing I usually choose scanning when I but when I preparing for the exams I usually choose the detailed reading.
✓ For relaxing I usually choose scanning, but when I am preparing for exams I usually choose detailed reading.
错误类型:现在时与动词形式使用错误。原句 'when I preparing' 缺少助动词 am,正确为 'when I am preparing';另外 'when I but when I preparing' 语序混乱,应加入逗号并去掉多余的 'the'(通常说 'preparing for exams' 或 'the exams' 二者可用,但保持一致)。建议:进行时态(be + -ing)需有适当的 be 动词;注意句子连接处用逗号 + but。