Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Well, to be honest, I'm not a reading lover, but as a college student I usually read the novels on my mobile phone after classes to relax myself.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I prefer to read on a screen because it's more convenient. I don't bring lot of books with me and I can read whenever and wherever. What's more, they can store diverse books on it.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
Well, for me I always browse the articles for relaxing, but if I face the difficulties to understand, I will slow down and read it carefully.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
I prefer skiing because in the fast-paced area we have a limited time to read so scanning save our time and can get the meanings of the articles quickly.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且内容相关,但有冗余且有语法与用词不够地道的问题。建议:1) 开头直接给出主题句,如“Yes, I enjoy reading, but mainly for relaxation.”或“No, I'm not a big reader.” 2) 精简句子,避免不必要的短语(如“to be honest”可酌情使用)。3) 修改不地道的表达(如“reading lover”应为“avid reader”或“big reader”),并用一到两句补充具体细节(什么时候阅读、阅读什么类型)。4) 控制在最多5句内并使用连接词使句子连贯,如“so”或“because”。
Ví dụ: No, I'm not a big reader, but I often read novels on my phone after classes to relax because it's convenient and helps me unwind.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答清晰且理由明确,但存在小范围语法与词汇问题,且句子可更连贯。建议:1) 开始用主题句直接回答,例如“I prefer reading on a screen.” 2) 用准确的短语替换错误表达(如“don't bring lot of books”→“don't carry many books”)。3) 使用连接词(for example, furthermore)连贯理由。4) 提供更具体的例子或偏好(比如提到电子书的注释功能或字体大小)。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient; I don't usually carry many books, and my phone lets me read anywhere. Furthermore, e-books can store many titles and I can adjust the font size for comfort.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 74.0Gợi ý: 回答思路正确,但表述有语法和词汇问题,且可更具体。建议:1) 用更自然的开头直接回应,如“I usually skim when I'm relaxing, but I read carefully when the material is difficult.” 2) 改正句子结构(如“if I face the difficulties to understand”→“if I have difficulty understanding it”)。3) 给出具体情境和例子说明何时需要细读(学术文章、技术手册等)。4) 保持句子数量不超过5句并使用连接词如“however”或“so”。
Ví dụ: I usually skim articles when I'm reading for relaxation, but if I encounter difficult material—such as academic papers or technical instructions—I slow down and read carefully to fully understand the meaning.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答有语义错误和多处语法问题(把“scanning”误说成“skiing”),需要更精准和连贯的表达。建议:1) 正确使用词汇(scanning而非skiing)。2) 开头直接回答并解释理由,如“I prefer scanning because...” 3) 改正语法(例如“scanning saves time and helps me grasp the main ideas quickly”)。4) 给出具体场景或比较(什么时候会选择细读,如准备考试或写论文)。
Ví dụ: I prefer scanning because, in a busy environment, it saves time and helps me quickly grasp the main ideas. However, I switch to detailed reading when I need to study for exams or write assignments.
× Well, to be honest, I'm not a reading lover, but as a college student I usually read the novels on my mobile phone after classes to relax myself.
✓ Well, to be honest, I'm not a big reader, but as a college student I usually read novels on my mobile phone after classes to relax.
错误类型:形容词/副词使用不当。说明:原句中“a reading lover”不是地道表达,英语常用“a big reader”或“an avid reader”。此外“the novels”不需要定冠词,用复数名词“novels”更自然;“relax myself”在此处冗余,通常直接用“relax”。建议:用更自然的搭配如“a big reader”或“an avid reader”,省略不必要的代词短语。
× I don't bring lot of books with me and I can read whenever and wherever.
✓ I don't bring a lot of books with me, and I can read whenever and wherever I am.
错误类型:冠词错误。说明:短语“lot of”前需加不定冠词“a”;句末省略主语/动词使结构不完整,需补充“I am”或类似表达。建议:使用“a lot of books”并保持句子完整,例如加上‘I am’以明确时间/地点。
× What's more, they can store diverse books on it.
✓ What's more, it can store a variety of books.
错误类型:介词使用不当/搭配不当。说明:原句把手机作为复数代词“they”,但前文指“screen/phone”为单数,应使用“it”;“store diverse books on it”中“on it”不自然,通常说“store books on it”虽可但更常用“it can store a variety of books”或“store diverse books”不加“on it”。建议:主谓一致并用更自然短语“a variety of books”。
× Well, for me I always browse the articles for relaxing, but if I face the difficulties to understand, I will slow down and read it carefully.
✓ Well, for me I always browse articles to relax, but if I encounter difficulties understanding them, I slow down and read them carefully.
错误类型:现在时使用不当及代词不一致。说明:"browse the articles for relaxing"中不定式/动名词搭配不自然,改为“browse articles to relax”;条件句中用现在时更自然(一般现在时表示真实条件),因此将“if I face”改为“if I encounter”;“difficulties to understand”应为“difficulties understanding”;代词要与复数“articles”一致,用“them”;将“will slow down”改为现在时“slow down”以匹配习惯用法。建议:在表达习惯动作或真实条件时使用一般现在时,注意代词数一致并用自然动词搭配(encounter difficulties / difficulties understanding)。
× I prefer skiing because in the fast-paced area we have a limited time to read so scanning save our time and can get the meanings of the articles quickly.
✓ I prefer scanning because in a fast-paced environment we have limited time to read, so scanning saves us time and helps us get the meaning of articles quickly.
错误类型:句子结构错误。说明:原句中“I prefer skiing”拼写/用词错误,应为“scanning”而非“skiing”。“the fast-paced area”不自然,应为“a fast-paced environment”;“so scanning save our time”主谓不一致,应为“scanning saves our time”或“saves us time”;“can get the meanings of the articles”结构不完整,需加主语(helps us get)且“meanings”改为单数“meaning”更符合语境。建议:注意单词拼写(scanning vs skiing)、主谓一致、自然搭配(fast-paced environment, saves us time, help(s) us get the meaning)。