Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like reading. When I was a little child my parents always encouraged me to read more classical and historical books and I also think this is a good habit to connect with the culture so I persist it on and till now I also.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I prefer to read on screen because I think it's more convenient and suitable for me to read, umm, long sentences and three books because I think classical books with paper paper is.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
If I have an exam I definitely would read carefully and when I come across some interesting plot and I will read carefully. But if I just want to do some tarot reading I will.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
I prefer scanning because I usually read on digital devices and I think it's a terrible and relaxing way to search for something I'm interested and it's like a relaxation for me. But.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接且句子更简练;注意时态和语法(如“a little child”→“a child”,“persist it on”不正确);增加一到两个具体细节并用连接词衔接。可把回答控制在3-4句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. My parents encouraged me to read classical and historical books when I was a child, so I developed the habit early on. Because of that, I still read historical novels regularly to learn about different cultures.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 答案不清晰且有重复杂音(“umm”,“paper paper”);逻辑混乱(“long sentences and three books”不明确)。建议先给直接结论,再用一到两句具体原因并用连接词(because, so)表述。避免填充词。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and portable. For example, I can carry many books on my tablet and adjust the font size, which makes reading long articles easier.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答结构不完整,句尾含糊(“I will”没有接动词或补充);用连贯的对比结构回答两个场景,给出具体例子说明为何仔细或不仔细,避免重复。
Ví dụ: I read carefully when studying for exams or when I encounter a complex plot in a novel because I need to understand details and implications. In contrast, I skim articles or light readings, like horoscopes, when I just want quick entertainment.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答存在语义问题(“terrible and relaxing”互相矛盾)和未完句;要给出明确立场并用逻辑词解释原因,提供具体情境说明何时会精读或略读。保持句子简洁。
Ví dụ: I prefer scanning most of the time because I often read on digital devices and I want to find information quickly. However, I do detailed reading for materials that require deep understanding, such as academic articles or important reports.
× When I was a little child my parents always encouraged me to read more classical and historical books and I also think this is a good habit to connect with the culture so I persist it on and till now I also.
✓ When I was a child, my parents always encouraged me to read more classical and historical books, and I still think it is a good habit to connect with culture, so I have persisted with it until now.
句子结构混乱且时态与表达不一致。原句中有冗余短语("a little child" 可简化为 "a child"),并且 "I persist it on and till now I also" 不是正确的英语表达。建议将句子分为几部分:使用过去时描述父母的行为("encouraged"),使用现在完成时描述从过去延续到现在的习惯("have persisted"),并用合适的介词短语("persisted with it" 或 "kept it up")。
× I prefer to read on screen because I think it's more convenient and suitable for me to read, umm, long sentences and three books because I think classical books with paper paper is.
✓ I prefer to read on a screen because I think it's more convenient and suitable for me to read long texts and many books, while I think classical books are better on paper.
原句时态本身可用,但句子逻辑和用词("long sentences and three books"、"paper paper is")不正确,属于句子结构与词汇搭配问题。将 "long sentences and three books" 改为语义更通顺的 "long texts and many books",并把关于传统书籍的看法改为完整句子("classical books are better on paper")。
× If I have an exam I definitely would read carefully and when I come across some interesting plot and I will read carefully. But if I just want to do some tarot reading I will.
✓ If I have an exam, I will definitely read carefully, and when I come across an interesting plot, I will read carefully too. But if I just want to do some light reading, I won't.
原句时态和助动词使用混杂("would" 与条件不匹配,后半句不完整)。在真实条件句中,用 "will" 更合适;此外 "tarot reading" 可能与上下文不符,推测为 "light reading"(轻松阅读)。最后一句不完整,需补全否定形式以表达不仔细阅读的意思。
× I prefer scanning because I usually read on digital devices and I think it's a terrible and relaxing way to search for something I'm interested and it's like a relaxation for me. But.
✓ I prefer scanning because I usually read on digital devices, and I think it's a quick and relaxing way to search for things I'm interested in; it's a form of relaxation for me.
原句存在语义矛盾("terrible and relaxing")和句尾不完整(单独的 "But.")。将 "terrible" 改为合适的形容词 "quick",并修正搭配("search for things I'm interested in"),同时把断句补全为完整表达。