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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like reading?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like to read and I often read once a week because it broadens my horizons. It gives me different perspectives and subjects, which prevents intellectual stagnation.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?

Thí sinh

I prefer physical books because reading online sometimes strains my eyes due to blue light.

Giám khảo

When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

Thí sinh

I tend to read carefully when the story reaches its climax because I don't want to miss any detail.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

Thí sinh

It depends. If the story comes to a scene that is not really important, I'd rather choose scanning. However, if I want to know more about a specific character, I will prefer detailed reading.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.5Phát âm: 6.5Ngữ pháp: 6.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like reading?

Điểm: 86.0

Gợi ý: 回答自然且内容丰富,但句子略长且有轻微重复(broaden my horizons 与 different perspectives 重复意思)。建议压缩句子结构,先给出明确的主题句,然后用1-2个具体细节支持,避免重复表达,并注意语法细节(如频率表达可用“once a week”或“about once a week”)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading; I read about once a week. Reading exposes me to different cultures and ideas, which keeps me curious and helps me think more creatively.

Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?

Điểm: 92.0

Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,理由明确。可以通过加入一两个具体细节(例如触感、收藏性或专注度)使答案更具体并显示更丰富的词汇,同时使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer physical books because they feel better to hold and don’t cause eye strain like screens do. Also, I find it easier to concentrate when I read a printed book.

When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

Điểm: 88.0

Gợi ý: 回答有针对性且自然,但可以扩展说明何时不需要仔细阅读作为对比,并用连接词衔接两部分,使结构更完整。例如补充说明在哪些情况下会采用略读或跳读,并给出原因或例子。

Ví dụ: I read carefully during a story’s climax because I don’t want to miss important plot developments. By contrast, I skim background chapters or repetitive descriptions when I’m mainly interested in the main events.

Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

Điểm: 90.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰并用了对比连接词,但可改进为更自然的表达(例如用“scan”作为动词无需名词形式),并加入具体例子或短原因来增强说服力。注意时态与语气的一致性(I'd rather scan / I prefer detailed reading)。

Ví dụ: It depends: I usually scan passages that only provide background information, because they slow the pace. However, I read in detail when scenes reveal a character’s motives or emotions so I can better understand them.

Ngữ pháp

8: Verb + -ing form

× I like to read and I often read once a week because it broadens my horizons.

I like reading and I often read once a week because it broadens my horizons.

句中使用不定式和动名词都可表示“喜欢”,但在谈到习惯性或泛指的喜好时,使用动名词(reading)更自然。建议将“like to read”改为“like reading”以保持风格一致。

20: Incorrect adverb placement

× I prefer physical books because reading online sometimes strains my eyes due to blue light.

I prefer physical books because reading online sometimes strains my eyes due to the blue light.

英文中当特指某一类已知的光(如屏幕发出的蓝光)时,通常在名词前加定冠词“the”。此外,副词位置正确,但缺少冠词,故修正为“the blue light”。(注意:若不特指,也可不加冠词;此处为更自然的表述建议使用定冠词。)

6: Present tense issue

× I tend to read carefully when the story reaches its climax because I don't want to miss any detail.

I tend to read carefully when the story reaches its climax because I don't want to miss any details.

“detail”在这里指多个细节,应使用复数“details”。原句的单数与语义不匹配,属数的使用问题(复数/单数),但也归入现在时语境下的名词数形式调整,故修改为复数以符合语义。

26: Sentence structure errors

× If the story comes to a scene that is not really important, I'd rather choose scanning.

If the story reaches a scene that is not really important, I'd rather scan it.

原句中“comes to a scene”不如“reaches a scene”自然;另外“choose scanning”结构生硬,通常用动词短语“rather scan it”表示更自然和简洁。将句子改为“reaches... rather scan it”以改善句子结构和可读性。

6: Present tense issue

× However, if I want to know more about a specific character, I will prefer detailed reading.

However, if I want to know more about a specific character, I prefer detailed reading.

在条件句(if)表示一般现在时的情况下,主句通常使用一般现在时而不是“will + 动词”。“I will prefer”听起来不自然;改为“I prefer”更符合习惯表达,表示在这种情况下的常态倾向。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
LightBright; Animate; Flimsy; Nimble; Gentle
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